GRE寫作這5種低級語法錯誤不能忍

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GRE寫作這5種低級語法錯誤不能忍 這些不規(guī)范寫法用法趕緊改正

不一致問題

所謂不一致不光指主謂不一致，還包括了單復(fù)數(shù)不一致、時態(tài)不一致以及代詞不一致等。比如：When one have money, he can do what he want to.

分析：one是第三人稱單數(shù)，因此本句的have應(yīng)改為has; want應(yīng)改為wants, 本句是典型的主謂不一致。

改為：When one has money, he can do what he wants (to do).

修飾語錯位

英語與漢語不同，同一個修飾語置于句子不同的位置，句子的含義可能引起變化。對于這一點考生們往往沒有引起足夠的重視，因而造成了不必要的誤解。比如：I believe I can do it well and I will better know the world outside the campus.

分析：better位置不當(dāng)，應(yīng)置于句末。

句子不完整

在口語中，交際雙方可借助手勢語氣上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解?？墒菚嬲Z就不同了，句子結(jié)構(gòu)不完整會令意思表達不清，這種情況常常在主句寫完以后，作者又想加些補充說明時發(fā)生。比如：There are many ways to know the society. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.

分析：本句后半部分"For example by TV, radio, newspaper and so on.”不是一個完整的句子，僅為一些不連貫的詞語，不能獨立成句。

改為：There are many ways to know society, for example, by TV, radio, and newspaper.

懸垂修飾語

所謂懸垂修飾語是指句首的短語與后面句子的邏輯關(guān)系混亂不清。比如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died. 這句中"at the age of ten"只寫出十歲時，但沒有說明“誰”十歲時，按一般推理不可能是my grandfather, 如果我們把這個懸垂修飾語改得明確一點，讀者或考官在讀句子時就不會誤解了。

改為：When I was ten, my grandfather died.

詞性誤用

“詞性誤用”常表現(xiàn)為：介詞當(dāng)動詞用;形容詞當(dāng)副詞用;名詞當(dāng)動詞用等。比如：None can negative the importance of money.

分析：negative系形容詞，誤作動詞。

改為：None can deny the importance of money.

以上就是GRE寫作中常見的各類語法錯誤匯總，希望大家能夠在寫作時加強注意，避免此類錯誤的發(fā)生。

GRE issue寫作優(yōu)秀實例：道德與法律

題目：

Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system because moral behavior cannot be legislated.

現(xiàn)代社會的很多問題是法律和立法系統(tǒng)無法解決的，因為道德行為是無法用法律約束的。

正文：

The proposition asserts that the laws and the legal system cannot resolve many problems problem of the modern society since moral behavior cannot be legislated. In my point of view, I fundamentally agree with the speaker, as discussed below.

First of all, I concede that the laws and the legal system are essential to the modern society and they can resolve many problems. Common sense tells us that everyone has his own position and behavior, depending on their beliefs, experiences, knowledge, professions and emotional concern.However, we cannot simply let everyone do everything that he or she wants, since this will lead to mess and may harm the stability of the society. Thus, the government has to announce the laws and build a just legal system to restrict the citizens. Only by doing this, can the society get to a balance and harmonious status? For instance, the industrial factories want to expel the polluted water into the river without making it clean. If there is not a law or a legal system to restrict the factories from expelling the polluted water, the poisoned water may get into the river, even the sea. This will be really harmful. It may firstly kill the animals living in the river, it may also further harm the human beings if they have drunk the water or eaten the polluted fish. It may bring damage to the environment as well. Considering this, we have to establish laws to prevent the factories from expelling polluted water and other detriments. From this case, we can see how important laws and legal systems are.

However, we have to admit that the laws and the legal systems cannot resolve many problems in the modern society as well, such as the usage of euthanasia, the homosexual marriage. When the Watson and Crick found the double-helix structure of the gene and the scientists further found the way to clone. It brings many social problems that the laws and legal systems cannot resolve. Should the scientists clone human beings? If yes, then what is the relationship between the two? Do the cloned people have the same right with the other human being or even whether they are human beings or not? Though the legal systems in many countries ban the scientists from cloning people, some scientists still do this secretly. All these questions cannot simply be resolved by the laws as it is related to the morality.

Additionally, the laws can not involve the moral behavior. If the laws consider the moral behaviors too much, it will lose justice. Nevertheless, only considering the laws without morals may cause mistake. For instance, in India, their law is statutes given by the government and the judge can only his judges on the bases of the existing laws. Once, a mother in India killed her son,who is a murderer and did lots of bad things. The police in India tried to catch him for years without any result. He committed so many crimes that even death cannot atone for the offence.His mother knows that her son will kill many more people if she does not kill him. Thus, when her son came back to see her one day, she killed him with the poison. In this case, to kill the mother is probably not the best choice, since this may make people think that being just is wrong. But according to the present law, the judger had to sentenced the mother to death, and this brought a widely debate thought out the country.

Further, only the morality can make people to understand what is right and what is wrong, and to restrict people with morality will be a good way. Under the pressure of laws and legal systems,many people just do the bad thing secretly because they do not know that they are wrong. And many people may even think that the laws are wrong and disobey or even resist the law. They may commit crimes again after they are punished. Only when a people have known the morality and find the right measurement to distinguish right and wrong, they can find their mistakes and become a better person. A statistics involving many prisons in China find that the prisoners who learn morality and know their mistakes have a much lower rate of committing crime again.

In the final analysis, we can see that the laws and legal system cannot resolve all the problems in the society and therefore we should agree with the author.

GRE 寫作優(yōu)秀實例：知識讓事情變得神秘

題目：

As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious.

當(dāng)我們獲得越來越多的知識，事情并沒有變的更加透徹，相反是變的更復(fù)雜更神秘。

正文：

With the development of the society, natural science and social science help people learn more about the world and the things seems to be clear, actually, under some circumstance, in-depth researches on things cause three consequences at the some time: comprehensible, complex and mysterious rather than merely understand.

Accumulated knowledge helps problems or theories to be expressed clearly and lucidly so that people feel easy to understand the issues. For example, Galileo, who was a famous Italian astronomer who despise the prejudices and book learning of the Aristotelians, who put his question to the nature instead of the ancient, and who drew his conclusion fearlessly. Eventually, his experiment and observation established a new theory and overthrew the old one from Aristotle. Because of his success and theories,people learn how to observe the sky with telescope and begin to understand another space, which is far from the earth. Obviously, without knowledge from Galileo’s theory, universe might also be a inspiration and even a vacancy. Take another scientist for example, Edison, who invented electric bulb by making thousand experiment and brought the society into a brilliant century. Recently, people live in a society which full of light and help them to learn what they can see and observe. With the revolution of human beings, knowledge solves various problems and creates a more comprehensible and comfortable life to the people.

However, those knowledge makes us to considered the reason and origin for human nature of curiosity, as a result, the world become increasingly complex. Take the same instance what have pointed above, although people learn to use telescope to observe the sky, people unsatisfied with such a "observation" and desire to touch with the outer space and understand other planets. In this case, scientists invented the spacecraft which have successfully landed on the Moon and Mars, after these experiments, people know that there are no water and few gravitation in Moon, and the Mas might have the similar condition of the earth. however, the complex problems come out, because people feel difficulty to explain the phenomena in the outer space.

Therefore, the research on astronomy becomes complex and involved. Not only this field, but also all scientific area becomes complicate. When people understand a surface of things, they will feel anxious to learn the core of them, however, the deeper people do researches, the more complications exist.

Additionally, in-depth learning causes desire of researching for mystery, which follows the existence of complication. Indeed, there are many uncanny problems in process of doing research when people hope to point out the reason of complex issue. For example, the construction of pyramid has been an enigma for a long time, because people fail to imagine that the ancient people can construct such a palatial with old and traditional method. Moreover, "black hole" would be a mysterious place that astronomers desire to touch and understand because no one know a little about this untouched field. Faced with these things, human nature motivates and stimulates people to purchase the reason and the secret.

In sum, people learn more about things by accumulating knowledge and then establish new theory and system, and at the same time, complex and mysterious problems exist simultaneously for the desire of exploring secret and untouched field-all of these constitute a process of learning and researching

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