高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導(dǎo)整合

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高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導(dǎo)

2 、"Competition is ultimately more benefici al than detrimental to society."

.意，防止不良競爭

1、經(jīng)濟(jì)領(lǐng)域，競爭可以提高產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量，促進(jìn)創(chuàng)新更好的質(zhì)量、服務(wù)、創(chuàng)新的動力，消費者受益

2、政治領(lǐng)域，競爭可以選出最有能力的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者，人民受益競爭中，領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者承諾福利，個人能力;防止無能政府

3、不良競爭對社會帶來問題，如壓力，不正當(dāng)競爭，學(xué)生成績競爭;工作崗位競爭;immoral 競爭，slag off behind the back

2T "Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society."

歸根結(jié)底，競爭對于社會是利多弊少。

①使得更有效率。A 同事之間競爭 B優(yōu)勝劣汰

②增加社會福利。如：競選時，使得民眾對于該選誰更清晰。

③當(dāng)競爭失控時，會有問題。如：超出法律和道德的界限

④導(dǎo)致社會上人們普遍壓力增大

Through competing, the one who is most eligible is put on the right place, and then will produce much more values than those who are not competent as he or she.

While, on the other hand, if a competition is fraught with adulteration and illegality, it will bring deterioration to the society rather than progress. A case in point is related to market economy.

高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導(dǎo)

3 、"It is more important to allocate money for immediate, existing social problems than to

spend it on long-term research that might help future generations."

.期問題長遠(yuǎn)研究都要重視

1、誠然，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)把錢用在當(dāng)前的社會問題上，如：發(fā)展經(jīng)濟(jì)，解決失業(yè)、犯罪 poverty, disease, war等，因為這些社會問題可能嚴(yán)重危害人們的生命、財產(chǎn)安全;

vaccinate the children in poor African coutri es where hygiene conditions are unqualified

2、然而，我們同時也應(yīng)當(dāng)將錢用于長期的研究很多問題不能馬上解決，用于長期研究才能根治，如環(huán)境問題，需要植樹造林為未來長遠(yuǎn)規(guī)劃，環(huán)境才能從根本上得以改善;如科學(xué)研究不是一朝一夕的事

long-term research devotes to resolving or prev enting social problems that might occur to our descendants; preserve the environment from deteri oration is easier than resolving those already emerged enironmental problems which jeopardize the ecosystem

.果只顧眼前，不顧未來，對后代生活造成嚴(yán)重影響，不搞節(jié)能研究，能源問題

Immediate, existing problems 好比急性疾病對于人體一樣常常關(guān)系到社會的穩(wěn)定，經(jīng)濟(jì)的運行，國家的存亡，解決不好后果十分嚴(yán)重。比如失業(yè)問題引起政府稅收增加，不利于企業(yè)發(fā)展，事業(yè)人經(jīng)濟(jì)緊張，購買力下降進(jìn)一步阻礙經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展。附加的貧富差距引起社會階級對立，矛盾加劇的話引起社會動亂，有些問題是短時間內(nèi)不能解決的，需要長期幾代人不懈的努力與規(guī)劃。提高人的道德素質(zhì)需要一點一滴的逐漸培養(yǎng)不可能一下子解決，預(yù)防.....制度的完善需要長期的研究與實踐，這些與 human nature有關(guān)的問題從來沒有被解決過。

當(dāng)代人對于后代有責(zé)任，比如環(huán)境的惡化，能源的消耗，對后代造成了不良影響，需要研究未來的能源危機與對策。需要針對環(huán)境的惡化做出補救措施，而且生態(tài)的恢復(fù)也是一個長期過程。

3T "It is more important to allocate money for immedi ate, existing social problems than to spend it on long-term research that might help future generations."

與其花錢進(jìn)行可能有助于后代的長期性研究，還不如把錢花在迫在眉睫，已經(jīng)存在的社會問題上。

①花錢解決現(xiàn)在的問題很合理，特別是很緊急的問題。如：tsunami

②有些問題不是現(xiàn)在就能解決的。需要長遠(yuǎn)的規(guī)劃。貧困問題、犯罪問題，有關(guān) human nature 的問題從歷史上看從來沒有真正得到解決過。

③我們對未來負(fù)有責(zé)任。 A一方面，我們的行為造成了他們的損失。能源上，環(huán)境上。B 從道德上說，人與動物的區(qū)別在于我們會感情上認(rèn)為應(yīng)對后代負(fù)責(zé)。

When we enjoy the fruits of industrialization and democracy, we are, on the other side, confronted with social problems brought by as another consequence of this process.

Firstly, immediate, existing social problems that ba ffled us deeply need to be resolved as quickly as possible so to restore a sound society and improve its healthy development.

However, many present social problems cannot be resolved immediately as we hoped.

Furthermore, neglecting long-term researches that may help future generations, overemphasizing to focus on the present problems, may result in incomp lete resolution to these social problems, which can merely be an expedience rather than a resolution.

高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導(dǎo)

9"Academic disciplines have become so specia lized in recent years that scholars' ideas reach only a narrow audience. Until scholars can reach a wider audience, their ideas will have little use."

.分同意

1、承認(rèn)現(xiàn)代學(xué)科研究確實專業(yè)化很強，學(xué)科之間互不了解領(lǐng)域之間不了解，同領(lǐng)域的不同方向之間不了解

2、學(xué)科研究確實需要讓更多的人理解，促進(jìn)交流，相互啟發(fā)

define wider audience as people of other disciplines within the same field or relevant field; physics and mathematics; chemistry and biology; achievenments in one discipline can shed light on other discipline

3、但研究也不需要讓非該領(lǐng)域的所有人都理解

define wider audien ce as people outside academic field; the re search on computer science; people still can benefit from the application of those ideas even though they do not un der stand the underlying principles

9T "Academic disciplines have become so specialized in recent years that scholars' ideas reach only a narrow audience. Until scholars can reach a wider audience, their ideas will have little use."

.年來學(xué)術(shù)領(lǐng)域更加專業(yè)化，以至于學(xué)者門的研究只作用于很小范圍內(nèi)的人群。除非學(xué)者們的研究能適合大范圍的人群，他們的想法才有用。

① 現(xiàn)在確實 increasingly narrow. 如：原來 Aristotle 什么都研究，現(xiàn)在的物理學(xué)家只關(guān)注于問題 such as 一個核子如何作用。原來 Confucius 對于國家的各個領(lǐng)域都研究，現(xiàn)在的教育家只研究哪一種教學(xué)方法對一群特定學(xué)生起作用。

② 但科學(xué)家們之間有相互合作。如：Watson and Click DNA

③ 有些領(lǐng)域即使在很小范圍內(nèi)研究，也能服務(wù)于社會。Game theory

As a matter of fact, the more specialized the ideas, the less accessible to them. However, specialization does not have any impact on the value of scholars’ ideas. Actually, it is not necessary for the public to under stand all abstruse ideas scholars hold. For example,most people do not know how the CPU is running in the personal computer, but this does not hamper them to using computers.

高分GRE寫作提綱舉例指導(dǎo)

8 、"It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."

.分同意

1、承認(rèn)為了獲得政治領(lǐng)導(dǎo)權(quán) win the political game需要withhold informaion to gain political power; disclose every personal flaw, shortcoming, foibles opponents will take advantage; no need to be complete honest

2、關(guān)系到 classic information of the government要保留 national defence，attack on drug dealers

3、但在關(guān)系到人民利益的時候隱瞞信息會對人們造成危害，使政府失去信任 the panic caused by SARS derived from China in 2003 was mostly initia ted by the closure of information by the government of Beijing. Lots of citizens are not available to take measures to protect from this deadly disease.

.It is always impossible for the political leaders to reveal everything to the public, especially some the information which can affect the national security. Different nations are competing and even antagonistic. Revealing some information could has no help for the solution but poses negative impact on the stability of a country. Unidentified illness

Withholding information should not be the excuse for political leaders to abuse their power.

Withholding information at their will could provide the chance of corruption, 在不威脅國家安全，社會穩(wěn)定情況下，政府行為應(yīng)該盡可能透明，接受監(jiān)督。

【題目】 "It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public."

【翻譯】對于政治領(lǐng)導(dǎo)者來說，向人民大眾隱瞞信息通常是必要的，甚至有益的。少數(shù)和多數(shù)的關(guān)系之 true lies, the truth is out there.

【提綱】

1、向人民大眾隱瞞一些信息在一些情況下是有必要的，甚至是有宜的，例子，政府準(zhǔn)備到某個 state 進(jìn)行人們生活質(zhì)量的考察，之前就很有必要不要告訴大家，因為如果告訴了 the public ，那么那個state 的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)可能會做一些表明工作，那么考察到的就不是真實情況了【這是看的別人的例子，實在沒想出來】

2、在一些情況下告訴 the public 實情還能幫助政府度過危機【例子就是 SARS 在2002 年在中國，如果不告知民眾，那么很有可能大家不知道如何預(yù)防這種 virus，使得更多的人染上它，但告知后，人民在政府的領(lǐng)導(dǎo)下，降低了感染上這種 virus 的人數(shù)，成功的控制了 virus】

3、總結(jié)

.導(dǎo)對公眾有所保留

一、適當(dāng)?shù)谋Ａ羰潜仨毜?，無論是上臺前還是上臺后 imcompatible 。但長期不行。

二、在上臺前，誠實是無用的美德 Before the political leader is elected, honesty is not a useful virtue for candidates

1.民眾不信任，給對手留空隙

2.沒辦法完全保證承諾能實現(xiàn)，布什的減稅計劃因 911 而沒實現(xiàn)

三、上臺后有時隱瞞信息也是必要的。After being elected, it is advantaged to conceal some information for the leader either.

1.國家安全，國家安全會議

2.經(jīng)濟(jì)利益，海帶豐收

3.公眾容易恐慌，禽流感傳聞

四、on the other hand, people in any democracy will throw down the gauntlet to the goverment’s blackout, or put it bluntly, so-called fooling the public, in the long run.

1、民主社會，人民才是主人

2、 empirical evidence of economy，持續(xù)通脹 counterproductive

3、長期欺騙只有 downfall, abuse, subversi on of administration

8T 個體和整體 政治類 "It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public." 8 . 政治領(lǐng)導(dǎo)們在公眾面前有所保留是必要的，甚至是必須的。

① 在某些情況下，封閉信息是需要。A 如國防 national defense，抓捕犯人 culprit等B 有時群眾了解的信息可能是片面的，引起騷動，還不如不了解 Admittedly, sometimes it is necessary for political leaders to keep the public from know something, such as country’s top secret, which is indispensable and helpful for a country in defending aggression and keeping safety.

② 公開信息更有利于群眾與政府的互動，更利于幫助政府把事情辦好. 如：現(xiàn)在很多地方的政府網(wǎng)站，以及攝像頭等。

③ 公開信息還有一個優(yōu)勢：防止權(quán)力的腐敗 反面說：引起腐敗，and therefore bring detriment to society.

Firstly, political leaders, in a democracy regime, will harm the proper right of people as they withhold information from the public.

Secondly, withholding information from the public will result in corruption in the government, and therefore bring detriment to society.

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