雅思寫作技巧之如何強(qiáng)化重點(diǎn)
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雅思寫作技巧之如何強(qiáng)化重點(diǎn)
首先，強(qiáng)化重點(diǎn)的技巧可以將作文核心句的擺放位置，就是考生常見的把想強(qiáng)調(diào)的內(nèi)容放在句首或句尾。通常句首是最顯眼的部分，考官更容易接收到考生所想要強(qiáng)調(diào)的重點(diǎn)。此外，把重點(diǎn)放在句尾也不失一個(gè)很好的方法，可以引導(dǎo)考官把全句通讀，才能看到重點(diǎn)。這樣能夠加強(qiáng)考官對(duì)你的寫作遣詞造句的能力有一個(gè)綜合的評(píng)價(jià)?？梢詮南骂}例子看出：
重點(diǎn)放句首：Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract readers ‘a(chǎn)ttention.
重點(diǎn)放句尾：The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilization.
其次，強(qiáng)化的技巧就是句法上用倒裝來強(qiáng)調(diào)。對(duì)于雅思寫作而言，最強(qiáng)調(diào)的就是句型的多變，如果考生只用一招來應(yīng)對(duì)強(qiáng)化句子重點(diǎn)的話，很難取得寫作高分。因此，除了放在句首句尾這種簡(jiǎn)單的技巧之外，考生應(yīng)該掌握在復(fù)雜句中如何強(qiáng)化重點(diǎn)。對(duì)于復(fù)雜句的構(gòu)成是主句加從句，所以如果要強(qiáng)化重點(diǎn)的話，考生可以把主句移到從句的后面。通常，除了名詞和形容詞從句之外，由于位置比較固定，所以不能移到從句的后面。像副詞從句和短語，就可以把主句放在從句的后面，進(jìn)行強(qiáng)化作用?？聪旅胬樱?/p>
I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.
副詞從句中主句放后面：
When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.
Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.
副詞短語中主句放后面：
Because of its durability, steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools.
然后，如果考生想進(jìn)一步突出雅思寫作中的句子重點(diǎn)，可以將句子中一系列的項(xiàng)目做邏輯性的排列，進(jìn)行重點(diǎn)的突出。換句話說就是把你所要強(qiáng)調(diào)的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行排序，例如大小，日期，年齡等排序。就好比爬樓梯一樣，指引考官按照你的邏輯性排列一步一步看到你想表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)。如下例：
Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.
Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school and institute of higher education?
接下里，強(qiáng)化重點(diǎn)的技巧可以利用倒裝完成。除了上述雅思寫作技巧之外，還可以對(duì)你想要強(qiáng)調(diào)的重點(diǎn)進(jìn)行重復(fù)?？隙ú皇菃渭兊闹匦聦懸粋€(gè)單詞這么簡(jiǎn)單。對(duì)強(qiáng)調(diào)的重點(diǎn)需要對(duì)句式的把握，以及合理的語法布置。這樣可以強(qiáng)化考官印象，加強(qiáng)中心思想的鞏固。可以看下面例子作為參考：
...the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless rivers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.
最后，強(qiáng)化重點(diǎn)的技巧還可以重復(fù)進(jìn)行實(shí)現(xiàn)?？忌梢愿鶕?jù)自己對(duì)語法掌握的程度，進(jìn)行倒裝句和平行句的運(yùn)用。通過對(duì)句子進(jìn)行倒裝和平行，可以把想要強(qiáng)調(diào)的重點(diǎn)提到最合適的位置，讓考官更直接的看到考生所想表達(dá)的重點(diǎn)，而且還會(huì)讓句子種類變得豐富起來。其實(shí)有效的倒轉(zhuǎn)和平行，可以更精煉句子，能夠在雅思寫作中取得高分。來看看下面的例子。
Seven dwarfs lived here in the center of the dark forest.
改寫為：Here, in the center of the dark forest lived seven dwarfs.
2018年9月8日雅思寫作真題及7分范文：垃圾處理問題
題目為：We have developed a “throw-away” society and are filling the environment with many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. What measures should be taken to combat the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
本周考的是一個(gè)環(huán)境類的老題目。我們現(xiàn)在的社會(huì)是一個(gè)浪費(fèi)型的社會(huì)(a throw-away society)，隨處可見被扔棄不用的東西。本題要求分析這個(gè)現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因及解決辦法。就原因而言，大家可能想到的生活水平提高了，物質(zhì)太豐富了，這是老雅經(jīng)常談到的物質(zhì)層面上的原因。如果我們?cè)偻孪胍幌?，可能就想到，我們亂扔?xùn)|西，可能還有一個(gè)心理層面上的原因：出于方便(out of convenience)。除此之外，當(dāng)然還有一個(gè)社會(huì)層面的原因，即消費(fèi)社會(huì)鼓勵(lì)大家扔棄舊東西，換新時(shí)尚。在這類分析原因類的考題中，大家都可以按照這三個(gè)層面去思考，就容易寫得更有邏輯一些。
就解決辦法而言，無非也就兩條：一是國(guó)家層面，制定法規(guī)，讓大家對(duì)垃圾進(jìn)行分類回收，二是個(gè)人層面，提高大家垃圾回收的意識(shí)。
我們?cè)跇?gòu)思任何一篇雅思作文的時(shí)候，都應(yīng)該寫出層次，這是雅思作文批判思維的基本要求。各位烤鴨應(yīng)該在這方面積累經(jīng)驗(yàn)。
雅思寫作范文
Ours is a “throw-away” society strongly influenced by consumerism as we value convenience over environmental protection. We throw away out of convenience, and societal conventions have us move on to the next fad or technology. For example, we are dumping large quantities of thrash, such as plastic bags and diapers, that we cannot fully dispose of. Likewise, we are discarding televisions, cell phones, computers and other used items in exchange of new ones that unsurprisingly will become our future garbage. Under these circumstances, environmental pollution is the cruel price we have to pay for the consumerism culture in the age of mass production. Even though our society as a whole is increasingly aware of the environmental pollution, more has to be done to prevent the problem from worsening.
我們的社會(huì)是一個(gè)受消費(fèi)主義強(qiáng)烈影響的“浪費(fèi)型”社會(huì)，因?yàn)槲覀兏粗胤奖愣皇黔h(huán)境保護(hù)。出于方便我們隨意扔棄，而社會(huì)習(xí)俗讓我們沖向下一個(gè)時(shí)尚或技術(shù)。例如，我們正在傾倒大量我們無法完全處理的垃圾，比如塑料袋和尿布。同樣，我們正在丟棄電視機(jī)，手機(jī)，電腦和其他舊物品，然后換用新的，而這些新的物品又會(huì)毫不奇怪成為未來的垃圾。在這樣的情況下，環(huán)境污染是我們?yōu)榇笠?guī)模生產(chǎn)時(shí)代的消費(fèi)主義文化所必需付出的殘酷代價(jià)。盡管整個(gè)社會(huì)日益意識(shí)到環(huán)境污染，但仍有更多的工作要做，以防止這個(gè)問題惡化。
In order to relieve the environmental impact of the consumerism culture, we believe that recycling is the most effective solution. It is necessary for governments to make recycling a legal requirement, and “punish” those who throw away recyclable materials. For example, households will be legally required to separate all rubbish into different bins for recycling, on penalties of fines. New waste management rules should be introduced to act as a deterrent and to encourage people to abide by strict recycling standards. At the same time, government-sponsored recycling education programs (through the media) can be useful to increase recycling by changing people’s behavior and create an environment-friendly culture.
為了減輕消費(fèi)主義文化對(duì)環(huán)境的影響，我們認(rèn)為回收是最有效的解決辦法。各國(guó)政府有必要將回收利用作為一項(xiàng)法律要求，并“懲罰”那些扔掉可回收的材料的人。例如，法律可要求家庭將所有垃圾分成不同的垃圾桶進(jìn)行回收，否則處以罰款。應(yīng)該制定新的垃圾管理規(guī)則，將它作為一種威懾，鼓勵(lì)人們遵守嚴(yán)格的回收標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。與此同時(shí)，政府資助的回收教育項(xiàng)目(通過媒體)可以改變?nèi)藗兊男袨閬碓黾踊厥?，并?chuàng)造一種環(huán)境友好型文化。
In conclusion, mandatory laws must be put in place so that people who are used to the lifestyle of convenience will refrain from throwing away plastic bags and rubbish. It is important for governments to make recycling everybody’s business; otherwise, environmental protection might become nobody’s business.
總之，必須制定強(qiáng)制性法律，使習(xí)慣于方便型生活方式的人避免亂扔塑料袋和垃圾。對(duì)政府來說，讓人人都參與回收工作很重要，否則，環(huán)保就變成了無人問津的事。
雅思寫作高分表達(dá)
1. Likewise, we are discarding televisions, cell phones, computers and other used items in exchange of new ones that unsurprisingly will become our future garbage.
同樣，我們正在丟棄電視機(jī)，手機(jī)，電腦和其他舊物品，然后換用新的，而這些新的物品又會(huì)毫不奇怪成為未來的垃圾。
2. Even though our society as a whole is increasingly aware of the environmental pollution, more has to be done to prevent the problem from worsening
盡管整個(gè)社會(huì)日益意識(shí)到環(huán)境污染，但仍有更多的工作要做，以防止這個(gè)問題惡化。
3. At the same time, government-sponsored recycling education programs (through the media) can be useful to increase recycling by changing people’s behavior and create anenvironment-friendly culture.
與此同時(shí)，政府資助的回收教育項(xiàng)目(通過媒體)可以改變?nèi)藗兊男袨閬碓黾踊厥?，并?chuàng)造一種環(huán)境友好型文化。
4. In conclusion, mandatory laws must be put in place so that people who are used to the lifestyle of convenience will refrain from throwing away plastic bags and rubbish.
總之，必須制定強(qiáng)制性法律，使習(xí)慣于方便型生活方式的人避免亂扔塑料袋和垃圾。
5. It is important for governments to make recycling everybody’s business; otherwise, environmental protection might become nobody’s business.
對(duì)政府來說，讓人人都參與回收工作很重要，否則，環(huán)保就變成了無人問津的事。
2018年9月8日雅思大作文寫作真題范文解析：社會(huì)資源浪費(fèi)問題
環(huán)保類話題，Nowadays people are living in a “ thrown-away” society where they use things for a short time and then throw away. What cause this and what problem it may lead to?探討社會(huì)中出現(xiàn)的一次性社會(huì)(浪費(fèi)型社會(huì))的形成原因及影響。
范文解析 本題屬于社會(huì)生活類話題。題目問題要求闡述導(dǎo)致“ thrown-away” society 的原因以及該現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致的問題。屬于說明文類型的文體?？忌诖痤}時(shí)，切忌看清題目要求，不要慣性思維寫原因和解決方法。此外，思考思路時(shí)務(wù)必結(jié)合現(xiàn)實(shí)情況，如個(gè)體本身沒有這樣的習(xí)慣則聯(lián)想身邊有該類特征的人群，以便快速得到論點(diǎn)。
文章結(jié)構(gòu) P1：改寫現(xiàn)象并寫出承接句。
P2：闡述導(dǎo)致該現(xiàn)象的第一個(gè)原因，即市場(chǎng)上有大量便宜的商品。
P3：闡述導(dǎo)致該現(xiàn)象的第二個(gè)原因，即廣告誘導(dǎo)消費(fèi)者追趕潮流從而丟棄舊物品。
P4：闡述該現(xiàn)象導(dǎo)致的問題。第一，造成了環(huán)境污染;第二，造成了不良生活方式。
P5： 總結(jié)上文內(nèi)容。
雅思大作文高分話題表達(dá)
two contributing factors can be identified 兩個(gè)促成(該現(xiàn)象)的理由可以被證實(shí)
it is precisely because of… 正因?yàn)?。。。。?！?/p>
would do sth rather than… 寧愿做。。。。。。而不。。。。。。
brand new 嶄新的
be exposed to 被暴露在。。。。。。之下
glamorous 富有魅力的
dump 丟棄
decompose 分解
landfill 垃圾填埋法
materially abundant but spiritually barren 物質(zhì)豐富但是精神貧瘠
be discouraged from 被阻止。。。。。。
雅思寫作高分結(jié)構(gòu)
it is a ubiquitous tendency that… 同位語從句
the most apparent reason is that… 表語從句
…as much as… 比較狀語
Another ground why…is …. 定語從句
Inevitably,… 副詞放在句首
…, contaminating… 現(xiàn)在分詞做結(jié)果狀語
雅思大作文范文
In this fast-paced society, it is a ubiquitous tendency that modern people throw away things utilized for a short period of time. As far as I am concerned, two contributing factors can be identified as below.
在這個(gè)快節(jié)奏的社會(huì)里，現(xiàn)代的人們拋棄了在短時(shí)間內(nèi)使用的東西，這是一種普遍存在的趨勢(shì)。就我而言，可以確定以下兩個(gè)因素。
The most apparent reason is that massive production conduced by technological advancement renders cheap products are available for most consumers. It is precisely because of the fact, the public do not value what they have owned as much as they used to. A case in the point is that, once the hairdryer worth around 100 yuan fails to function well, its owner would discard it rather than repairing it as the expense of buying a brand new one is not quite high.
最明顯的原因是，由于技術(shù)進(jìn)步，大規(guī)模生產(chǎn)使得大多數(shù)消費(fèi)者都能買到便宜的產(chǎn)品。正因?yàn)槿绱耍姴⒉幌襁^去那樣重視他們所擁有的東西。一個(gè)例子是，一旦價(jià)值約100元的電吹風(fēng)不能正常運(yùn)轉(zhuǎn)，它的主人就會(huì)把它扔掉，而不是修理它，因?yàn)橘徺I一個(gè)全新的品牌的費(fèi)用并不高。
Another ground why people refuse to wear the same dress or use the phone for years is the impact of advertising campaigns. Being exposed to intensive advertisements, which inform customers of new goods whose appearance looks gorgeous and performance seems unparalleled; as well as create a trend for them to chase, it is difficult for viewers to resist the temptation of being fashionable and glamorous by purchasing the latest smart phone or lipsticks. Obviously, the old-fashioned things are dumped in the garbage can.
另一個(gè)原因是，人們拒絕穿同一件衣服或使用手機(jī)多年的原因是廣告宣傳的影響。暴露在密集的廣告中，這些廣告會(huì)讓顧客了解到他們的外表看起來很漂亮，而且表現(xiàn)得無與倫比;除了為他們創(chuàng)造一種追逐的趨勢(shì)，觀眾也很難通過購買最新的智能手機(jī)或口紅來抵制時(shí)尚和迷人的誘惑。很明顯，老式的東西會(huì)被扔進(jìn)垃圾桶里。
Inevitably, this trend gives rise to several problems and the first one is environmental pollution. As a matter of fact, some waste such as electronic and plastic products can be hardly decomposed; worse still, in most cases, landfill is a common approach to dispose them, contaminating the soil and even the underground water. In addition, an unhealthy lifestyle may emerge. In an attempt to become fashion chasers, people especially the younger generation would waste a great deal of money and time on trying diverse commodities, being materially abundant but spiritually barren.
不可避免的是，這一趨勢(shì)引發(fā)了一些問題，第一個(gè)問題是環(huán)境污染。事實(shí)上，一些廢物，如電子和塑料制品，幾乎不能分解;更糟糕的是，在大多數(shù)情況下，垃圾填埋場(chǎng)是一種處理它們的常見方法，污染了土壤甚至地下水。此外，可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)不健康的生活方式。為了成為時(shí)尚的追獵者，尤其是年輕一代，他們會(huì)浪費(fèi)大量的金錢和時(shí)間去嘗試各種各樣的商品，物質(zhì)豐富，但精神上卻貧瘠。
In conclusion, considering detrimental effects of this phenomenon on both environment and individuals, people are discouraged from throwing away old things in daily life.
總之，考慮到這種現(xiàn)象對(duì)環(huán)境和個(gè)人的不利影響，人們不鼓勵(lì)人們?cè)谌粘Ｉ钪衼G棄舊東西。
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