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托福寫作的牛人經(jīng)驗(yàn)

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為了讓大家更好的準(zhǔn)備托福考試,小編給大家整理一些托福寫作小技巧,下面小編就和大家分享,來欣賞一下吧。

托福寫作的牛人經(jīng)驗(yàn)

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我構(gòu)思時,首先做出選擇,一般要選擇你能找到很多理由和例子寫的那個立場來進(jìn)行寫。我選擇了跟人相處好的能力。因?yàn)槲矣X得這個能找到更多的理由和例子,如此而已。千萬慎重從自己內(nèi)心的看法來選擇觀點(diǎn),一是時間花費(fèi)比較長,一是未必后面很好展開。所以建議從技術(shù)層面上選擇一個立場:能找到更多的理由和例子的,好寫的。

第一段是引出話題,一般是講一些廢話然后引出問題并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。我寫的大致意思是:很多能力對學(xué)生以后的成功而言很重要,比如跟人相處好的能力、在學(xué)校里刻苦學(xué)習(xí)等。傳統(tǒng)的觀點(diǎn)一般認(rèn)為后者比前者重要。但是現(xiàn)在的趨勢越來越覺得前者更重要了。

第二、三、四段講理由并舉例子。這部分的寫作我的邏輯思維是先一句話點(diǎn)明理由。然后接下來進(jìn)行闡述,然后舉例子(我只在寫第二個論點(diǎn)的時候?qū)懥艘粋€具體的例子)。建議從正面來寫理由,比如這個立場有什么什么好的方面,而不要說要是選擇了另一個立場就哪里哪里不好了,這樣比較不好闡述,還很羅嗦,可能會造成邏輯不清楚,讓人看不懂。

比如我的第二段是這樣寫的:先一句話點(diǎn)明理由 – 這段的主旨:團(tuán)隊工作要求學(xué)生具備跟人很好相處的能力。然后是闡述,大概我是這么寫的,現(xiàn)在公司越來越多的根據(jù)項目來組織工作了,項目的成功就是公司的成功。一個項目通常由幾個人一起工作,完成一個項目。所以項目要求成員具備合作精神,是個team player……后面不記得了。

第三段:一句話點(diǎn)明理由 – 該段的主旨:具備跟人很好相處的能力能夠得到更多的機(jī)會。然后闡述了一下,自己不太記得怎么闡述了,最后舉了我自己的例子,大致意思是說原先四個人接受培訓(xùn)的,我不是最牛的那個,但是我積極跟老外老師聯(lián)系溝通,還在她請我們吃飯的時候帶給她小禮物(參加dinner帶小禮物是西方的禮節(jié)),最后我意外的獲得了她推薦的很好的實(shí)習(xí)機(jī)會。

第四段:主旨:跟人很好相處的能力可以讓新手更快的進(jìn)入工作狀態(tài)。闡述:中國大多數(shù)企業(yè)沒有正規(guī)的入職培訓(xùn),所以一般這種關(guān)于公司的知識和工作的基礎(chǔ)知識都是通過其他老員工傳授給你的,所以你要是跟他們相處的好,人家更愿意幫助你……

最后一段總結(jié)一下,因?yàn)閄,X和X這三個理由,我認(rèn)為跟人相處好的能力更重要。

最后檢查一遍。我打字慢,所以沒有時間檢查,估計扣分就在這里吧(小的語法錯誤和拼寫問題),慚愧的,呵呵,大家要記得練練打字,臺式機(jī)鍵盤的打字哦

托福寫作的訣竅整理

Integrated task:

表示陳述了某種觀點(diǎn)的:

Indicate, state, claim, believe, argue, say, hold, discuss, mention, contend, demonstrate, raise the issue, according to the professor/writer…..

表示觀點(diǎn)相反的:

Cast doubt on, refute, rebuke, refuse, question, disagree with, oppose, contradict, on the contrary, differ from

表示支持的:

Support, strengthen, agree with, reinforce, present the same idea

常用表示總結(jié)聽力和閱讀材料觀點(diǎn)不同的句子:

1. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates.

2. this entirely opposes the writer’s expectation.

3. this is where the speaker disagrees with the writer.

4. this is another part where experience contradict theory.

模版:

In the lecture, the professor states that..., which differs from the point of the reading, the passsage contends that......

As for the writer, the writer indicates that.......R1.....On the contrary, the instructor argues that L1.....+detail.

In the lecture, the speaker raises the issue that L2+detail ......., yet the reading passage belives that.......R2...

In the lecture, the professor says L3.....+detail...., and what the professor says opposes the idea of reading which holds that R3.........

In a word, what is discussed in the lecture entirely opposes the writer’s expectation.

托福寫作避免復(fù)雜繁瑣的長句

第一種方法是用一個單詞代替一組意義相同的單詞,比如:

①用forget(忘記)代替do not remember(沒有記住)

②用ignore(忽視)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)

③用now(現(xiàn)在)代替at this point in time(此時此刻)

④用because(由于)代替due to the fact that(鑒于下列事實(shí))

第二種方法是省略同義詞或近義詞,比如在下面例句中,形容詞important(重要的)和significant(有重要意義的),就是兩個同義詞(也可以說是近義詞),我們可以省略important,只保留significant。

①The government project is important and significant.(這項政府計劃是重要的,有重要意義。)

②The government project is significant.(這項政府計劃有重要意義。)

第三種方法是在不改變句子含義的前提下,省略所有可以省略的單詞,比如在下面例句中,the cover of the book (書的封面)可以省略成the book cover,is red in color(是紅色的)可以省略成is red。

①The cover of the book is red in color.(書的封面是紅色的)

②The book cover is red.(書的封面是紅色的)

最后我們把這三種方法結(jié)合起來,將一個冗長、繞嘴的句子,改寫成一個簡短、易懂的句子。

①University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校內(nèi)道路必須是便于通行的,不擁堵的,以便讓學(xué)生、教師和職員能夠無阻礙地通過,到達(dá)校園的各處。)

②University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校內(nèi)道路不應(yīng)當(dāng)擁堵,以便人們順利通行。)

托福寫作的經(jīng)典范文

Groups or organizations are an important part of some people's lives. Why are groups or organizations important to people?

It was said that human beings are social animals. Some might argue human beings should be not called animals, but it’s true that human beings are social. Therefore, it’s of no surprise that groups or organizations are almost an indispensable part of most people’s lives.

Most people are afraid of being alone, and for them, being with others is one of the most natural needs. Being a member of a group is comfortable. If an individual has gone so far as to being considered isolated, rumors arise. Others might ponder: what is the matter with that solitary individual? No one would like to be wondered in that way. Being a member of a group is also interesting. Every one has his own special means to pursue of happiness, for example, he might be keen on music concerts, or be fond of stamps collecting. By join a special interest group on his pet topic, he can easily find many people whose interests are similar to his, and can share his pleasure with those who can really appreciate it in proper way.

Many people find group or organizations are essential because they know a simple and never-changed fact that every single individuals on this Earth has only limited resources. Groups or organizations are always the best choice for an individual to emancipate himself from limitation. By joining a group, an individual is able share his limited resource with others, and share others’ resources in turn, therefore is virtually able to reach a much larger amount of resources. The most popular resource-sharing activities exist in the Internet. There are numerous BBS on almost every particular topic on various websites, which always makes copious valuable materials readily reachable. No matter what a person is interested in, for example, music, movie, books, or whatever, he will find a right group to join on the internet.

In fact, any individual in a sense exists in a certain group: either he is a member of some groups, or he is a leader of a group. Either way, the group is critical to him. He cannot achieve greatness solely by himself, regardless of his status in the group; he needs others, for help, for support, and many other things, since nobody but God, should he be alive, is entirely independent and omnipotent. [384 Words]

托福寫作的必備句型

1、表示原因

1)There are three reasons for this.

2)The reasons for this are as follows.

3)The reason for this is obvious.

4)The reason for this is not far to seek.

5)The reason for this is that...

例如: There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life.Firstly,peoples living standard has been greatly improved.Secondly,most people are well paid,and they can afford what they need or like.Last but not least,more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

2、表示好處

1)It has the following advantages.

2)It does us a lot of good.

3)It benefits us quite a lot.

4)It is beneficial to us.

5)It is of great benefit to us.

例如: Books are like friends.They can help us know the world better,and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore,reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

3、表示壞處

1)It has more disadvantages than advantages.

2)It does us much harm.

3)It is harmfulto us.

例如:However,everything dividesinto two.Television can also be harmful to us.It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching televi- sion.

4、表示重要、必要、困難、方便、可能

1)It is important(necessary,difficult,convenient,possible)for sb.to do sth.

2)We think it necessary to do sth.

3)It plays an important role in our life.

例如: Computers are now being used everywhere,whether in the government,in schools or in business.Soon,computers will be found in every home,too.We have good reason to say that computers are playing an increasingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.

5、表示措施

1)We should take some effective measures.

2)We should try our best to overcome(conquer)the difficulties.

3)We should do our utmost in doing sth.

4)We should solve the problems that we are confronted(faced)with.

例如:The housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore,we must take some effective measures to solve it.

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