雅思寫作備考復習避開這些誤區(qū)
雅思作文寫了又寫,各種技巧全都用上,還是不見高分降臨?雅思寫作備考的6個誤區(qū)你犯了嗎?雅思寫作備考復習,下面小編就和大家分享雅思寫作備考復習避開這六個誤區(qū),希望能夠幫助到大家,來欣賞一下吧。
雅思寫作備考復習避開這六個誤區(qū)
雅思寫作備考誤區(qū)1:作文字數(shù)越多越好
事實:雅思沒有安慰分和獎勵分一說。文章的質量決定分數(shù)。如果字數(shù)未達到要求數(shù)量,反應的分數(shù)肯定不可觀,但“字數(shù)越多,分數(shù)越高”這一理論一定是無稽之談。
作為老師,小站雅思君的建議是字數(shù)的話,小作文不能少于150,大作文不能少于250,至于具體要寫多少,其實真的沒有硬性要求,只要內容完整連貫就可以了。
雅思寫作備考誤區(qū)2:熟練運用高級詞匯單詞
事實:作文不是單詞比賽,而是交流。用詞不是為了長而生僻,而是為了準確。好的作文中,選詞適當?shù)轿皇欠浅V匾摹?/p>
雅思考試中最大的一個誤區(qū)就是大量背單詞。背單詞不能盲目,小站雅思君的經(jīng)驗是:把單詞放到句子里去記效果會更好。
這樣你記住的不僅僅是這個單詞,還知道這個單詞的用法,舉一反三,這個單詞便是你的了。盲目的背單詞,不僅見到了不認識,就算認識一樣不會使用還是相當于白費功夫。
舉例說,“fire”這個詞許多學生不屑一用,但是新聞上非常常見。比如:“Governor Rick Snyder is under fire for
the state's slow response to the warnings” 也就是被指責,被攻擊的意思。
另外一個例子是“cut”,所有國外的知名經(jīng)濟報道每天都在用這個單詞, 在價格上或者經(jīng)費上的“cut”,表示說削減,很多學生用“decrease”, 托福 常見的“diminish”, 乃至GRE常見的“dwindle”,都難以表達“cut”干脆利落,毫不留情的感覺。
雅思寫作備考誤區(qū)3:隨意替換詞匯
事實:考官會看學生是否能夠用不同方式去表達一個事情,也就是表達的變化是寫作能力的一個體現(xiàn)。
但是前提是你的表達變化是準確的,地道的。否則,考官只會扣分。
因此,相較于換詞,更好的替換方法是整個句式的變換,即突破原有句子格式和內容的限制,真正在理解的基礎上用自己的話paraphrase,而不僅僅是機械地單詞替換。
舉個小站雅思君寫作課遇到的學員例子:
原文:The graph below shows the changes in the number of West Indians and Pakistanis immigration to Britain between 1940 and 1970.
如果單純字對字替換(這樣的情況還很普遍),學員的范文如下:
The chart indicates changes of the figure for West Indians and Pakistanis immigration to the U.K. from 1940 to 1970.
這種開頭段的替換是最沒有技術含量也就是單純的字對字替換,考生甚至在沒有讀懂題干的時候一樣可以寫出這樣的開頭段。
但是,其實這句話的意思無非就是兩地移民到英國的人口數(shù)的比較。因此,換句話把內容說出來就好了:
The population of immigrants to Britain from West India and Pakistan over the 30 years is indicated in the line graph.
并不能說第二句一定是更好地改寫,但是第二句相較第一句突破了句式的限制,因此學生在平時的練習中可以更多地嘗試突破句式限制的paraphrase。
雅思寫作備考誤區(qū)4:忽略語法的重要性
事實:雅思考試評分標準中,task response確實很重要,但這并不代表語法不重要。試問一篇全是語法錯誤多到讓人看不懂的文章,內容怎么可能完整,主題怎么可能鮮明?
很多考生說語法錯誤并不影響理解,比如昨天我的學生寫道:
China is one of the countries with longest histories, and to be honest, I can’t remember all the dynasties in China.
這句話看似沒有問題,但是最后一句“坦白講,我記不清中國所有的朝代”,翻譯過來似乎行得通,但是在英文中卻沒有表達出中文的意思。
其實這個句子很簡單,就是 China is a country with long history and to be honest, there are so many dynasties in ancient China that I cannot even recall all of them.
句子結構不對,語法錯誤一多,哪怕是你用多高端的詞,多好的內容都是萬年5.5。 因此,好的語法基礎就如同地基,基礎扎實了,文章寫起來才能更好的展開。
雅思寫作備考誤區(qū)5:全篇復雜句
事實:句子變換可以體現(xiàn)考生的寫作功底,而復雜句是從小到大英語老師們都強烈推薦的句型,從定語從句到賓語從句到主語從句,考生拼了老命在考場上造句,
但是并不是說簡單句不能寫,也不是說全都是復雜句就一定能拿高分,個別時候復雜句過多還顯得冗雜。現(xiàn)在的考生寫復雜句個個都是能手,所以小站雅思君下面提供給大家一些可以把啰嗦的復雜句改為簡單句的技巧:
① 用“及物動詞+不定式”結構可以將含有that引導的某些賓語從句的復合句轉換成簡單句。例如:
He decided that he would buy a digital camera online.
He decided to buy a digital camera online.
② 用“疑問詞+不定式”結構可以將某些含有連接代詞或連接副詞引導的賓語從句轉換簡單句。例如:
Could you please teach me how I can search the Internet?
Could you please teach me how to search the Internet?
③ 用“too…to…”結構可以將含有so…that引導的結果語從句(否定)的復合句轉成簡單句。例如
The boy is so young that he can’t look after himself.
The boy is too young to look after himself.
④ 用“…enough +不定式”結構可以將含有so …that …引導的結果狀語從句(肯定)的復合句轉變?yōu)楹唵尉洹@纾?/p>
This hall is so large that it can hold 2000 people.
This hall is large enough to hold 2000 people.
⑤ 用“happen + 不定式”或“seem+不定式”結構可以分別將“It happens that…”和“It seems that… ”等含有主語從句的復合句轉換為簡單句。例如:
It seemed that this camera offered the most at the best price.
This camera seemed to offer the most at the best price.
⑥ 用“in order +不定式”或“so as +不定式”結構可以將含有so that 引導的目的狀語從句的復合句轉換為簡單句。如:
I went over my composition again and again so that I couldn’t make any mistakes.
I went over my composition again and again in order not to make any mistakes.
I went over my composition again and again so as not to make any mistakes.
⑦ 在某些作表語的形容詞后面加不定式可以將某些含有狀語從句的復合句轉變成簡單句。例如:
I was glad when I heard the good news.
I was glad to hear the good news.
雅思寫作備考誤區(qū)6:背范文
事實:背范文可以幫到你積累詞匯和思路,但絕對不能幫助你拿高分。
第一,如果被考官發(fā)現(xiàn)是背出來的文章,那么你的作文可能會被判為模板卷,那么可能你的分數(shù)直接從5分起了。
第二,嚴重來講這算是抄襲,背的過多考生在考場上只想著怎么能把自己背過的文章靠近考試的題目,但不會那么完美契合——不是基于題目本身出發(fā),而是基于腦中存貨發(fā)散,往往不夠貼合題目要求,不能夠完成task response的評分標準。這樣的作文不僅不受考官歡迎,還有可能會拉低自己原本的水平,所以小站雅思君不建議背范文。
雖然不建議背范文,但是閱讀和研究范文和評語是非常好的學習方法。對此,小站雅思君建議,比較好的的提高寫作的流程是這樣的:
(1) 計時完成題目
(2) 找老師批改
(3)看范文和評語
(4) 修改作文
(5)發(fā)還給老師,老師再次批改
這一個流程,缺一不可。
第一步,計時完成題目的必要性在于,考試是計時進行,所以一定每一次寫作都是要計時完成,這樣不僅能夠培養(yǎng)自己短時寫作的能力,又能培養(yǎng)自己在短時寫作中心理壓力的承受能力。
第二步,找老師修改,作文和寫作非常需要一名老師的指導,因為自己的作文經(jīng)常怎么看怎么好,或者怎么看怎么差,前者看不出自己的問題,后者不知道該怎么改正自己的問題,這個時候一名老師就很重要了。
第三步,就是小站雅思君重點要說的,也就是看范文和評語。每一篇作文后面都有范文和評語,評語和評分比范文本身更重要,因為你可以比較你的作文和范文的差距,好在哪里差在哪里,看考官給他的分數(shù)和評語,看他為什么能夠拿到這個分數(shù),哪里不足,跟自己的作文進行比較,就可以更好地找到自己努力的方向。
第四步,修改作文。作文不在多,而在精,也就是重要的在于修改,修改作文很重要,很重要,很重要!小站雅思君最直觀的感覺就是,1次虐得百轉千回的批改,比閉門造車寫5篇文章要有效得多。一定要把作文修改到可以直接帶去考場的水平,如果對于分數(shù)的追求比較高,那么要做到如果考題不是第一次見,要有把握上7分的水平才可以。
第五步,再發(fā)給老師修改,精益求精,讓老師提出建議。
雅思寫作Task2社會類考官范文
Some people insist that senior workers 65 or over should retire but others believe that they should continue working.
What is you opinion?
Model Answer:
Over the past few decades [In the past], there have been many advances in medical technology. Because of this, senior citizens are healthier and more active than before and may choose to work beyond the age of 65. Nowadays, however, there has been a growing debate as to whether or not these people should retire in order to create jobs for the younger generation. Despite the advantages of early retirement, I strongly believe that it is better for senior workers to continue working as long as they are physically and mentally capable.
Those who believe that senior workers need to retire for younger generation base their case on the following arguments. First, the unemployment rate, especially for college graduates, has never been so high so it is today. This is largely due to the slow economy. Therefore, firing some elderly workers who are well-paid would allow those unemployed young people to have good opportunities to get a job. In addition, replacing older workers with young people would bring greater benefits to companies [=employers]. This is because youngsters are better at adapting themselves to fast changing information based society. They are generally better at computers and speaking foreign languages than their older counterparts.
Nevertheless, people should not ignore the fact that senior citizens have been playing vital roles both at home and at work for their entire lives. To begin with, a young person's need for a job is no more important than an older person's. Both have a responsibility to support their families. Sadly, few seniors can afford early retirement. Besides, senior workers provide the wisdom and experience that young employees cannot offer. There is strong [=acute] possibility of situations arising that require the knowledge of skilled senior employees.
In summary, the advantages of keeping seasoned workers far outweigh its disadvantages. There are high hopes that employers exercise wisdom [=caution] in dealing with this issue.
雅思寫作Task2社會類考官范文
Children's lives these days are quite different from our generation's. Describe what are the biggest changes in younger generation and explain some factors of this phenomenon.
Model Answer:
Over the past few decades, the world has significantly changed. Nowadays, many have begun to wonder what the reasons behind [=for] these changes are. Two major factors contributing to this phenomenon are advances in media and change family dynamics [=organization].
First, advances in media, such as the Internet and TV, have meant that children spend a large portion of their leisure time in front of a screen. Consequently, they are not getting proper amounts of exercise, which results in an increase in the number of children who are overweight and obese. In addition, fast food restaurants have become increasingly popular, which has also contributed to children's health problems
Moreover, another leading force of this trend is changes in the family unit. Compared with a half century ago, nuclear families have become way more common in modern society. People tend to have only one child, which has caused personality disorders such as depression, loneliness, and selfishness. This is mainly because parents with one child have tendency to put all their focus and money into their only son or daughter. Studies have indicated that over 65% of children who are brought up without siblings show self-centered behavior find it difficult cooperating with their peers.
In summary, there are many factors that have caused children to live very differently from the generation before them. There are high hopes that parents exercise(s) wisdom in treating their children.
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