雅思寫作中的小詞大用2020
如何利用一個非常簡單的單詞：draw與介詞的搭配，在作文中地道地表示多種含義。下面小編就和大家分享雅思寫作中的小詞大用，希望能夠幫助到大家，來欣賞一下吧。
雅思寫作中的小詞大用
01 draw one’s attention：“令某人注意某事物”
例句：The economic rise of China and India draws ever more attention.
中國和印度經(jīng)濟上的崛起引起越來越多的關注。
在寫作中的應用：
在寫大作文時，開頭段中需要引出背景和話題，此時就可以使用sth.draws more attention這個搭配了。
需要注意的是，很多中國同學在寫開頭段的時候非常喜歡使用“with the development of the society”，但是這個表達其實是會被考官扣分的模板化表達，使用之后6分就沒有希望了。
02 draw up：“寫出，草擬，制定”
例句：He has drawn up a vacation plan.
他已擬出假期計劃。
在寫作中的應用：
大作文中的report題型，往往需要同學們在文中分析一個社會現(xiàn)象的原因以及解決措施。
而在表達措施時，我們往往可以從政府角度切入，例如：政府可以擬定政策來解決……問題。
此時我們就可以用到這個詞組：The government needs to draw up a policy that …
03 draw in：“吸引”
例句：Cruise lines are trying to draw in younger passengers and families with lower prices, as well as things like ice-skating rinks and cinemas.
除了增設溜冰場和電影院以外，眾游船公司還通過更低的價格來嘗試吸引更年輕的乘客和家庭去游玩。
在寫作中的應用：
表示“吸引某人”時，同學們第一反應會用“attract”這個單詞。
但為了在作文中升級為較不常見的表達或是避免重復，可以用“draw in”來做替換。除了draw in，此處也可以使用appeal to來替換表達。
04 draw on：“利用”
例句：The two entrepreneurs say that they still draw on their business school experience to move the company forward.
這兩位企業(yè)家表示，他們?nèi)赃\用在商學院中學到的經(jīng)驗推動公司的發(fā)展。
在寫作中的應用：
表示“運用”的時候，最常見的表達是“use”, “apply”，以后可以替換成draw on。
另外，此處也可以使用make use of和take advantages of來替換。
這些詞組不僅記起來簡單，而且在實際考試中能夠體現(xiàn)出用詞豐富性，起到非常好的替換作用。今天塔塔老師的分享就到這里，希望大家可以學以致用，升級表達。
雅思考試寫作高頻素材分類
1. 環(huán)境類
1). Individuals Vs Government/Company個人與政府或公司關系
It is only the government that has the force to stop factories from polluting rivers and contaminating soil. Also, the government can offer an enormous amount of money as a reward to the first individual or company that comes up with a viable, environment-friendly alternative to fossil fuels. Besides, apart from governments, very few people are financially sufficient to combat large-scale/disastrous environmental accidents, such as the oil spill at Mexican Gulf in 2011.
Even if governments launched seemingly protective measures, they would not make any difference until individual citizens were fully aware of the importance of environmental preservation and willing to make their share of contribution. Besides, the influence exerted by relatives or friends is far more effective than the effort made by the government.
2). Causes of environmental problems 導致環(huán)境問題的原因
Growing reliance on private cars will lead to an increase in the consumption of fossil fuels. As a result, there will be an increase in the emission of greenhouse gas, such as carbon dioxide. In other words, people’s unwillingness to sacrifice comfortable modern lives is one of the leading causes behind all the environmental problems.
2. 政府投資
1). Investment on art (subjects)政府在藝術方面投資
2). Investment on space exploration 政府在太空探索領域的投資
Enhancement of public facilities is closely related to people’s life quality. If bus and rail services were more reliable, commuters would spend much less time getting to and from work.
However, admitting the importance of public facilities is not the same as denying the importance of art development. In fact, art is much more tied to people’s everyday life than expected. Without art, people would have to wear the same clothes, live in the same buildings and watch monotonous movies. With governments financially supporting artists, they will be able to be less concerned about earning bread but pay more effort to create wonderful diversity in people’s lives.
3. 媒體
1). Effects of violence in TV or movies 電視電影中暴力情節(jié)的影響
A: Media violence is a natural way for people to release/combat stress, as they can have an escape from daily work and routine when immersed in the excitement of punching and fighting. In addition, children who are sheltered from violence don’t have that safe outlet and can have a harder time dealing with violent emotions as they get older.
B: Young viewers have an instinctive desire to copy behavior of people whom they admire. If they are excessively exposed to violent scenes, the possibility is relatively high that they take the use of violence for granted to solve problems.
2). Advantages and disadvantages of ads兩方面討論廣告的利弊
A: Advertisements about new products keep customers informed about the new developments in the industry. They help to provide information of the newly launched products. Advertising is a complicated task and a lot of people are involved in the making of an advertisement. Research team, design team and many other people are required to make and deliver it. So, advertisements generate employment for a lot of people.
B: A certain proportion of advertisements lead people to impulsively buy something that they do not really need by inviting stars or exaggerating the effects of a product or service.
雅思寫作細節(jié)--再為高分添色彩
雅思考試中總會有同學抱怨自己一戰(zhàn)二戰(zhàn)寫作分數(shù)提高不明顯?？蓞⒓友潘伎荚嚨耐瑢W們有沒有反思自己忽視的那些細節(jié)。西方有句諺語"小行為看大人格"，意思是我們可以從一個人行動的細微末節(jié)處，觀察到此人的大致性情，人格特點。這句話也同樣適合于雅思寫作中。作為寫作老師，學生們"多姿多彩"的習作我早已屢見不鮮。久而久之，把學生在寫作過程中常犯、易犯、復犯的問題都總結(jié)出來，就此略點一二。
基本上所有培訓機構的老師都會在開班上給學生介紹雅思考試，涉及到寫作的話，都會牽扯到評分標準 -- 這個是毋庸置疑的。例如：TA/TR(寫作任務的完成/回應)、CC(連貫與銜接)、LR(詞匯資源)以及GRA(語法范圍及其精確度)。在我們的反復灌輸下，學生的思想潛移默化地被這些大方向拽著前行，往往會忽略掉其他的小細節(jié)。
格式，是首當其沖的問題。從收集學生的習作中不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，很多學生在沒有被提前告知格式規(guī)范的時候，出現(xiàn)的問題往往較為嚴重。最常見的莫過于采用"縮進式"的同學每段開頭空格的問題。可能是在學校接受的語文寫作過多，導致開頭空兩個單詞的情況屢見不鮮。又或者稍微接觸過英語寫作的同學在采用"齊頭式"的文章格式時，段落之間沒有空行。這樣的行為在考試中，還是很吃虧的。因為在TA/TR(寫作任務的完成/回應)中，有很明確要求考生做到段落清晰。何為清晰?除了我們在課堂上強調(diào)的文章架構和西方思辨邏輯體系之外，格式絕對不容忽視。其實，格式記起來很簡單：縮進式--每段開頭空4個字母，段落之間不空行;齊頭式--顧名思義，頂頭寫，但，段與段之間切記空行。
再者，是縮寫問題，這個雖然不在評分標準以及6項注意之內(nèi)，但是在劍橋雅思真題考官評判中，很明確的指出了縮寫問題。具體請大家參見雅思劍3第4套題目考官評語：There are minor examples of unsuitable register (e.g. "turned out", "disastrous" and one contracted verb form), 原文寫做"The major conclusion that I've drawn using the graph is that..."。其實，按照常理也不難理解。因為雅思寫作的大小作文都屬于正式的學術文體，我在國外的學習和工作中寫論文、交報告都沒有用過縮寫形式，所以于理于情，縮寫真的不應該出現(xiàn)在正式的寫作文體當中。
最后我想談的是標點的使用問題。中國考生在雅思寫作中普遍有特點，即對"逗號"的偏愛。一句話不管說完與否或表達意思是否完整，不管連詞或副詞，一律逗號上陣，搞得我們這些"看客"哭笑不得。實際上，如果翻閱相關的語法教材，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)上面對標點使用的規(guī)范。例如：一句話能表達完整的句意就需要句號收尾。尤其是在并列句中，只有連詞前面才可用逗號，其他情況皆是"分號"。舉個簡單的例子"Some people become convinced that older people should live with their families; others hold the view that older people should live at a nursing home."在這個并列句中前后并無連詞相連，所以必須用分號隔開。諸如此類的問題，還請廣大"烤鴨"務必注意。
經(jīng)常聽到有人說"細節(jié)決定成敗"，其實在雅思寫作評判中并沒有如此夸張，因為參考者不是native speaker, 但是我想說的是注重細節(jié)卻真的可以為你的成功再添一捧柴，這絕對考官對閱卷的整體印象上有加分的。最后還望廣大雅思考生多關注平日的練習，和老師多做交流。
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