雅思圖表小作文范文分析
雅思圖表小作文范文分析,今天小編就給大家?guī)砹搜潘紙D表小作文范文分析,希望能夠幫助到大家,下面小編就和大家分享,來欣賞一下吧。
雅思圖表小作文范文分析 混合圖之某市溫度與降水
The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata
該圖表展示一年當中加爾各答市的月均氣溫和降水。請由此,作答150文章,描述此圖。
雅思圖表小作文混合圖9分范文:
The chart compares average figures for temperature and precipitation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.(1句做介紹導入)
It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May.(2句做圖表概述)
Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20°C to a peak of just over 30°C. Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May.(3句的細節(jié)段1)
While temperatures stay roughly the same for the next four months, the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10mm in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.(3句的細節(jié)段2)(173 words, band 9)
附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路
For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.這是他所擅長的圖表作文4段9句大法,具體結構如下:
1.Introduction: 1 sentence,Introduction段落,1句話介紹圖表大意足矣
2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences,Overview段,用2句話做圖表信息的摘要
3.First 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences
4.Second 'details' paragraph: 3 sentences。
三、四段為細節(jié)段,每段3句做詳細的特征或規(guī)律的描述。
當然,Simon同學不忘補充,這只是他個人在寫作時的偏好結構,好文無定法,大家也不需要拘泥于9句,只要內容表達的需要,8句,10句都是沒問題的。
注意:simon考官主張雅思小作文無須總結!大家可留心這一點。當然小作文是否需要寫總結段,雅思屆尚無定論。
雅思大作文考試最新趨勢分析及備考建議
雅思大作文舊題新出例證之一
3月3日的考試真題如下:In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with better education so that they can not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
這是一道社會類大話題下關于犯罪問題的重復考題,原題出現(xiàn)在2012年5月12日的考試中??偨Y規(guī)律來講,如果說2017年雅思寫作考試對2014年情有獨鐘,2018年似乎返祖現(xiàn)象更為嚴重,已經考過的很多場都是在重復2013年甚至更早的原題。用專業(yè)術語來講,就是挖墳題。
雅思大作文舊題新出例證之二
再比如說,3月10日的真題:Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.解決世界環(huán)境問題的最好方法之一就是增加燃料和所有車輛的成本。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?
是不是和2006年6月17日的這道題無比接近,請看:The best way to solve the world's environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
當然這個日期真的久遠了,就算是瘋狂的刷提者也不會刷十年之前的考題吧。那么問題來了,我們知道了現(xiàn)在的考題中沒有新題這件事,能指引我們什么呢?
2018雅思大作文備考建議
筆者的想法是,既然考生們知道不會出現(xiàn)新的話題了,也就是大作文的一些話題詞匯和常用觀點,大家是可以大量的積累和使用的,雖然題目你復習不到那么久遠,但是常考的話題,就那不超過十個。
考生們就可以圍繞話題進行大作文的語言片段的準備,它們分別包括社會類,科技類,文化類,政府類,教育類,犯罪類,新聞媒體類,環(huán)境類以及抽象類等。
把這些話題分別整理詞匯,并且找到2015年和2016年考過的相關真題,進行動手寫作,那么考試就算遇不到原題,至少也會遇到相似話題,你背過的詞匯和觀點依然是有用武之地的。在這里,小編為大家尋找了一些3、4月份可以練習的過往話題,希望對考生能有所幫助。
2018雅思大作文備考話題預測
社會類雅思寫作大作文
1.2015年2月7日 Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people.
2.2015年10月31日Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
3.2016年4月16日When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
4.2016年4月2日 Multicultural societies, where people of different groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
教育類雅思寫作大作文
1.2016年2月13日In some countries, there has been an increase number of parents who educated their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
2.2016年3月31日Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?
3.2015年5月16日 To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
4. 2015年10月8日In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, children focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in today's world?
科技類雅思寫作大作文
1.2015年2月14日 The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking. Do you think mobile should be banned like smoking?
2.2015年10月24日Some people say that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
3.2016年10月8日Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is now replacing their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
文化類雅思寫作大作文
1.2015年8月29日 Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
2.2015年8月13日International travel sometimes lead people have some prejudices rather than broad minds,why? How to improve the understanding of countries they visit?
3.2016年9月10日Many customs and the traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agree or disagree?
政府類雅思寫作大作文
1.2016年1月30日In some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?
2.2015年7月23日Some people say government should give the health care the first priorities , some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers' money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
抽象類雅思寫作大作文
1.2015年9月19日Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
犯罪類雅思寫作大作文
1.2015年6月27日Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?
2.2016年1月14日 A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right, or the young criminals should be sent to the jail?
3.2015年8月8日Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
傳媒類雅思寫作大作文
1. 2016年1月23日News media has become more influential in people's lives. Others believe it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
2. 2016年10月22日In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
環(huán)境類雅思寫作大作文
1.2015年3月12日Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree?
2.2016年4月21日The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?
3.2016年9月15日More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?
當然,大家要記住,刷題的目的不是為了大家背誦文章,而是通過常用的真題進行話題詞匯的累積和觀點方面的頭腦風暴。畢竟考試的時候你不能把背誦的內容直接寫進去,但是你留在腦海里的話題單詞和觀點,確實實實在在給你增加分數的砝碼,最后希望各位考生多刷題,多思考,勤動筆,少背誦
最好的雅思寫作開頭段寫法 必出自這5類
雅思寫作開頭段的構成
那我們研究開頭段,第一個問題就是開頭段是由什么組成的。開頭段可以說是對于題目的一個最直接的回應,因此,一個開頭段的組成基本是和題目的構成緊密相關的。而雅思大作文的題目構成主要分成兩類,一類是和觀點有關的題目,比方說“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”或者是“discuss both views and give your own opinion.” 這類題目的構成往往為“背景+題目觀點+題目問題”。另一類是和事實有關的題目,比方說“do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?”或者是“what are the reasons and how to solve these issues?” 而這一類的題目中就只有“背景事實+題目問題”。
所以, 我們的較為標準的開頭段通常便是“背景引入+題目觀點復述+己方觀點表達”或是,“背景引入+己方問題回應”。
因此我們在本篇先說一說開頭段中的背景引入的方式。這個部分我認為應該是整個開頭段從語言角度講最重要的部分,最需要同學們的注意。
一方面因為,學生往往會用較為隨便或千篇一律的描述一筆帶過,比方是“Nowadays, with the development of...”這樣的老套話術,會給考官模板的感覺,也讓考官對文章一開始就失去興趣。另一個需要重視這一部分的重要原因是,這部分靈活度很強,也就是能更好的展現(xiàn)自己的英語實力。
所以,比起簡單的同意替換,我們可以把背景引入分為五大類:
雅思寫作開頭段寫法1 擺事實
也就是通過對題目主題的理解,寫一句對事實的描述,從而引出題目的話題或是問題。
例:1. Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?(Collins Unit1)
There have always been differences in the types of work men and women have done...
2. Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit2)
The increasing availability of convenience foods has been a significant feature of modern life in many developed countries...
3. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? (C4T4)
Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.
4. In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. (C5T2)
It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.
雅思寫作開頭段寫法2 給原因
也就是根據題目中的觀點或是題目中的事實去向前推出一層原因,從而讓開頭更有邏輯。
例:1. As language such as English, Spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? (Collins Unit5)
As the world becomes more integrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing.
2. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C6T2)
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.
雅思寫作開頭段寫法3 給結果
通過對于結果的描述,向上推出題目論證的內容。這個方法思路較繞,但是用恰當也算是另辟蹊徑。
例:1. In the past, people spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays they change their job frequently. Please give your reasons and suggestions.
Though the experience of moving from one job to another can sometimes be distressing or even traumatic, thousands of employees move from one job to another in rapid succession every year.
2. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today`s society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What`s your opinion.
It will be good news for school children when they are told that foreign language is no longer a required subject because translation can all be down by machines. ……
雅思寫作開頭段寫法4 時間對比
這樣的開頭做法通常是將古今進行對比,從而引出題目的爭論,或是主題。
例:1. Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can social benefit from the contribution that older people can make?(Collins Unit9)
People today can expect to live a longer and healthier life than people in the past. …….(現(xiàn)在的人與過去相比預期活得更長,更健康。)
2. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit10)
In the past, news about famous people may have been confined to gossip columns in newspapers; these days it is not uncommon for celebrities to feature as front page news.
3. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (C9T1)
Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.
雅思寫作開頭段寫法5 地點對比
例:Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (C8GB)
Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.(有些國家通行同性別教育模式;而有些國家實行同性別教育和混合教育,父母或者孩子自己可以決定哪種模式更適合。)