雅思寫作常見的兩類失誤陷阱

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　　雅思寫作常見的兩類失誤陷阱

　　表達(dá)單一，詞不達(dá)意

　　我們知道文章是思想的載體，而詞是這個(gè)載體的基本組成要素。沒有單詞，就無法準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)思想。由于所掌握的單詞有限，往往使學(xué)生感到自己“滿腹的心里話不知怎么說”，為了寫完一篇250多字的作文，只能搜腸刮肚，勉強(qiáng)拼湊，結(jié)果使思路受到限制，寫出來的句子總是不能表達(dá)出自己的本來意圖，文章主題反倒成了載體的奴隸。為了彌補(bǔ)詞匯量的不足，一些學(xué)生就把一些熟悉的單詞、簡單的句子結(jié)構(gòu)重復(fù)使用來避免犯錯(cuò)而使文章顯得單調(diào)、呆板，甚至觀點(diǎn)和見解也因此大打折扣。對(duì)單詞含義的一知半解，使得學(xué)生在寫作時(shí)生搬硬套。把漢語成語硬生生地逐字對(duì)譯，如：把“成竹在胸”譯成“have a bamboo tree in my heart”;或者一些短語直譯，如：把“不少青年婦女沒文化”譯成“Many young women have no culture.”，令人啼笑皆非。

　　當(dāng)然，這一問題主要存在于英語水平較差的同學(xué)中。而更多學(xué)員中存在的問題是不能準(zhǔn)確把握一些詞匯的具體含義及一些意思相近的詞之間的一些區(qū)別，進(jìn)而導(dǎo)致在寫作中只是簡單得根據(jù)自己所知道的該詞的意思生硬的加在自己的習(xí)作中，而不去考慮該詞在整篇文章中是否合適，從而使自己的作文有了濃重的Chinglish的味道。

　　詞匯匱乏，作文索然無味

　　由于學(xué)員掌握的詞匯不足，所以在寫作文時(shí)，往往是一個(gè)詞在文中不斷的重復(fù)出現(xiàn)，結(jié)果使得自己的作文讀起來很索然無味。如有的學(xué)生只知道“促進(jìn)”一詞是improve,于是在寫作時(shí)，只要是“促進(jìn)”，他就把improve一詞搬上去，殊不知，“促進(jìn)”一詞還可以用promote, enhance, advance, facilitate, strengthen 等詞表達(dá)。但這并不意味著這幾個(gè)詞可以隨時(shí)互換，學(xué)生在用的時(shí)候也要根據(jù)具體的情景而選擇具體的詞。

　　此外，有的學(xué)生在運(yùn)用詞組時(shí)總是不能準(zhǔn)確把握其固定搭配，尤其是一些動(dòng)詞詞組中具體搭配的介詞等小品詞，結(jié)果寫出來的句子令人產(chǎn)生誤解。這方面的問題似乎在學(xué)員中更加普遍。下面我們就以我們論壇中的一篇習(xí)作為例：

　　I do not agree with the above statement, in my opinion, both of the earlier times technological inventions and recent times technological inventions make human lives changed a lot, we are not supposed to say ether earlier ones or the later ones of technology is more important.

　　這是作文的第一段，而第一句的agree with the above statement 就是一個(gè)明顯的錯(cuò)誤，agree with 是同意某人的意思，后接sb.，而 agree about后接 sth.是同意某種觀點(diǎn)的意思。僅僅是一個(gè)介詞的錯(cuò)誤運(yùn)用，也許就會(huì)影響你的作文分?jǐn)?shù)。所以，這一問題應(yīng)值得學(xué)員注意。

　　G類雅思寫作Task 1備考攻略之咨詢求助信

　　雅思考試分為A類和G類兩種模式。通常來說，以出國工作或者移民為目的的考生應(yīng)該選擇G類考試。A類和G類考試的區(qū)別在閱讀和寫作兩項(xiàng)考試上，其中寫作考試中的任務(wù)一G類與A類題型截然不同，請(qǐng)參見官方指南上的題型解釋：

　　從官方介紹不難看出，G類寫作任務(wù)一(以下簡稱T1)要求考生在20分鐘左右完成一篇書信的寫作，考生也許會(huì)被要求去詢問信息或解釋某些狀況。但是，具 體而言，考生可能會(huì)碰到哪些形式的書信寫作呢?根據(jù)劍橋2-9八本真題以及近三年考試回顧，雅思G類T1書信類型主要包括感謝信、道歉信、投訴信、求職求 學(xué)信、邀請(qǐng)信、建議信和咨詢求助信等七種。新東方小編為大家收集了G類雅思寫作Task 1備考攻略：咨詢求助信，給出相應(yīng)的解題思路(即書信寫作文章結(jié)構(gòu))與寫作句型。

　　咨詢信一般分為三部分：第一部分自我介紹，說明寫信目的(詢問某方面情況)，指明你所需要的信息;第二部分提供相關(guān)背景信息，指出你為什么需要這些信息。詢問具體相關(guān)事宜。指明你什么時(shí)候需要這些信息;第三部分表達(dá)請(qǐng)求幫助的愿望，預(yù)先感謝對(duì)方的幫助，并表示希望早日得到答復(fù)。

　　2. 常用句型

　　1) I would be much obliged to you if you could let me know the procedures I have to go through.

　　2) Your prompt and favorable attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.

　　3) I am looking forward to a favorable reply/response at your earliest convenience.

　　4) Would you provide me with some valuable advice?

　　5) Your kind reply will be highly appreciated.

　　6) It would be greatly appreciated if you could furnish me with relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects.

　　7) I am writing to enquire whether I may become a member of your club.

　　8) I would be grateful if you could let me know your annual fee charges and any other information which would be useful.

　　9) Please let me know as soon as possible how you propose to settle this matter.

　　10) Although at this time of year you will have more work to deal with than usual, I would appreciate a reply in a not too distant future.

　　雅思G類T1寫作主要考察考生英文實(shí)用寫作的運(yùn)用能力。各位考生在備考時(shí)應(yīng)該注意夯實(shí)詞匯語法功底，搞清楚不同書信類型的寫作結(jié)構(gòu)并熟練掌握常用句型。

　　雅思寫作解題思路之是否需要學(xué)外語

　　014年8月雅思寫作預(yù)測題目：是否需要學(xué)外語。Some people think all students should learn a foreign language. Others believe students without the talent should not learn. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

　　支持前者 所有人都應(yīng)該讀滿18 年的書

　　under the circumstance of globalisation, competition is becoming increasingly intense, and acquiring a foreign language skill help people to edge out, e.g. a Chinese who can speak fluent English is more hopefully to stand out during the recruitment of multinationals & many European people start learning Chinese because of the booming economy in China.

　　大學(xué)教育是為了就業(yè)還是其它(大學(xué)教育四大功能 ：知識(shí) ，實(shí)踐 ，素質(zhì) ，人際 );

　　教育應(yīng)該泛還是專

　　a good many societies have become diverse in culture, e.g. cosmopolitan cities, and learning other people’s language is beneficial to communication and achieving social harmony, e.g. a big proportion of American people choose to learn Spanish, especially in southwestern states. 大學(xué)教育是為了就業(yè)還是其它(大學(xué)教育四大功能：知識(shí)，實(shí)踐，素質(zhì)， 人際); 教育應(yīng)該泛還是專

　　mastering foreign languages enables people to deeply understand and truly appreciate different cultures, e.g. read Dream of the Red Mansion in Chinese and watching Shakespeare dramas. 大學(xué)教育是為了就業(yè)還是其它(大學(xué)教育四大功能：知識(shí)，實(shí)踐，素質(zhì)，人際); 教育應(yīng)該泛還是專

　　支持后者

　　to those who think people without such talent should not learn foreign languages, learning does not mean getting sophisticated in linguistics, obtaining the basic communication skills is widely adequate for most students. 教育應(yīng)該泛還是專(其他基礎(chǔ)學(xué)科也一樣，只是要求具備基本知識(shí)，沒說要很精通)

　　On the other hand, being capable of speaking and writing in other languages makes people more eloquent, and they will find making friends a lot easier, e.g. facebook. 大學(xué)教育是 為了就業(yè)還是其它(大學(xué)教育四大功能：知識(shí)，實(shí)踐，素質(zhì)，人際 ); 教育應(yīng)該 泛還是專

　　論據(jù)共享題

　　大學(xué)教育是為了就業(yè)還是其它

　　University should prepare students for employ or have other functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　所有人都應(yīng)該讀滿18年的書

　　Everybody should stay in school until 18. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　教育應(yīng)該泛還是專

　　Some people believe teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But, others believe they should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

　　雅思寫作解題思路之醫(yī)生護(hù)士教師與明星的收入

　　2014年8月雅思寫作預(yù)測題目：醫(yī)生護(hù)士教師與明星的收入。Sports and entertainment personalities have higher value than professional workers like doctors, nurses and teachers in some societies, why this happened in some society and do you think it is a good or bad development.

　　原因

　　Psychologically, people, especially youngsters, need role models (榜樣) and sports and entertainment personalities can easily become those that are encouraging to ordinary people, e.g. the Chinese swimmer Sun Yang and famous band, e.g. the Tang Dynasty. 年輕 人崇拜娛樂和體育明星的利弊;體育的作用(體育激勵(lì)人心，提高全民素質(zhì) ); 舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)的利弊。

　　Some societies are highly commercialised and the intrinsic rule (內(nèi)在規(guī)則) of which is that the more distinctive an image becomes, the more irreplaceable value it gains (一個(gè)形象越 獨(dú)特，其不可替代的價(jià)值就越高), hence the high income, e.g. David Beckham, regardless of their actual contribution to the society.

　　好處

　　Entertainment stars can benefit the society through productions (作品) which deliver upbeat life attitude. And famous sports players can drive people’s zest for sport games, improving citizens’ overall fitness level. 年輕人崇拜娛樂和體育明星的利弊。

　　Many of them participate actively in charity works, which raises a positive profile for citizens.

　　年輕人崇拜娛樂和體育明星的利弊

　　壞處

　　Professional workers such as doctors, nurses and teachers have to go through endless tests and exammes to get qualifications, and their works largely benefit the society on people’s education and health. It appears to be unfair when comparing their salaries to the astronomical incomes of sports and entertainment celebrities.

　　Quite a few sports and entertainment personalities do not have sufficient education, and many of them misbehave, e.g. fight and swear, divorce and luxuriant lifestyle, etc. All of these are magnified (被放大) by the mass media which produces damaging effect to young

　　people who are vulnerable and imitate blindly. 年輕人崇拜娛樂和體育明星的利弊

　　論據(jù)共享題

　　年輕人崇拜娛樂和體育明星的利弊

　　Nowadays, young people are admiring media and sport stars even though they don’t set a good example. This brings negative effect to the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

　　體育的作用

　　Some people think sports games are important for society, but others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both these views and giver your own opinion.

　　舉辦奧運(yùn)會(huì)的利弊

　　Holding Olympic Games is an exciting event. Some people think it has positive effects while others argue it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.