GRE寫作的提升技巧
今天給大家?guī)鞧RE寫作的提升技巧，快來學(xué)習(xí)學(xué)習(xí)吧，分享下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。
GRE寫作的提升技巧
1.必須研究范文
尤其是5分和6分的范文，他們真的非常重要，因為那是最權(quán)威的輔導(dǎo)資料!不是簡單的熟讀和背誦，而是逐字逐句的體會作者的意思及修辭。還有提醒一點，ETS對范文的評論也都非常精彩，建議大家參考!這會非常有利于理解考試所考的重點。
2.必須要熟練
重要的是形成慣性思維，考試時間真的是太緊張了，要想現(xiàn)場思考每句話的調(diào)理性真的是太難了，反正我沒做到，寫得時候手指不停的運轉(zhuǎn)，遠遠超過了大腦運轉(zhuǎn)的速度，只有有充分思維準(zhǔn)備的人，才能駕輕就熟，運用自如。題目中提到politics，大腦中就應(yīng)當(dāng)出現(xiàn)Franklin Roosevelt， Lincoln， Gerhard Shroeder， Gandhi……; 提到ART，就該想到Rembrandt， Van Gogh， Starry night， night watch， Henmingway， the old man and the sea……; 提到Scandal，就該想到Nixon，watergate，bill clinton，sex sandal，Enran……總之，熟練是非常非常重要的!
3.必須多修改
如果不勤修改自己的文章，就不知道自己原來的漏洞和不足在哪，悶頭寫，只能導(dǎo)致lose the stake! 當(dāng)認真學(xué)習(xí)一段時間寫作之后，再回頭改第一篇習(xí)作，肯定會發(fā)現(xiàn)自己很多毛病，這說明： 我們在進步!
4.必須學(xué)習(xí)別人的文章
不管是老外280，還是版主們組織的同主題習(xí)作，都是非常寶貴的學(xué)習(xí)，參考資料，看到別人的文章和寫作思路，是提高自己水平的有效途徑!建議大家看看版主們原來寫的習(xí)作和互拍，真的會受益匪淺!
5.必須多思考
多寫不如多改，多改不如多想，當(dāng)然這種想不是fantasy and daydream.二是針對寫作思路和自我總結(jié)，當(dāng)我意識到這點時，已經(jīng)太晚了
6.必須看arg的全部題庫
不要抱僥幸心理，我覺得在考試之前找到文章中出現(xiàn)的邏輯錯誤，遠比在30min中為它而浪費時間值得的多。
GRE issue寫作范文：科學(xué)的作用
題目：
The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.
科學(xué)的作用是解惑;藝術(shù)的目的是創(chuàng)新。只有這樣他們才各得其所。
正文：
Science and art are two of the most glorious fields in which numerous people have made their great contributions. As the society develops, people concern more about the function of science, of art and of other realms. Some may argue that the function of science is to reassure, and the purpose of art is to upset, however, as far as I am concerned, science and art have more significant values than just to reassure or to upset people.
The main function of science is to propel the development of human society and to provide people the power to understand the nature and ourselves. In the primordial days of the human history, when the conception of science first emerged, science was to answer people's questions and to satisfy people's curiosity towards myriad mysterious phenomenon. If we understand the science in such way, we can't see clear differences between the inchoate religion and the inchoate science, because, the functions of both of them are nearly the same, and both contain totally absurd theories if one studies them today. One may agree that in that period of time, science was largely to reassure people's fear towards the mysteries just as what religions try to do.
However, the development of science finally makes it an important tool for us to understand the nature and to change the nature in our favor. The understanding of electricity expels the old thought that the thunder is a sign indicating that the god is angry. The advancement achieved in medicine greatly elongate human's life, and nowadays people no longer depend on certain rituals to give them health. Discoveries and inventions alike have transformed our society into the nowadays form, and provide us great power to determine our future. If science is only to reassure us, how can we achieve the feats we have made through our history? As Francis Bacon once said, "Knowledge is power", the true function of science is to give us the power to conquer the difficulties we confront.
Unlike science, arts which seldom give us the power to better our material lives, mainly concern about our spiritual lives. Admittedly, some arts actually upset people by let us see the weakness of the human nature or the darkness of our society, as the art works of Michelangelo. However, arts possess much more functions than just upset us. Arts can ease our emotions and reassure us, as the music of Mozart does; arts can give us confidence and braveness, as the music of Beethoven does; arts can also tell us what philosophy is, as the music of Mahler does. Although arts possess so many functions,one can judge that the major function of art is to represent the life and to present the artists' ideals. Most literary works, such as fictions, poems, dramas, give us a vivid image of the society. Other forms of arts have the same kind of functions. For example, Tchaikovsky composed music to represent the hard life of the common Russian people, while Van Gogh drew pictures to represent the beauty of the nature. There're also other pieces of art showing us the inner part of the artists, for instance, the representative new trend movie "four hundred blows". By presenting the life and the ideals, arts give us true understanding of our circumstances and ourselves in a spiritual way. Arts can not explain why it rains,but it explains how people feel about the rainy day.
Before we can make full utilization of any subjects of study, we must at first understand their main functions and values to our society. For example, if we depend upon rituals and ceremonies to give us fortune and luck and to provide us enough to eat, we may probably die of hunger. The true value of these rituals and ceremonies lies in the fact that they are crucial part of our culture. It's the same case for science and art, if we hold the opinion that science is only to reassure people, and art is only to upset people, we can't see the importance of these two subjects to our society. It's possible that we ignore the development of them, and sequentially our society won't develop without the breakthroughs made in science, and our citizens won't lead a happy life and will stay in an ignorant status without the existence of great art works.
Science and art, as discussed above, are crucial to our society. Admittedly, science can reassure people by explain the mysterious phenomenon, and arts can upset people by let us see things we can't discover with our own eyes. However, if we simply regard science and art this way, we would miss so much that our society will stop developing or even collapse into chaos.
GRE寫作官方題庫高頻ARGUMENT題目滿分范文分享：application for a business loan
GRE作文官方題庫ARGUMENT題目：
The following was written as a part of an application for a small business loan by a group of developers in the city of Monroe:
"A jazz music club in Monroe would be a tremendously profitable enterprise. Currently, the nearest jazz club is 65 miles away; thus, our proposed club, the C Note, would have the local market all to itself. Plus, jazz is extremely popular in Monroe: over 100,000 people attended Monroe's jazz festival last summer, several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, and the highest-rated radio program in Monroe is 'Jazz Nightly,' which airs every weeknight. Finally, a nationwide study indicates that the typical jazz fan spends close to $1,000 per year on jazz entertainment. It is clear that the C Note cannot help but make money."
【滿分范文賞析】
This loan applicant claims that a jazz club in Monroe would be a profitable venture. To support this claim the applicant points out that a jazz club in Monroe would face no competition, as the nearest club is 65 miles away. He also cites various other evidences that jazz is popular among Monroe residents. Careful examination of this supporting evidence, however, reveals that it lends little credible support to the applicant's claim.
【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】
本文采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument開頭段結(jié)構(gòu)，即C—A—F的開頭結(jié)構(gòu)。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion，之后簡要提及原文為支持其結(jié)論所引用的一系列Assumption及細節(jié)，最后給出開頭段到正文段的過渡句，指出原文的Flaw，即這些Assumption無法讓原文邏輯上沒有問題。
【本段功能】
作為Argument開頭段，本段具體功能就在于發(fā)起攻擊并概括原文的結(jié)論，即在Monroe地區(qū)開辦一個爵士樂俱樂部是有利可圖的。本段接下來提到了原文中為支持之前的Conclusion所提供的證據(jù)，包括，在該地區(qū)不存在競爭對手，以及在該地區(qū)爵士樂非常流行。文章提及這些信息，為是在正文段中對這些Assumption即將進行的具體攻擊做鋪墊。
First of all, if the demand for a live jazz club in Monroe were as great as the applicant claims, it seems that Monroe should already have one or more such clubs. The fact that the closest jazz club is 65 miles away reveals a point of uncertainty, which should be reserved for further study. Since the applicant has not adequately responded to this concern, his claim that the proposed club would be profitable is untenable.
【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】
本段采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument正文段結(jié)構(gòu)，即先是提及原文的第一個邏輯錯誤，之后分析該邏輯錯誤的原因，接下來，進一步分析這樣的錯誤為什么讓原文的Conclusion不成立。
【本段功能】
作為正文第一段，本段攻擊原文所犯的第一個重要邏輯錯誤——因果類錯誤。原文當(dāng)中提到，雖然爵士樂在當(dāng)?shù)睾芰餍?，但是在Monroe當(dāng)?shù)夭]有爵士樂俱樂部，所以在Monroe并不存在俱樂部的競爭者。但相反，這個假設(shè)的因果關(guān)系可能被顛倒了，即正是因為爵士樂在當(dāng)?shù)匦枨罅坎桓邔?dǎo)致當(dāng)?shù)夭淮嬖诰羰繕肪銟凡?。所以，原文?dāng)中的這個觀點不合理。
Thirdly, while several well-known jazz musicians live in Monroe, their residing in Monroe lend little significant support to the applicant's claim. It is entirely possible that these musicians perform elsewhere, perhaps at the club located 65 miles away. This would go a long way toward explaining why Monroe does not currently have a jazz club, and it would weaken the applicant's assertion that the C-Note would be profitable.
【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】
本段采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument正文段結(jié)構(gòu)，即先是提及原文的第三個邏輯錯誤，之后分析該邏輯錯誤的原因，接下來，進一步分析這樣的錯誤為什么讓原文的Conclusion不成立。
【本段功能】
作為正文第三段，本段攻擊原文所犯的第三個重要邏輯錯誤——因果類錯誤。原文假設(shè)因為在Monroe當(dāng)?shù)赜泻芏嗑羰繕芬魳芳?，他們的存在會促進C-Note這個爵士樂俱樂部的盈利。但實際上這些音樂家可能不會更傾向于在當(dāng)?shù)氐木銟凡垦莩?。因此，原文的這個關(guān)于音樂家和俱樂部盈利的因果假設(shè)是沒有說服力的。
Finally, the nationwide study showing that the average jazz fan spends $1,000 each year on jazz entertainment would lend support to the applicant's claim only if it could be determined that a portion of this budget would certainly be allocated for the use of enjoyment in a new club.
【本段結(jié)構(gòu)】
本段采用了標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的Argument正文段結(jié)構(gòu)，即先是提及原文的第三個邏輯錯誤，之后分析該邏輯錯誤的原因，接下來，進一步分析這樣的錯誤為什么讓原文的Conclusion不成立。
【本段功能】
作為正文第四段，本段攻擊原文所犯的第四個重要邏輯錯誤——樣本類錯誤。原文假設(shè)國家性質(zhì)的調(diào)查能夠等同于當(dāng)?shù)氐那闆r。但實際上當(dāng)?shù)氐膫€體情況可能并非如此，因此原文的這個觀點是沒有說服力的。
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