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復(fù)考也不慌!雅思寫作1周救命攻略請(qǐng)查收
即將上考場(chǎng)的烤鴨們幾家歡喜幾家愁。喜的是終于可以考試了,愁的是長(zhǎng)時(shí)間沒有好好備考,擔(dān)心自己是不是能順利出分。
所以今天,塔塔老師專門寫了一篇文章,來傳授給大家,一周時(shí)間內(nèi),寫作如何“自救”。
Day 1 確認(rèn)寫作答題流程
馬上要考試的你,是否清楚寫一篇作文共分為幾個(gè)步驟?答案是四步。在正式備考的第一天,你一定要明確在考試中你需要做哪些。
第一步:審題。拿到一道題,首先你需要判斷這道題屬于什么題型,要求討論的是什么話題。
第二步:構(gòu)思論點(diǎn)。根據(jù)題目要求嘗試構(gòu)思正方和反方的論點(diǎn)。
第三步:安排結(jié)構(gòu)。根據(jù)找到的論點(diǎn)安排合適的結(jié)構(gòu),可分為單邊討論和雙邊討論不同的情況,可以通過提綱呈現(xiàn)。
第四步:完成作文。根據(jù)寫完的提綱,完成每段內(nèi)容和語言的組織。
如果你對(duì)這些步驟沒有任何概念,可以掏出一本劍橋雅思真題,看看考官范文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是什么,里面需要包含那些內(nèi)容。
Day 2 模擬自測(cè)
在明確了寫作流程之后,在制定自己的備考規(guī)劃前,要先找到自己在寫作上的主要問題。這個(gè)時(shí)候最主要的方式就是做一次模擬考試。
找完整的一個(gè)小時(shí)(一定要計(jì)時(shí)!),完成一整套作文真題(一道小作文+一道大作文)。完成作文了以后,有條件的話,可以找老師或出分較高的同學(xué)幫你進(jìn)行批改,如果只有自己,那么可以通過和范文比對(duì)的方式來自測(cè)。
通過本次練習(xí)(自測(cè)或他人批改),能夠找到自己的問題,可以具體到審題準(zhǔn)確度、構(gòu)思論點(diǎn)的速度、結(jié)構(gòu)安排的合理性以及語言表達(dá)質(zhì)量。
Day 3-4 針對(duì)問題查漏補(bǔ)缺
有了前一天的模擬自測(cè)后,你能夠真實(shí)地發(fā)現(xiàn)自己的薄弱點(diǎn)。此時(shí),就要針對(duì)自己的情況解決問題了。
舉個(gè)例子,如果你是一個(gè)找論點(diǎn)困難戶,那么你可以在劍橋雅思書或小站雅思APP上找到考試真題,先不著急寫全文,可以只做構(gòu)思訓(xùn)練。
一般來說,完成第一篇時(shí)完成一道題目的提綱可能需要7-8分鐘。但是在你又嘗試完成幾道題的提綱后,你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),構(gòu)思時(shí)間會(huì)慢慢縮短至5分鐘以內(nèi)。在1個(gè)小時(shí)內(nèi)就能集中訓(xùn)練找論點(diǎn)的技能。
同樣地,如果是英語表達(dá)問題居多,你可以嘗試進(jìn)行漢譯英的句子翻譯練習(xí)。以6分為目標(biāo)的烤鴨,需要重點(diǎn)練習(xí)三大類從句——名詞性從句、定語從句和狀語從句的表達(dá)。句子的來源可以從高中階段的語法書上獲得。
Day 5 第二次模擬自測(cè)
經(jīng)過了前兩天的查漏補(bǔ)缺,第五天可以進(jìn)行第二次的模擬測(cè)試(同樣也需要計(jì)時(shí))。通過這次練習(xí),一方面檢驗(yàn)自己這兩天的學(xué)習(xí)成果;另一方面,也為了再次確認(rèn)目前的狀態(tài)是否能夠在考試中有較高的完成度。如果有時(shí)間的話,可以將其他筆試科目也一并進(jìn)行測(cè)試,能更真實(shí)地還原考試當(dāng)天的情況。
Day 6-7預(yù)測(cè)題練習(xí)
快考試了,一些流程性的的問題也解決了,剩下的就是結(jié)合預(yù)測(cè)題,最大程度地為后面的考試做好演練了。
這時(shí),同學(xué)們可以利用好小站雅思APP上的考試機(jī)經(jīng),進(jìn)行提前刷題。機(jī)經(jīng)上的題目都來源于歷年考試真題,是結(jié)合近期考試題,對(duì)下次考試進(jìn)行的預(yù)測(cè)。拿到預(yù)測(cè)題后,可以先想中文思路,會(huì)寫的可以跳過,不會(huì)寫的動(dòng)筆完成提綱。如果考試考到相似的題目,即可作為素材使用。
考前最后一天,不要熬夜!以飽滿的精神狀態(tài)參加第二天的考試~
當(dāng)然了,大家一定要認(rèn)識(shí)到,這個(gè)7天救命攻略只是最大程度上幫大家合理安排好考前一周的時(shí)間,而不是完全之策。如果你幸運(yùn)地還有足夠多的備考時(shí)間,比如1個(gè)月,那么你完全有時(shí)間系統(tǒng)復(fù)習(xí),提升能力。
2017年12月2日雅思寫作小作文原創(chuàng)范文及解析
雅思寫作真題范文之小作文:The pie charts below show the proportion graduate with science degree and art degree in a company in 1990 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.寫作范文及解析如下:
1.范文解析:本次小作文是一個(gè)動(dòng)態(tài)的餅圖。注意主要信息點(diǎn)總體趨勢(shì),極值和數(shù)據(jù)的對(duì)比。
2.雅思小作文范文
The two pie charts compare how many graduates in a specific company earned three different levels of Science and Art degree in two years(1990 and 2010).
In 1990, the proportion of graduates holding first degree of Art and Science was the same, both accounting for exactly 18%. By contrast, these figures enjoyed a significant growth by 2010 when they represented at 24% and 27% respectively,outnumbering that of Master of degree, including Art and Science.
As many as 25% and 20% of graduates in 1990 received their Master Degree of Art and Science separately, a little higher than that of the First and PHD Degree . However, Master Degree of Art since then suffered a sharp drop of up to 10% while the fall of the Master of Science Degree slowed to 17% in the year 2010.
It is noticeable that far fewer graduates in this company had received PHD of Science and Art within this decade, all below 12%. There was a only 1% rise in PHD of Science(from 7%-8%) but the 1990-2010 period witnessed a slight fall from 12% to 9% in that of Art.
Overall, although most graduates had Master of Degree in 1990, the First Degree predominated ten years later, with the percentage of PHD Degree always remaining the lowest across this 10-year period.(196words)
3.高分表達(dá):
How many graduates earned 多少畢業(yè)生獲得了...
Both accounting for 兩者都占據(jù)...(獨(dú)立主格)
outnumber 數(shù)量上超過
It is noticeable that 值得注意的是
The ...period witnessed a fall... 某一段時(shí)間 有一個(gè)下降趨勢(shì)
2017年12月2日雅思寫作大作文真題范文及思路解析
題目是:Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think that they should be knocked down and give way to the modem buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?老建筑應(yīng)該被推倒,讓位現(xiàn)代建筑嗎?在什么程度上你是同意或者是不同意的呢?
雅思寫作思路解析:
本周雅思作文是關(guān)于老建筑物的價(jià)值及其是否該拆除,這是個(gè)絕對(duì)的老題,老雅在雅思寫作教學(xué)和講座中曾多次以本題為例講雅思寫作的基本思路。
那么城市中的老建筑物是否應(yīng)該拆除?可能有些同學(xué)會(huì)用一邊倒的思維方式來思考這個(gè)題目,認(rèn)為不應(yīng)該拆除老建筑物,因?yàn)檫@些建筑物有歷史和文化價(jià)值,應(yīng)該保留。這個(gè)思路不錯(cuò),但接下去怎么寫呢?這些同學(xué)可能就開始懵圈了,因?yàn)閷?shí)在很難找到保留老建筑物的其他理由了。其實(shí),如果打開思路,我們就會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn),對(duì)某些人來說,城市里的老建筑物是應(yīng)該拆除的,因?yàn)閽侀_歷史文化價(jià)值,這些老建筑物的確沒有實(shí)用價(jià)值,它們占據(jù)著城市的有限空間,既不能居住,也不能為我們的生活提供任何便利,同時(shí)維護(hù)不好的話,還可能給居民帶來危險(xiǎn)。因此,就本題而言,我們可以開始論述應(yīng)該拆除老建筑物的理由,然后再論述保留老建筑物的理由(同時(shí)回答老建筑物對(duì)我們的重要意義),最后得出結(jié)論:保留老建筑物也許并不能給我們帶來實(shí)際的生活好處,但其歷史和文化價(jià)值是不能忽略的。
雅思寫作范文:
Every city has old buildings. Now the question is: how to deal with these old buildings? Some people think they should be pulled down and replaced with new ones, while others believe they should be preserved and protected.
There are a host of reasons why the urban old buildings should be removed. To start with, the old buildings are no longer suitable for people to live in, therefore they should be destroyed and give way to new buildings so that people, especially young people in the cities have more living spaces. Secondly, the old buildings can cause inconveniences for the city dwellers. Since there is not a direct route through the old buildings, people sometimes have to go to and off work by making a long detour around them, and in this way much of their time is wasted. Finally, the old buildings may give rise to safety problems. More than 100 people, for example, are killed or injured each year in my city, just because of the collapse of some ancient buildings.
Yet old buildings - at least some of them - are significant historically and culturally, and hence should be protected from being destroyed for any reason. They deserve to be well-kept and preserved because they carry some important messages about the city or the whole nation. The Summer Palace, for instance, is a perfect reminder of how the imperial family in the Qing Dynasty in feudal China were living and hence has great cultural significance. Such old buildings, if well preserved, can become a tourist spot and attract thousands of visitors from all over the world.
We all need a memory of our past. Many old buildings do have historical and cultural value which tells us who we were. We need to take good care of these buildings and keep them as long as possible so that they can tell the stories of the city or the nation to the future generation. Of course, those old buildings with little value ought to be pulled down, especially when they pose safety problems to people.(346 words)
高分詞匯和表達(dá)
pull down 摧毀,拆掉
replace 取代
preserve 保留
a host of 眾多的
city dweller 城市居民
make a detour 繞道
give rise to 引發(fā)
collapse 倒塌
deserve 值得
reminder 提醒物
imperial 帝王的
feudal 封建的
pose 形成
2017年12月2日雅思考試寫作真題大作文高分范文
給大家?guī)?017年12月2日?qǐng)龅难潘紝懽鞔笞魑母叻址段?,社?huì)類話題,題目是:Too much money is spent in maintaining and repairing old buildings, some people think that they should be knocked down and give way to the modem buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?推倒古老建筑,讓位現(xiàn)代建筑,你在哪些程度上是同意的或是不同意的呢?請(qǐng)看高分寫作范文,范文來自雅思哥。
雅思寫作范文:
It is easy to notice that there are many old buildings in modem cities today. While some people think they should be removed to make way for new ones, I tend to believe most of them should be better protected.
In the contemporary age, there is a constant debate over preserving history versus making progress. In terms of the old buildings, many people assert that they should be better protected while others claim that they should be knocked down to make way for new ones.
It is widely acknowledged that many old buildings are protected today because they are culturally valuable to a nation. Like a native language, many historical buildings form a cultural identity and keep a unique record of a country, so they possess significant value to research into the past and play an important function in the education of future generations.
Moreover, old buildings, if utilized and preserved properly, could actually contribute to economic development. For example, Westminster Abbey in London, the Eiffel Tower in Paris and the Forbidden City in Beijing, as icons and landmarks of the city and nation, attract a large number of tourists every year, which brings millions of dollars in revenue for the government.
Nevertheless, we are not advocating equal treatment for all old buildings, and some of them do need to be torn down, partly because of safety concerns, and partly because they need to be replaced to meet the need of social development, such as raising the utilization rate of land. Despite this, many more historical buildings deserve our protection and we should not be blind to their worth; otherwise, we will regret loss in the years to come.
In summary, I believe that the protection of old buildings does not stand in the way of progress at all; instead, they play an indispensable role in reflecting history, and creating values in modern life. Governments should think carefully before making a move and deep awareness of conservation of ancient architecture should be highly promoted as well.
2017年12月2日雅思寫作大作文原創(chuàng)范文
帶來2017年12月2日雅思寫作真題大作文范文,題目是:Too much money is spent on looking after and repairing old buildings. Some people think money should be spent on building new modern buildings.To what extent do you agree or disagree with these views.本題討論因?yàn)榛ㄔ诒Wo(hù)老建筑物的錢太多,所以錢應(yīng)該花在新建現(xiàn)代建筑物上。其實(shí)本題的本質(zhì)是在變相考察不保護(hù)老建筑物的弊端和建筑現(xiàn)在建筑物的優(yōu)勢(shì)。
1.范文解析:題目類型是議論文的一種觀點(diǎn)類是To what extant do you agree or disagree類型,可以采用雙邊討論,也就是5段式作文。特別需要注意的是,題目中讓討論的不是:是否應(yīng)該保護(hù)古老歷史建
Buildings, whether they are old or modern, is more than just a place where human beings could escape from bad weather. Therefore, financial aid should never only be provided to the construction of modern buildings.
Just catering to the growth of urban sprawl is exactly what empowers the investment in modern buildings to be worthwhile. As an ever increasing number of people flood into cities for a better quality of life, both skyscrapers and high-rise buildings could accommodate the growing population, an effective and efficient solution to housing shortage in cities. With the infrastructure improving at the same time, this will also attract more investors and create and enhance way more job opportunities, thus energizing and bolstering the urban economy. In this case, financing the protection and preservation of old buildings is less preferable than that of modern ones.
However, such commitment to sponsor new buildings turns out to be in fact far more pricey. This is principally because when constructing a brand new building, building materials such as bricks, glass, steal , wood and so on are required and even worse more building wastes that are usually toxic are then have to be headed to the landfill. In addition to these material cost, the burden it imposes on resource scarcity and pollution could be prohibitively expensive, and in other words, never could these problems be resolved by money alone. By stark contrast, conserving traditional buildings consumes less and thereby proves to be both economical and environmental friendly.
Compared with conventional buildings, modern, high-tech buildings are also a financial failure in a sense. They do not enjoy as much special aesthetic value and historic significance as old ones do and what is worse is that they are so similar around the world that fewer visitors are willing to come and that fewer investors to establish new business. Old buildings, as a cultural heritage on the other hand, could attract millions of people and bring countless dollars and jobs for the locals. Therefore, maintaining them is not a money waster but rather a money-maker.
In conclusion, conducive as it is to urbanization, the creation of new buildings is not as inexpensive as the conservation of old ones and maybe the coexistence of both is by far the best, ideal result.(339 words)原創(chuàng)來自小站邢睿贏老師
3.文章結(jié)構(gòu)
P1:引入話題+表明觀點(diǎn)(不同意)
P2:承認(rèn)現(xiàn)代建筑物的優(yōu)勢(shì):可以緩解房屋短缺和吸引投資來論證
P3:指出其弊端之后:現(xiàn)代建筑物會(huì)惡化資源短缺和環(huán)境污染來論證
P4:進(jìn)一步指出:新建筑物不能像老建筑物那樣促進(jìn)旅游業(yè)的發(fā)展來論證
P5:總結(jié)(總結(jié)分論點(diǎn)+重申觀點(diǎn))
4.高分話題表達(dá)(范文中已用紅色標(biāo)注) More than 不僅僅是
Escape from 拜托;免受...之苦
Urban sprawl 城市擴(kuò)張
Empower ...to do sth 使能夠(enable的同義詞)
Worthwhile 值得做的。。。
,an effective and efficient solution to sth 一個(gè)高效的的解決辦法
Flood into 大量涌入
With infrastructure improving 隨著基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施的完成(獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu))
Energizing and bolstering 加強(qiáng)
urban economy 城市經(jīng)濟(jì)
Preferable 更合適的
Prohibitively expensive 價(jià)格高的離譜
Financial failure 財(cái)務(wù)上的失敗
Money-maker 賺錢的生意;搖錢樹
Conducive 有益的
5.高分結(jié)構(gòu)
Whether they are old or modern 不管是舊的還是新的
what empowers sth to be worthwhile 使得某事值得做
An effective and efficient solution to 概括性同位語
With infrastructure improving 獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)
This is principally because 這主要是因?yàn)?..
Never could these problems be resolved by money alone. 不能只依靠錢來解決。 倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)。
What is worse is that 更糟糕的是。。(主語從句)
Conducive as it is 盡管是有益的。。(狀語從句的倒裝)