劍15寫作之大小作文及范文解析
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劍15寫作 | 大小作文及范文解析
Test 1 屬于靜態(tài)柱狀圖;
Test 2 屬于動(dòng)態(tài)線形圖;
Test 3 為流程圖;
Test 4 則是餅圖與表格的混合圖。
4道題中包括了學(xué)術(shù)類小作文考試中主要的動(dòng)靜態(tài)數(shù)據(jù)類圖表，以及較為特殊的混合圖及流程圖。
基于這樣的出題分布，再結(jié)合近3年的考試趨勢，老師給到大家的小作文備考建議是：穩(wěn)中求勝。
以往，總有一些學(xué)生因?yàn)闆]有分配足夠多的時(shí)間在寫作學(xué)科，所以到了考前抱有僥幸心理，主攻考試頻率較高的數(shù)據(jù)圖，而忽略了地圖題、流程圖的準(zhǔn)備。
而這種做法，在后續(xù)1年的考試中，是非常危險(xiǎn)的做法。
這一點(diǎn)，我們可以從官方給出的幾大訊號(hào)得到。
訊號(hào)一：近年劍橋雅思真題題型分布均勻
小作文中，同學(xué)們一般容易忽視的圖可分為地圖題，流程圖以及混合圖類型。
這里我們先以地圖和流程圖為例。
如果關(guān)注了劍11之后的劍雅真題的同學(xué)不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，這兩類題型除了劍11以外，在后續(xù)每一年的真題集上都有一席之地：C12T2，C12T4，C13T1，C13T4，C14T3，C14T4，C15T3。
再來看到混合圖。
混合圖在C11T4，C14T2以及C15T4也都有出現(xiàn)。
訊號(hào)二：特殊題型在真題中出現(xiàn)頻率維持較高
由2019年大陸地區(qū)的真題回憶情況來看，地圖和流程圖各出現(xiàn)2次，而混合圖出現(xiàn)1次，共計(jì)5次，在全年50次考試中占到了10%的比重。
換言之，每兩個(gè)月的考試中，就有一次是這些題型。
同樣，在考試頻頻取消的2020年，早在年初1月18日的考試中，就已出現(xiàn)了地圖題的身影。
訊號(hào)三：反預(yù)測的考試形式出現(xiàn)
消失了4年多的AB卷考試形式(上一次出現(xiàn)在2015年11月)，在2020年也重新回到我們的眼球。
AB卷意味著什么?意味著同一天的考試有兩套完全不同的題目。
也就是說，同學(xué)們更有可能在考試中碰到自己不會(huì)的題型。
剛剛提及的今年1月18日的考試，就屬于在AB卷中其中一套題目里考核了地圖題的情況。
而且，往年的考試中，我們一般可以通過前一個(gè)月或幾個(gè)月的考題情況，來預(yù)測后面可能會(huì)出現(xiàn)的小作文題型，而今年因?yàn)闆]有太多真題可做參考，所以對(duì)于下半年的小作文題目預(yù)測來說，也加大了難度。
由此可見，只有當(dāng)一名考生在考前，將各類題型都做好充分準(zhǔn)備的情況下，才能保證在考場上無論考到何種題型都能正常發(fā)揮。
二、大作文篇
和小作文保持了相同的規(guī)律，劍15大作文的題型也分布平均，從Test 1到Test 4分別是：
混合題型(第一問是報(bào)告，第二問是積極/消極)
是否同意
討論雙方觀點(diǎn)
分析利弊
同學(xué)們?cè)跍?zhǔn)備的過程中，仍然是各類題型都要做好充分的準(zhǔn)備。
而從話題的角度，劍15的大作文分別考到了：社會(huì)，媒體/科技，媒體/廣告，教育。
仍然符合歷年的熱門話題出題規(guī)律。細(xì)看之下會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，有的話題其實(shí)非常老套，簡直就是將老題同義轉(zhuǎn)換再拿出來考一次：
這是劍15 Test2的大作文：
這是2019年1月的考題(這道題更早也在境內(nèi)外考過)
Although more and more people read news on the Internet,
newspapers remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
論據(jù)和思路是不是也可以從以前這些題目找靈感?
Some people think traveling abroad is necessary while others think that is not necessary because TV and the internet can give the same information.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(2016.8.4)
Some people think computers and the Internet are more important in child’s education. Others believe that schools and teachers are essential for children to learn.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.(2015.5.30)
所以同學(xué)們對(duì)于經(jīng)典老題還是要花心思的，好好準(zhǔn)備能夠做到舉一反三。
但同時(shí)，劍15寫作部分有的題目，在熟悉的話題框架之下，考察了更抽象的角度，同學(xué)們也千萬不要掉以輕心。
比如我們來看這一道：
注意后面那句話，說的是“有的人認(rèn)為廣告太普遍了以至于我們不再注意到它”。
很多同學(xué)一看到考廣告，嘴角一絲微笑，馬上就會(huì)開始圍繞著“廣告的利弊”展開，寫到?jīng)_動(dòng)消費(fèi)啊，寫到對(duì)孩子的引誘啊等等;
但這道題偏偏考的是廣告的影響力——現(xiàn)在廣告對(duì)人是否還有那么大的作用。
所以同學(xué)們?cè)趯忣}方面，千萬要看準(zhǔn);而在準(zhǔn)備的時(shí)候，也要注意打開思維角度，關(guān)注熟悉的話題那些不熟悉的提問角度。
三、范文篇
真正厲害的烤鴨絕不會(huì)忽視隱藏菜單。
除了題型/題目的方向性預(yù)測，劍雅書還能提供什么有價(jià)值的“干貨”，幫助寫作賽道的寶寶們加速呢?
如果同學(xué)們只顧著刷題就把書扔到一邊，而忽視最后幾頁的“范文”，就有點(diǎn)暴殄天物了。
有的同學(xué)有疑問：
書后面的范文，有的好難完全讀不懂，和老師教的套路也不一樣
分?jǐn)?shù)比我自己還低，水平參差不齊，看了是不是反而有誤導(dǎo)性?
老師這就帶大家來walk through劍15的范文。
講解劍15范文之前，首先要重申一個(gè)大家都知道的秘密：劍雅書上面的范文分為兩個(gè)類別：
一類是Modal Answer，所謂考官范文，也就是大家常?？吹降摹癟his modal has been prepared by an examiner as an example of a very good answer ”.
還有一類是Sample Answer，也就是考生在考場上實(shí)際發(fā)揮的樣本。
第一類考官范文，一般大家可以理解為滿分范文，沒有滿分也在8以上;
第二類考生例文，會(huì)給到明確分?jǐn)?shù)以及考官評(píng)語。
比如這樣：
需要明白的是，這兩種“范文”對(duì)大家的參考意義是不一樣的：
看Modal Answer，就像膜拜一個(gè)大神，想想你們身邊的學(xué)霸，是不是每天在暗中觀察想抄人家的作業(yè)以及思考怎么抄。
看Sample Answer，就像看一個(gè)和自己不相上下的對(duì)手，人家寫的明明和你差不多但竟然比你高0.5，你不服于是要揣摩下別人贏在哪;人家寫的明明和你差不多但是只得了4.5，你不明所以也要看看這局怎么死的。
看到這里是不是懂了劍雅的良苦用心?
明白這一點(diǎn)后我們?cè)賮砜磩?5的兩個(gè)facts：
1. 這本書沒有一篇Modal Answer
2. 這本書的Sample Answer分?jǐn)?shù)區(qū)間都在6-7
這又意味著什么?
其實(shí)從劍11開始，考官范文Modal Answer就已經(jīng)在劍雅書上退場了(劍14是個(gè)例外，大小作文各有一篇Modal Answer)。
從這個(gè)維度來看，劍雅更想給大家提供的，是更實(shí)際、對(duì)大家更有參考和對(duì)照意義的考生視角，而不是離大家的水平比較遙遠(yuǎn)的考官視角。
分析考場上真實(shí)發(fā)揮的其他考生例文和相應(yīng)的考官評(píng)價(jià)，分析他們的得分點(diǎn)和失分點(diǎn)，能夠讓我們對(duì)于四個(gè)評(píng)分維度、以及每個(gè)維度上不同分?jǐn)?shù)段的細(xì)微差別，有更真切的體會(huì)。
除了剛才說的沒有了Modal Answer這個(gè)慣性規(guī)律，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)，還減少了分?jǐn)?shù)段比較低(4.5-5.5)的例文。對(duì)照最近這五本劍雅書的例文分?jǐn)?shù)區(qū)間，我們還能夠發(fā)現(xiàn)一個(gè)規(guī)律，劍15選取的考生例文分?jǐn)?shù)區(qū)間明顯縮小了。
劍15選取分?jǐn)?shù)區(qū)間為6-7的考生例文，更貼近于普遍大陸考生的目標(biāo)水平，也便于廣大考生從內(nèi)容完成度、連貫性、詞匯、語法句型四個(gè)維度去找到突破口。
雅思大作文模板：人口增長問題
雅思大作文模板范文參考：
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, the population of teenagers is on the rise in some countries which might have both positive and negative effects on the progress of a nation. Here, I would like to account for current and upcoming consequences of this phenomenon.
Multifarious positive effects can be put down behind this happening. First and foremost, youthful generation plays a phenomenal role to flourish the progress of a nation. For example, majority of young people are expected to learn professional skills related to science, engineering, medical, technology, sports and so on. As a result, a country will be enriched with a massive number of prodigious talented people who could contribute remarkably at jobs to ensure the development of their nation. Besides this, advancement strides only in the presence of youngsters. To be specific, young blood is energetic, agile, creative and adaptive who welcome new changes, adjust nicely and can introduce innovative ideas for betterment of living standard. Hence, a nation is supposed to be more advanced than others.
Moreover, youngsters are well educated, advanced and conscious about healthy living standard. Thence, they could be made willing to participate in social welfare activities such as planting more trees, promoting cleanliness, saving wild life, using biodegradable materials so on to evolve pleasant ecological conditions and superior lifestyle. On the contrary, it has thorny side too.
To begin with, in many thriving regions, employment sources are less due to deprivation of industries and other commercial sectors. Therefore, increasingly number of young people is leading to lack of job opportunities in such areas. Furthermore, the cultural heritage of a nation may lose its significance. To be specific, unlike other age groups, youthful generation has tendency to develop their own ways of living and attitudes rather than following traditional values. Thus, individuality of a culture will be at the low ebb. All of above, generation gap will spread its roots on account of imbalanced ratio of different age groups. Hence, misunderstandings and disputes might be the order of the day between young and late adulthood.
To recapitulate, elevation in the number youngsters may lead to some hardships. However, I still believe positive outcomes will exceed negative results.
雅思大作文模板：廣告的影響
雅思大作文模板范文參考：
Whether we like it or not, advertising has penetrated into all aspects of life, which has significantly affected people's buying decisions and lifestyles. I believe that this trend does more harm than good to people's lives.
To boost the sales or promote new products, companies tend to design the advertisement to be tempting, or invite popular stars and celebrities to the advertising campaign. This can impel consumers to open their wallets to buy the goods impulsively. Consumers used to care more about the price, quality and purpose of the product, but now they shift their attention to the product's popularity or whether their idols are using the same brand.
In addition, the fashionable elements involved in the advertisement often put consumers under pressure. They may worry that they are out of fashion as described on the advertising, and thus follow the trend to buy the recommended goods, regardless of price. This spending habit can lead to an economic burden or a wrong concept of consumption. Some people, especially young consumers, may compete with others in material ways.
There is no denying that advertisements provide useful information and assist consumers' decision-making, when they are faced with various products made by competitive manufacturers. However, this cannot change the fact that many companies tend to exaggerate the strong points and neglect the weaknesses of their products in the advertising, making it difficult for consumers to get a clear picture of the product.
In conclusion, advertising is unavoidable in the commercial society. To reduce its negative effects on the general public, the authorities need to regulate the advertising industry and encourage rational spending.
雅思大作文模板：講座授課是否有意義
雅思大作文模板范文參考：
Although lectures are normally used to teach students knowledge, there has been an argument that students no longer need to attend lectures, due to the development of technology. Personally, I think that lectures deserve a place in the education system.
Instead of attending lectures, people can depend on computers and the internet to improve learning outcomes. One benefit of using social networking websites is that they can keep the pace of learning by themselves and manage to make the most of time and resources. This educational model is important especially for those people who have work commitments. They are likely to outperform in the related area easier.
Another approach to replace lectures is to register for online courses, and this can help people pursue a higher educational qualifications. Online courses provide people with opportunities to gain access to knowledge without paying educational expenses. In this way, they are more likely to pursue a university degree, especially for those from disadvantaged backgrounds.
On the other hand, attending lectures plays an inevitably role in preparing people for their future career. It offers an environment where students are encouraged to communicate with each other and build up a network of contacts, which is beneficial to improving their interpersonal skills. This can help them make a transition to the workplace.
To summarise, I believe that attending lectures remains the most important way for students to acquire new knowledge and achieve good performance, although technology and the internet are likely to make learning more easily.
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