雅思寫作語法錯誤分析

雅思寫作語法錯誤分析， 高頻句型用好不容易，今天小編就給大家?guī)砹搜潘紝懽髡Z法錯誤分析，希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。

雅思寫作語法錯誤分析 高頻句型用好不容易

很多備考雅思寫作的同學最愛用的高頻句式，也是從小接觸英語最開始的句型there be，可以說是人見人愛(雖然對考官來說，也許是人見人厭)，在各種話題，雅思大小作文中都通用的結(jié)構(gòu)，可是，它也是很多烤鴨經(jīng)常不注意就出錯的陷阱地方。比如說，我們想表達“有好幾個原因?qū)е铝诉@個結(jié)果?！?，如果按照字面的意思直接翻譯，很容易寫成“There are several reasons lead to the result.”這樣的句子。這樣一來，我們會發(fā)現(xiàn)，這個句子中出現(xiàn)了雙謂語： are和 lead。這種錯誤，我們可以通過提醒自己，在寫there be句型時，be動詞部分保持主謂一致，但其他的行為的描述我們?nèi)懛侵^語或者從句。

也就是說，剛才錯誤的句子我們可以改成There are several reasons leading to the result. 或者There are several reasons which lead to the result.大家可以立刻嘗試下，結(jié)合非謂語或者從句翻譯下面的句子：“有一些公司允許員工在家工作?！?/p>

除了雙謂語的這樣的雅思寫作高頻錯誤外，很多同學在處理中文想說的比較長難的句子時候，也會直接翻譯，而反映出中式英語或者很多語法錯誤，我們來看一個例子?！霸谏钪谐霈F(xiàn)的問題可以解決，對未來有可能出現(xiàn)的麻煩進行規(guī)避?！蹦銜趺磳戇@句話呢?曾經(jīng)有同學寫出過 “Life problems can solve， future trouble can prevent.”這樣的翻譯版本。各位同學如果仔細挑一挑錯誤，會發(fā)現(xiàn)，一個句子中出現(xiàn)了雙主語，雙謂語。那么，解決辦法最簡單的是把逗號變句號，寫成兩句話。或者進行相關的連接詞的銜接，比如此句中可以加and來連接兩個簡單句。除了這個錯誤外，我們還會發(fā)現(xiàn)，問題自己怎么解決?麻煩自己怎么預防?所以，這種中文說起來像主動，但是在英語表達中我們實際上需要被動的翻譯，是大家要去多注意和檢查的雅思寫作陷阱地方。如果對應中文直接翻譯，就出現(xiàn)了多動詞，語態(tài)不合理的問題了。所以這個句子應該改成Problems in life can be solved and trouble in future may be prevented.

所以說，很多在雅思寫作中的語法錯誤其實是因為直接對應中文進行翻譯而產(chǎn)生的，如果各位備考雅思的同學可以在寫作的過程中多注意這些陷阱，就可以減少錯誤出現(xiàn)的幾率直至避免。

雅思大作文7種寫作誤區(qū)實例解讀 觀點含蓄無人懂

請看雅思寫作誤區(qū)實例：

①it seems arbitrary to assume that older generation’s traditional ideas are not the right way in the present age.

②First of all, international travel requires more than just money, People generate prejudice to(against) a place for their lack of knowledge about it

再跟筆者提供的表達進行比較

①older generations' ideas so often still have their place in a modern world。

②people may build prejudice against a place on their ignorance of it during an international travel.

雅思寫作的觀點句要求清晰明了，開門見山是最基本的要義，不要玩任何拐彎抹角的文字游戲。一位考官指出中國考生的作文，最致命的問題就是在導入段開始，一是表達自己觀點不清不楚;二是話題都沒有讀懂，一動筆已偏題。這樣的作文，開頭寥寥幾句讀完，考官就給你定好了分數(shù)段了。

開門見山的表達如何實現(xiàn)，其實很簡單，用主動句，用主謂賓句型就可以了。

附雅思考官寫作的導入段欣賞：開門見山最佳范例

①People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it would be better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believe that everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.

②It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidizing the industry.

雅思大作文7種寫作誤區(qū)實例解讀 措辭武斷惹人厭

請看一個雅思寫作例子：There is no denying that encouraging industries or businesses walk out densely populated cities will diminish the inequality between urban and rural areas. But here is the thing, do we really keep the pros and avoid the cons via this attempt? The answer is obviously "no", or otherwise we should be naturally born in balanced development society. In fact, I think that encouraging industries and businesses to move out the cities is an attempt of no point.

這段話里，有三處讀了覺得不爽的地方：There is no denying that，obviously "no"，an attempt of no point。雖然這些表達展現(xiàn)出了作者十分的自信(我很欣賞)，但是是誰給你的這份自信可以這么決絕地表達。那我作為一個雅思寫作考官，就不能deny了么?作為支持產(chǎn)業(yè)遷出大城市的一方，我的attempt就變成no point了么?我同這位作者進行了交流，原來他的這番決絕是事出有因的：其實我抓不太準寫作的強硬度，之前被說觀點不明確(因為題目通常正反兩面都可我就都說一下)所以。。。大概是過猶不及現(xiàn)在只陳述單一方好像又太武斷= =

感覺好為難啊。所以，作者為了讓己方的觀點更為明確，便如此用詞。相信，這個用詞的初衷是很多人都有的吧。我對他的答復是：在雅思寫作中，你所說的觀點不明朗和表達觀點時的穩(wěn)重，中肯一點都不矛盾。要有明顯的立場，只需要你采取一邊倒的論證方式就行。就算是在陳述反方立場時，你也要表明它的局限性?？傊o予站方立場更多的話語權就行。但是表達觀點時的中肯，是要杜絕absolutely之類表意極端而輕佻的用詞，你的tone不要讀起來很決絕(很非此即彼)，你是在用你的邏輯一字一句的說服別人，要有這種感覺。

在雅思大作文中，如何讓自己的口吻更加溫和，說理更加中肯?其實有一些常用的學術審慎語可供使用：

some most many/much a few/a little/sometimes usual/usually normally generally/in general on the whole/tend to/may might likely/likelihood probable/probably perhaps/maybe might as well

像大多數(shù)人在雅思寫作時都容易中招的there is no denying/doubt that…是一個經(jīng)典的粗暴句式，其實稍稍修改，它就會溫和很多。試著讀一讀：there is little denying/doubt that…。如果要進一步軟化的話，可以寫成：there is arguably/probably little denying/doubt that…。

雅思大作文7種寫作誤區(qū)實例解讀 語法錯誤最致命

還是看雅思寫作實例，大家可以一起來找茬

Last but not least, those who lacks skills to deal with people and fails to control their emotions would more likely to form prejudice during their international travel. It is a common situation to get cheated by people there for the reason of ignorance of local situation. Necessarily, open-minded is required to deal with unjudged treatments. Otherwise the bad memories would not only affect the journey but lead to the prejudice towards all the citizens of the place.

再來看結(jié)果

Last but not least, those who lacks(lack) skills to deal with people and fails(fail) to control their emotions would (be)more likely to form prejudice during their international travel. It is a common situation to get cheated by people there for the reason of ignorance of local situation. Necessarily, open-minded(open-mindedness) is required to deal with unjudged(這個詞是什么意思?unfair吧?)treatments. Otherwise the bad memories would not only affect the journey but lead to the prejudice towards all the citizens of the place.

語法和詞匯是語言的兩大基石。在雅思寫作中，所有渴望高分的烤鴨無不希望能有一雙讓自己自由翱翔的翅膀?？墒呛芏鄷r候，語法基礎的薄弱，讓不少人在嘗試復雜句型時頻頻出錯，而另一方面，最基礎的一些語法，如名詞單復數(shù)，冠詞，動詞時態(tài)等又時常被很多人忽視，于是一篇用詞屌屌，思路濤濤，自我感覺甚好的文章被打入6—的冷宮時，某些人可能還不知罪在何處。

因為有些逛外文論壇的經(jīng)驗，跟國內(nèi)論壇進行，國人在遣詞造句時，對語法的要求真的是很low，各種錯字，錯詞，莫名其妙的表達層出不窮，而我們大都淡然。所以，這種隨意也自然地在很多人的作文中得到了體現(xiàn)。學好語法，重視語法，只會讓自己的雅思備考之路越走越寬。