雅思考官教你的4大寫作提分點
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雅思考官教你的4大寫作提分點
Answer all parts of the question
這一點很多老師在我們的公開課中都有強調(diào)，可惜很多寶寶們還是花費大量的精力在詞匯句式的堆砌上。忽略這一點的重要性。Task Response是四項評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中最容易提高的一項，考官明確說明，如果你的文章沒有回答全部問題，你的TR這一項的分?jǐn)?shù)不會高于5。
Timing and Blocking
怎樣在20分鐘與40分鐘中完成一篇結(jié)構(gòu)充實的小大作文?考官教我們做做數(shù)學(xué)題
你可以計算一下你要分幾段，每一段幾句話，每句話大致多少單詞，從而完成兩篇150字以及250字的文章。
A topic sentence for each paragraph
Make sure that each paragraph has a topic sentence!!!這一點相信所有的雅思寫作老師都強調(diào)過，但是我們在批改作文的時候還是發(fā)現(xiàn)很多寶寶忽視了這一點的重要性。這個中心句要直接明了，不要太模糊，讓考官讀完就是到你這段要講什么。一個中心句加三個展開論述句，這是考官給的結(jié)構(gòu)建議。
Use synonymous and paraphrase
高頻詞的同義詞替換是寫作詞匯部分提分的重要技巧。不要重復(fù)用相同的詞，同義詞的使用會向考官展現(xiàn)你詞匯運用的range。
這里考官強調(diào)注意一下替換詞的“性質(zhì)”。想表達positive的詞義就用positive的詞去替換，反之用negative。學(xué)姐給大家舉個例子，表示“影響”的詞，effect多用作積極意思，而impair多用作消極層面的影響。替換influence 的時候要選對性質(zhì)。
如果你的詞匯量沒有那么大，那就學(xué)會掌握paraphrase的技巧，用一句話去解釋你想說的詞，順便還能用個從句或者分詞結(jié)構(gòu)增加一下句子多樣性。
最后考官強調(diào)，想在寫作中拿高分，你一定要知道考官的expectation是什么。即使是一個native speaker, 如果他對雅思考試完全不了解，他也不一定能拿到很好的分?jǐn)?shù)。因此掌握雅思考試的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)至關(guān)重要。如果你還不了解雅思考試的評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，請一定要仔細(xì)看學(xué)姐發(fā)過的關(guān)于雅思評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)解讀的文章。
雅思評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)詳解
IELTS writing advice
One of the main problems is that the students don’t address entire questions, and you can’t get over 5, if you don’t address all the questions for task response.
On the day, when you get your question, read it thoroughly, examined it, dissect it, what it is asking you to do, and probably ask you to do the minimum 2 things, maximum 4 things, make sure you cover all the elements of the question.
Timing is essential, you are only given 40 minutes roughly for writing task2, writing task1 is 20 minutes. Plan your work, take the time, take at least 2 to 3 minutes to plan your work before you actually start writing. Also you can do the math. Writing the task1 and you are asked to write 150 words, if you break 150 words down into 4 paragraphs, that’s 35 words per paragraph.
Generally sum, if there are 10 words per sentence. So if you are writing a 3-sentence-paragraph that’s 30 words, if you need to write 50 words in one paragraph that’s 5 sentences. So you can block it, my first paragraph is going to be 3 or 4 sentences, my last paragraph is going to be 2 to 3 sentences, so you can block it out see it first before you write it.
Make sure that each paragraph has a topic sentence, it jumps out as the reader when they read your piece of writing, if you have a strong topic sentence, it jumps out, it sends a message that you know what actually it is what you are writing about, and also that helps you focus on that paragraph. One topic sentence, one paragraph, 3 supporting sentences, based on that topic sentences.
Referring from repeating the same word over and over again, there are many synonyms for the same word, use them
The use of increase once, use go up and then use rise or decrease, go down, fall, try not to repeat vocabulary.
The words for business or businesses, ok, then you can talk about companies, cooperations, ask yourself is the word I want to substitute to, it is positive or positive words, if it is the positive words, you replace with the positive words, for the negative words replace with the negative words.
You don’t necessarily have to have a broad range of vocabulary just to score high on the writing test, as long as you have the ability to paraphrase, so even you don’t know the specific word, you can describe that meaning of that word.
When you sit down and if you don’t take it seriously on the day, even if you are a native speaker, you probably won’t do as well as you thought you would, so you have to go with the mind said..that this is the exam and I have to meet their criterial of that exam, know what the expectation is and meet that expectation as best as you can, and it is not out of reach for anybody really but have the babble that what the expectation is. Read the question(笑)exactly.
雅思作文：常用來表達看法與立場的英式短語&句型
Functional Expressions:
Expressing Thoughts and opinions
have mixed views on
(人們)各持不同的看法
實戰(zhàn)例句
It has been around fifteen years since the Internet was first introduced into British households but people still have mixed views on whether it is a positive or negative influence on society.
從因特網(wǎng)第一次走進英國家庭到現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)有將近十五年了，但人們至今關(guān)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)對社會產(chǎn)生的影響究竟是積極的還是消極的仍然意見不一。
常見的反義短語或句型
reach consensus on...
(人們) 對某事達成一致意見
例句
I will be difficult for people to reach a consensus on this issue.
要讓人們對這一事件達成統(tǒng)一的意見是十分困難的。
I take the view that..
我所持的看法是……
例句
I take the view that free education should be available to financially needy people.
我所持的看法是應(yīng)該時那些財務(wù)緊張的人們提供免費的教育。
be of the opinion that...
(某人的) 個人意見是 (注意不能遺漏句型中的介詞of)
例句
They are of the opinion that morality cannot be legislated.他們的意見是道德是不能由法律來規(guī)定的。
be a highly charged issue
是一個引起激辯的話題
實戰(zhàn)例句
Euthanasia is a highly charged issue in many European countries.
安樂死在許多歐洲國家都是一個備受爭議的話題。
常見的近義短語或句型
ignite fierce debate
引發(fā)了激烈的爭論
例句
The song's lyrics ignited fierce debate last year.
這首歌的歌詞在去年引發(fā)了激烈的爭論。
be a well-established fact
(某事) 是為人們所共知的事實
例句
It is a well-established fact that very young children learn best by rote.
人們普遮公認(rèn)低齡兒童更適合通過機械記憶來學(xué)習(xí)。
The tide of opinion is now running steadily against...
目前的觀點普遍傾向于反對……
實戰(zhàn)例句
The tide of opinion is now running steadily against the new traffic law.
目前人們的觀點普遍傾向于反對新頒布的交通法。
常見近義短語或句型
The majority of people oppose…
多數(shù)人反對……
例句
The majority of people oppose the proposed tax reform.
對于提交上去的稅制改革方案，多數(shù)人持反對意見。
It stands to reason that...
(某現(xiàn)象) 是符合常理的
實戰(zhàn)例句
It stands to reason that a child who is constantly criticised will grow up to have no self-confidence.
一個在不斷被挑剔的環(huán)境中長大的孩子，在成年后會變得毫無自信，這是符合常理的邏輯。
常見近義短語或句型
The concerns that... are well-justified.
對于某事的擔(dān)心是完全合理的
例句
The concerns that the new law will curtail(削減)NGO (非政府組織)activities are well-justified.
人們關(guān)于新法規(guī)可能會減少非政府組織活動的擔(dān)心是完全合理的。
It is an inescapable fact that...
是一個無法回避的事實
實戰(zhàn)例句
It is an inescapable fact that some students behave badly and damage the learning environment.
有一些學(xué)生行為惡劣并且破壞學(xué)習(xí)氣氛的問題是一個無法回避的事實。
常見近義短語或句型
be unavoidable
是不可避免的
例句
Many people feared that war was unavoidable.
許多人害怕戰(zhàn)爭最終還是會無可避免地來臨。
... be noticeabie
(某種現(xiàn)象) 十分顯著
實戰(zhàn)例句
The differences between the British and American academic systems are noticeable.
英國和美國的學(xué)術(shù)體制差別十分顯著。
常見近義短語或句型
...be substantial differences
某種差異是本質(zhì)性的
例句
There were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at various levels.
在不同的級別上，男女人數(shù)的比例有著本質(zhì)性的差異。
The underlying cause of sth. is…
某現(xiàn)象的深層原因是……
實戰(zhàn)例句
We should look into the underlying cause of this problem.
我們應(yīng)該從更深一層去剖析這個問題的原因。
常用聯(lián)想短語或句型
A fundamental mistake made by sb.is...
某人所犯的根本性錯誤是...
例句
Their fundamental mistake is to rely too much on technology.
他們所犯的根本性錯誤就是太過于依賴科技了
2018年6月2日雅思寫作高分范文：社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)之利弊
2018年6月2日場的雅思真題是：Many people today prefer socializing online to spending time with friends in local community. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?越來越多的人選擇在線上和朋友消磨時間。這是一件利大于弊的事嗎?雅思哥的范文認(rèn)為，總體上這是一件利大于弊的事。首先：社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)打開了我們的社交圈，拓展了社交方式，與世界各地的人形成聯(lián)系。各個年齡層的人都可以通過社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)做自己想做的事;此外，社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)讓人們有機會接觸到更多的社會話題，促進社會變革和社會公益;當(dāng)然，社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)也會帶來用戶隱私問題。一起來看范文具體內(nèi)容：
雅思大作文范文
As teenagers still seem to make up a huge percentage of social networkers, millions of adults and seniors today are becoming active on social networking sites. In general, I think this trend have exerted desirable impacts on people and society as a whole.
正如隨著青少年在社交網(wǎng)絡(luò)上占了很大比例，如今，數(shù)以百萬計的成年人和老年人在社交網(wǎng)站上也變得活躍起來。總的來說，我認(rèn)為這一趨勢對人們和整個社會產(chǎn)生了有益的影響。
On social media sites, such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter and Linkedln etc., users may develop biographical profiles, communicate with friends and strangers, do research, and share thoughts, photos, music, links, and more. Compared with the traditional way of communicating with people face-to-face, they provide rich opportunities for making new friends, especially when someone is looking forward to building up and maintaining connection with others with common interests both personally and professionally. Also, nowadays millions of people of all ages have tried the Internet dating services as a way to possibly find a lifelong partner. Therefore, experience suggests that socializing online is a great way to get acquainted with people that we would never have met otherwise.
在Facebook、Instagram、Twitter和Linkedln等社交媒體網(wǎng)站上，用戶可以開發(fā)個人簡介，與朋友和陌生人交流，進行研究，分享想法、照片、音樂、鏈接等等。與傳統(tǒng)的面對面交流方式相比，他們?yōu)榻Y(jié)交新朋友提供了豐富的機會，特別是當(dāng)有人期待與他人建立并保持與他人的聯(lián)系時，無論是個人的還是職業(yè)的。此外，如今，數(shù)以百萬計的各個年齡段的人都嘗試過網(wǎng)絡(luò)交友服務(wù)，以此來尋找終身伴侶。因此，經(jīng)驗表明，在網(wǎng)上進行社交是結(jié)識那些我們從未遇到過的人的好方法。
More importantly, socializing online empowers individuals to make social change and do social good on a community even national level. People today have easier access to unveiling social problems and they have become more connected to the society by exchanging opinions with others who share the same concerns in life. This trend increases people's participation in social events, which encourages the government to address issues in various fields.
更重要的是，在線社交使個人能夠在一個甚至國家層面上進行社會變革和社會公益。今天的人們更容易接觸到社會問題，他們通過與生活中有著相同問題的人交換意見，變得更加與社會聯(lián)系在一起。這一趨勢增加了人們參與社會活動的機會，鼓勵政府解決各個領(lǐng)域的問題。
However, online socializing, just like it's offline counterpart, can present some danger and it is important that people understand the safety and privacy protection of any service they choose to use.
然而，線上社交，和離線一樣，會帶來一些危險，重要的是人們要了解他們選擇使用的任何服務(wù)的安全性和隱私保護。
In conclusion, I believe that socializing online is helping instead of hindering the life of us.
總之，我相信網(wǎng)上的社交活動有助于我們的生活，而不是阻礙我們的生活。
2018雅思G類寫作Task1練習(xí)之：投訴信
G類雅思寫作Task 1的考試時間為20分鐘，連讀題加思考加寫作加檢查，時間非常緊張。平時復(fù)習(xí)的時候，考生要注意訓(xùn)練做題速度。練習(xí)盡量在紙上進行，考生可打印多份答題紙，用計時器，還原雅思考試真實的考試場景。
本期介紹的是雅思G類寫作中常見的投訴信，大體的思路是從投訴內(nèi)容，投訴對象以及投訴原因，處理方式等幾個方面展開內(nèi)容，根據(jù)具體的投訴理由：
投訴理由：服務(wù)不周
投訴信中投訴服務(wù)是經(jīng)常會考到的話題，一般主要集中在對于飯店，賓館，餐廳，旅行社等服務(wù)性行業(yè)的投訴，此類書信一般在結(jié)構(gòu)上可分為以下幾個部分：
(一) 自我介紹，表明投訴內(nèi)容以及與收信人的相關(guān)性。
(二) 陳述投訴內(nèi)容，如時間、地點、人物、事件等，并指出對方服務(wù)問題所在以及由此而產(chǎn)生的對自己或者家人的影響。
(三) 提出整改建議或者希望得到對方的賠償或補償。
投訴理由：虛假宣傳
對于虛假宣傳的話題，我們的投訴重點主要圍繞在收到的產(chǎn)品與描述不符或者得到的服務(wù)項目和合同上的不一致或遺漏以及根據(jù)提示使用后無法獲得預(yù)期效果等。此類書信在結(jié)構(gòu)上一般由三部分組成：
(一) 表明投訴原因。
(二) 陳述投訴內(nèi)容，如時間、地點、人物等，并指出具體問題所在以及由此而產(chǎn)生的后果。
(三) 提出整改建議或者希望得到對方的賠償或補償。
除了上述例子外，建議考生還可以根據(jù)不同題目，用不同思路進行拓展，比如實物我們可以從產(chǎn)品的外觀，質(zhì)量，性能，保質(zhì)期入手;服務(wù)我們可以從軟硬件設(shè)施，合同履行周期，場所變更等方面入手。
投訴理由：送貨問題
關(guān)于送貨問題里最常見的考題是別人寄給你的一件物品或者包裹你遲遲未收到，在信件結(jié)構(gòu)上和投訴質(zhì)量低劣類似：
(一)表明投訴原因。
(二)陳述投訴內(nèi)容，如物品的特征，郵寄的時間等，并指出由此而產(chǎn)生的后果。
(三)提出整改建議或者希望得到對方的賠償或補償。
若題目中未提及具體物品，我們除了說包裹外，還可以說是一封信或者是重要文件。郵寄外，我們還可以說是快遞中物品未收到或者遺失，此物品是生日禮物或者公司重要檔案，對于收件方的意義或者價值巨大等來擴充寫作思路。
還有一類是針對個人或市政的投訴信
這里通常是涉及到因為某些人的素質(zhì)問題，影響了生活，比如市政修路太吵，鄰居家的狗在家門口亂撒尿等等。一般會從以下幾個方面著手：
(一) 自我介紹
(二) 陳述投訴的內(nèi)容，如你家狗狗在我家門口做了不文明的行為，為此我花了很長時間打算，而且這不是第一次了!現(xiàn)在我家門口異味嚴(yán)重，完全沒辦法開門開窗通風(fēng)，而且這個味道常常吸引別人家的寵物來此，我的生活被打亂了。
(三) 提出整改意見或賠償要求：請你自行把狗教訓(xùn)一頓，然后栓好你的狗，順便買點消毒劑來幫我把門口清理一下。如果再發(fā)生這樣的情況，我會選擇報警的。
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
? explain why you were at the restaurant
? describe the problems
? write about the action you want the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Begin your letter as follows:
雅思G類寫作范文
Dear Sir /Madam,
I am writing to raise my concern about the dish I was served in your restaurant on last Sunday. I am Lattisha James, visited your restaurant on last Sunday for dinner with my family. I went there because I did shopping at the Ansar mall, near to your restaurant, and I heard much about your restaurant in the radio advertisement.
When we came there, we saw a special menu written on a board and kept in front of the restaurant and name of that dish was Chettinadu fish curry. Therefore, we decided to taste that and we ordered rice with this fish curry. When we got that food, we found chilli powder on the surface of the fish and we enquired about that and one of your employees told they keep it off one hour after marinating with chilli powder with some other ingredients. Even though we felt bad, our children had it because they like fish curry. Unfortunately, my son had severe vomiting after we reach home and admitted to hospital for one day.
I will appreciate you if you could have taken an action about this inconvenience we had due to the food. Please instruct your chefs to follow a good hygienic manner and if they do not know to make such kind of food please do not offer it to the customers because it will affect your prosperity and our health.
I hope you will take this matter seriously and will take a proper action.
Yours sincerely,
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