雅思寫作口語(yǔ)重要一環(huán)：批改
由于雅思口語(yǔ)寫作是屬于語(yǔ)言輸出的主觀性考試，很難有像閱讀聽力那樣的一個(gè)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)答案供你自我診斷自我總結(jié)。偏偏口語(yǔ)寫作的特點(diǎn)決定了自我是難以做出準(zhǔn)確的評(píng)價(jià)的。雅思寫作口語(yǔ)批改應(yīng)運(yùn)而生。
雅思寫作口語(yǔ)重要一環(huán)：批改
批改的重要性
批改的重要性無須多言，以大部分雅思考生寫作口語(yǔ)5.5分左右的水平，面對(duì)自己的答案/表現(xiàn)，除了能知道自己表現(xiàn)得糟糕，跟平時(shí)差不多，或者比平時(shí)發(fā)揮似乎流暢些之外，大約也講不出個(gè)所以然來。所以，一個(gè)更高水平的人的點(diǎn)評(píng)，指出答案的諸多毛病以及些許亮點(diǎn)，并提供一些修改的建議，最重要的是為以后的提高指出方向，就顯得彌足珍貴，像我看到的一些優(yōu)秀的批改，可能你的答案才一頁(yè)紙，點(diǎn)評(píng)寫出了三頁(yè)紙;你的答案才2分鐘，別人的點(diǎn)評(píng)卻有10分鐘。可以說練習(xí)一篇+精修一篇+再自我修改+再批改，這種組合產(chǎn)生的效果比你練10篇都要好。
批改的內(nèi)容有哪些
無論是寫作還是口語(yǔ)，批改的方向都是按照各自的考試評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)表來的，雅思官方給了那么詳細(xì)的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，資深老師可以嚴(yán)格的按照評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)一條條的捋。語(yǔ)法，詞匯各種細(xì)節(jié)別想跑，邏輯思路是否清晰，內(nèi)容上是否言之有物，當(dāng)然，口語(yǔ)的話，還有一項(xiàng)最麻煩的發(fā)音。我看到的精修版寫作，一篇文章被指出30+的錯(cuò)誤/不當(dāng)，如果在考試下，基本就是5.5分下的水平。
所以，不是高人給你批改，你很難知道自己的問題在哪里。批改就是一面鏡子，照出自己的不足。
個(gè)人體會(huì)：所以，雅思寫作和口語(yǔ)，能有幾次寶貴的批改，是突破自己的瓶頸的最好方法。不要省略掉了這個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)，雖然自己對(duì)照著范文反復(fù)研讀，反復(fù)寫，是可以提升，但一個(gè)人永遠(yuǎn)有自己的文風(fēng)，別人的范文你不可能學(xué)得來，也不應(yīng)該照搬。那么，在自己的寫作習(xí)慣下的文章的問題，只有在自己的文章里才能看得出來。一個(gè)優(yōu)秀的批改老師，就是幫你看出你的寫作習(xí)慣下有什么可以改進(jìn)的地方，而不是讓你去模仿他人。
雅思口語(yǔ)Part2物品類題庫(kù)：電視教育節(jié)目
Describe an educational TV program.
You should say:
what the program is
what type of program it is
what contents it has
and explain what you learned from the program.
I’d like to talk about a program from my childhood called “How 2”, I believe it’s originally a British TV show that was televised in my country with subtitles. The presenters certainly spoke with a British accent.
It’s hard to pin down exactly what type of program it was, I guess a mixture of science and history, with some everyday facts thrown in for good measure. The title itself is a play on words, as the series would show you ‘how to’ do certain things.
The show is aimed at kids in middle school or high school. The hosts would routinely do experiments to demonstrate science in action, I remember one in particular where the presenters were trying to pour water out of a bottle in the quickest way possible. The winner had a very good technique whereby she would swirl the water, creating a vortex and causing the liquid to fly out of the bottle far quicker than any of the others’.
As you would expect, the show got me interested in science and learning, but it also showed that you could do many experiments yourself and have fun at home, with everyday objects and materials that were easy to get hold of. At school we would need equipment and the teacher would have to supervise us, but at home we could be left to our own devices, with just a bottle and some water to keep us amused.
雅思口語(yǔ)Part2物品類題庫(kù)：室內(nèi)游戲
Describe an indoor game that you played when you were a child.
You should say:
what the game was
where you played it
who you played it with
and explain why you enjoyed this game.
I think I’d have to go for puzzles. Jigsaw puzzles to be precise. I have a huge collection, although most of them are hidden in a cupboard somewhere in my parents’ house, these days.
I used to have a special table exclusively for doing my puzzles on. Once I got into the groove, I would become immersed in the puzzle and get lost in a world of my own. Occasionally I would try to solve one with my grandmother, but this was more for her benefit as I much prefer doing it by myself. I know it sounds selfish, but it’s just not as much fun sharing the responsibility with someone else and the pay off isn’t as big at the end.
I started when I was just a toddler, putting shapes into pre-cut holes, but slowly I graduated to more complex pictures. These days it’s not unusual to find me tackling a really complex puzzle, like an “Impossipuzzle” which are double-sided and feature a picture of something very small but in large quantities, like a plate of baked beans or loads of Brussels sprouts.
In my opinion as well as being an enjoyable pastime, jigsaw puzzles are good for your mind. The brain is basically just a muscle and so it should be given a work out every now and then. Jigsaw puzzles are challenging and although they are time consuming, they provide great satisfaction once you’ve finished one.
雅思口語(yǔ)Part2物品類題庫(kù)：重要的禮物
Describe an important gift you had in your childhood.
You should say:
what it is
who gave it to you
what it looks like
and explain why it was important to you.
The first thing the pops into my head are my cats, Topsy and Turvy. They were my little bundles of joy whilst I was growing up.
When I was much younger I had another cat, called William. Sadly he was run over by a bus one day in front of our house. I can remember very vividly, one day I came home from school and my mum told me to look in the kitchen. I saw Topsy and Truvy and it was love at first sight. She told me when she had gone to collect them she only intended to buy one kitten, she put Topsy into the box and Turvy was mewing so loudly and scratching the box. She decided they were soul mates and couldn’t separate them.
I have no idea what kind of cats they were, all I can tell you is that they were painfully cute. Topsy was ginger and Turvy was ginger and white. Turvy had little white patches on his paws that made it look like he was wearing mittens. Topsy was a little furrier and made him look fat. One was shy and the other more outgoing. Like all brothers, they would sometimes fight and at other times cuddle up together.
Alas, they are no longer with us. Topsy passed away a few years ago and years finally caught up with Turvy finally as she bit the bullet last year. I knew that they would not live as long as me, but it’s still depressing to lose someone you love.
雅思口語(yǔ)Part2物品類題庫(kù)：好建議
Describe A piece of advice you’ve received.
You should say:
what it is
who gave it to you
why you took the advice
and explain what the result was.
I can remember a time when I sought advice from a wide range of different people. It was a couple of years ago, at a previous job, when I fell for a colleague. From my perspective it was love at first sight, but I was unsure whether the feeling was mutual and I didn’t know my company’s stance on office romances.
I didn’t know what to do and I didn’t want to listen to just one person, so, as I said, I asked a few of my friends to get a broad set of opinions and points of view. A couple of people had reservations and advised caution, they recommended that I should take things slow, after all, “good things come to those that wait”. However, the general feeling was that I should go for it and ask her out. They said I had nothing to lose and I should strike while the iron’s hot. I had butterflies in my stomach, but despite being a nervous wreck, I eventually plucked up the courage to ask her out.
As it happens, I shouldn’t have listened to them. She turned me down in front of all my co-workers and I had to walk back to my desk with my tail between my legs. I’ve never been so embarrassed in my life and I’ll definitely think twice before putting my heart on the line again. As they say, “once bitten, twice shy.
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