雅思寫作7分開頭技巧
在雅思寫作中，最難起筆的莫過于開頭，考生都想用精彩的開頭來吸引考官的注意。今天小編給大家?guī)砹搜潘紝懽?分開頭技巧,希望能夠幫助到大家，一起來學(xué)習(xí)吧。
雅思寫作7分開頭技巧
雅思寫作題目中的觀點(diǎn)類，我們通常以認(rèn)可或者不認(rèn)可來進(jìn)行作答。并且這類題型中的觀點(diǎn)也只有一個(gè)，考生也無需擔(dān)心選錯(cuò)哪一個(gè)。考官在乎的是論證的過程，就是考生是否有足夠的例子證明自己觀點(diǎn)的對錯(cuò)。小站君認(rèn)為開頭應(yīng)該遵循第一句是題目中的背景。第二句是對觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行選擇，一般同意的話可以進(jìn)行轉(zhuǎn)述題目，不同意的話可以用讓步狀語從句改寫，例如although，if等。第三句是說明自己的觀點(diǎn)。我們從下面的例子進(jìn)行分析一下。
例子：Some people believe that living in big cities is bad for health. Do you agree or disagree?
按照上述的方法，我們選擇同意的話，就第一句就是背景句“These days, it is quite common to see that a growing number of people choose to settle down in large cities.”第二句則是對觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行同意，那么可以寫成“ But some people argue that leading an urban life would produce negative influences on people’s health. ”最后一句就是表述自己的觀點(diǎn)“ Personally, I agree with this idea. (個(gè)人觀點(diǎn))”?？忌粝胍粋€(gè)引人關(guān)注的開頭，最重要的就是對背景和題目的改寫，切記不要直接照抄題目。
雅思寫作題目第二種就是討論類，通常這種的重點(diǎn)就是探討兩方的觀點(diǎn)，然后表明自己的觀點(diǎn)。這種題目的開頭只需要寫出討論話題的背景以及用用自己的話陳述雙方的觀點(diǎn)。對于個(gè)人的觀點(diǎn)，無需放在開頭。考生若要出彩的開頭，還是需要落腳在改寫上面，可以通過一些模板的套用，和語句的轉(zhuǎn)化進(jìn)行改寫，側(cè)重點(diǎn)就是雙方的觀點(diǎn)是什么。
雅思寫作題目第三種就是優(yōu)劣勢類，通常是題目會(huì)給出一個(gè)背景或者趨勢，讓考生進(jìn)行比較分析優(yōu)劣之別。往往考生認(rèn)為此類題目需要陳述背景，其實(shí)是不用的，只需要表達(dá)考生的分析結(jié)果，認(rèn)為是好處大于壞處，還是相反。這時(shí)候開頭就不比過于累贅，只需要一句話進(jìn)行表達(dá)。我們看下面例子：
Shopping online is replacing shopping in stores. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
根據(jù)上述方法，我們不需要過多描述背景，只需要選擇某一方，然后用一句話代替即可：
These days, it is common to see that people prefer choosing online shopping to shopping in physical stores. Although some problems would occur as this trend continues, I believe such development brings more benefits.
雅思寫作題目第四種就是報(bào)告類，跟上述的優(yōu)劣勢接近，都是給一個(gè)案例或者報(bào)告進(jìn)行分析，開頭段只需要考生對題目進(jìn)行改寫和延伸。對于這類題目，考生需要記住的是開頭不宜過長，而且也不需要帶自己的觀點(diǎn)。只需要改寫題目即可。
考生了解完寫作題目的分類之后，最需要注意的就是對背景句的改寫。一個(gè)精彩的開頭往往考察的就是你對題目和背景的改寫能力。這時(shí)候就需要我們對句型的擴(kuò)展。因?yàn)橥潘紝懽黝}目都是簡潔明了的，所以要對題目或者背景改寫。我們看下面例子：
There was a substantial increase.
There was a substantial increase in the number of cars.
There was a substantial increase in the number of cars using clean energy.
從上述三段可以很清楚了解，擴(kuò)展句型的重要性。不僅能夠讓考官知道你句子擴(kuò)展的能力，還能增加字?jǐn)?shù)。
最后，提升雅思寫作的開頭還需要對主語進(jìn)行多種變化的訓(xùn)練。從上述可以知道主語很多情況都是一大串的觀點(diǎn)，如果考生直接搬到句子中，很容易讓考官覺得是直接照抄。這時(shí)候就需要我們對主語進(jìn)行多種變化的練習(xí)。從下面例子可以看出：
Why is the old buildings turns down/knocked down based on its historical and artistic value?
如果疑問句做主語的，描述的是老建筑是否被拆掉是依據(jù)它的歷史和藝術(shù)價(jià)值。我們可以把主語改為這樣：Whether an old building should be torn down/knocked down depends on its value in history and art.只有這樣對主語進(jìn)行多樣性訓(xùn)練，才能保證句子結(jié)構(gòu)多樣性，讓考官認(rèn)可考生熟練運(yùn)用句子，表達(dá)地道。
雅思寫作Task2社會(huì)類考官范文
In many major cities of the world, you will find large public buildings, both new and old.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of such buildings. How important is it for a country to construct impressive public buildings when houses are want is really required?
Model Answer:
A public building is a building that belongs in some way o the state. The number of public buildings in any town or village will depend on the size of that community and its needs. For example, you will usually find a town hall of some sort, a school and a place of worship at he least. In anger communities there will be a police station, law courts, a library and maybe a theatre funded by he state.
The desire to build impressive buildings is not new. The ancient cities of the Middle East and South America were designed with large public buildings to impress visitors and enemies and give a sense of pride. In modern times, outstanding public buildings still. create a great sense of local and national pride. They are what gives a city its character and they form asocial centre, a place where people like to meet.
However, some people argue that governments have constructed unnecessary, and sometimes ugly, buildings simply to make themselves feel important. I tend to feel that such buildings may be a waste of public money but I am not sure we can claim that they prevent houses from being built, because these governments have often ensured that adequate housing was also available. Houses and public buildings can exist side by side.
The answer lies in finding ape right balance. We want o feel pride in our town, but we also want our citizens to have comfortable homes. It is hard to please everyone.
雅思寫作Task2社會(huì)類考官范文
Write about the following topic:
Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
Model Answer:
Every year, millions of animals undergo painful suffering or death as a result of scientific research into the effects of drugs, food additives, cosmetics and other chemical products. While most people think animal testing is necessary, others are upset by what they see as needless suffering. This essay looks at some of the positive and negative aspects of animal testing.
Many medical treatments and procedures have been developed from experiments on animals. Since animals share many features with humans, scientists use animals to test the safety and effectiveness of newly developed drugs before pilot testing on small groups of patients. Medical teams practice new operating techniques such as transplants on animals. Without animal testing, many procedures or new drugs would be extremely unsafe.
However, many people are concerned that animals are suffering unnecessarily and cruelly. They do not believe that every new drug needs to be tested on animals, especially with the huge database of knowledge and modern computer models. They also are worried that many animal tests are ineffective, pointing out that any drugs have had to be withdrawn from the market despite extensive testing. They particularly feel that animal testing should not be used for non-essential products such as cosmetics, shampoos, soaps, and cleaning products. Furthermore, some campaigners would like to see certain tests replaced and more humane methods used.
We need to make sure that the millions of animals who are used for testing new products are treated with the minimum of suffering. Although some animal testing may be unavoidable at present, treating our fellow creatures as mercifully as possible will demonstrate our humanity.
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