雅思寫作如何克服邏輯問題

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雅思寫作邏輯問題最為致命 雞同鴨講的滋味

雅思寫作的文章是一個有機(jī)整體，從開篇，到主體論述部分，到結(jié)尾，你的觀點在最顯眼的段落頭部位置反復(fù)出現(xiàn)，且一以貫之，從一而終，這樣形成邏輯上的自洽，考官也是最容易快速了解你的觀點思路。減少他們的閱讀障礙，就是為自己的雅思寫作加分。

可現(xiàn)實中，烤鴨的寫作問題有很多，主要集中在以下幾個方面：1.邏輯混亂 2.過于主觀 3.中式思維/表達(dá) 4.過分注重用詞。大體上來說，雅思寫作邏輯混亂的問題是最多的。邏輯問題有三種，通篇邏輯，段落之間，段落之中。

大家都很喜歡一條一條擺原因。Firstly，secondly...然后后面至于這個ly后面是什么就不管了，一頓胡扯。也不管這段落與段落之間的銜接是否自然，反正都有什么ly給打頭陣。

事實上，中西方的思維總是存在差異，很多時候考官老師們都不懂考生在說什么?？脊俸芾Щ螅@個例子和這個有關(guān)系嗎?為什么前面在說A，后面突然B了?和結(jié)論什么關(guān)系?

很多同學(xué)都很喜歡寫中立觀點“A不錯，但不夠好”，這雖然看起來很客觀，但實際上對邏輯的要求非常高，要怎樣去組織語言，組織相應(yīng)的論據(jù)論點，非?？简炄恕Ｓ型瑢W(xué)想說A事件要瑕疵互見，但是寫著寫著就亂七八糟，東一塊西一塊，不知道在講點什么了。更有厲害的索性冗長的2000來詞，講了個空話。所以建議剛上手的同學(xué)，還是選擇一邊倒，站定腳跟不放松。即便是真的要寫中立觀點，實際上也都在A和B之間有所偏好。

此外，現(xiàn)在很多人會要求練writing的時候先寫提綱。于是同學(xué)們們就只寫一個觀點，然后后面的例子亂用，或者根本沒有弄清楚什么是例子。事實上，這種展開，可以是實例，也可以是虛擬的假設(shè)。實例中往往分自己的經(jīng)驗和他人的經(jīng)驗。那么怎樣的例子有說服力呢?

一般來說是：名人名事(知名度大)>眾人眾事(樣本大)>自己經(jīng)歷(體會深)>他人經(jīng)歷。假設(shè)往往不夠有說服力，因為很難涉及到每一個變量。但是假設(shè)在有的時候可以行得通，就是在很難說清楚步驟和因果關(guān)系的時候，用一個假設(shè)場景來推導(dǎo)會讓文章變得淺顯易懂。

所以建議，在剛開始上手寫作文的時候，先不要給自己30分鐘的壓力，先列出提綱(10分鐘)，再用30分鐘去寫，看能寫多少。

記住你的舉例一定要死死扣住你的觀點，不要是和觀點打擦邊球的。

比如，一位烤鴨的文章，她的大觀點是電腦對學(xué)生來說是有益的，小觀點是，可以查到很多資料，然后例子是可以用Google查到很多資料，很快捷。OK，乍一看這個沒有問題。但是實際上問題大了，用Google查到很多資料，是因為電腦還是internet?這很容易就偏題了，變成internet對學(xué)生來說是有益的。例子一定要從論點出發(fā)，再回到論點。不要將你的論點發(fā)散，后果很可能就是越寫越跑題。所以每次寫好一篇文章，都看看，論據(jù)里的keywords是不是和論點里的keywords一樣，論點里的keywords又是不是和題目里的keywords一樣。你的keywords可以比大題里的keywords更加narrow，但是千萬不要更加廣泛。

最后說的雅思寫作邏輯問題，是段落中邏輯比較容易錯的。一般是對接續(xù)詞的運用。如However，thus，therefore，他們決定了上下文之間的關(guān)系，但是很多讀起來就很奇怪，兩者完全不是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系，用了however，就會讓人覺得有些無厘頭?；蛘呔褪巧舷挛闹g完全沒有邏輯聯(lián)系，就是兩個單句湊在了一起。還是這句話，一篇文章和流水似的，不能斷。中間斷了那就不叫好文章了。即使前一句與有一句沒有接續(xù)詞，它們在邏輯上也是要能承接的。

其實寫作邏輯上的錯誤有時很難完全克服，很多大牛的著作里也經(jīng)常會被后人挖出邏輯錯誤。但是我們至少要克服這些一眼就能看出的邏輯錯誤，才能讓雅思寫作文章看起來更加舒適。

g類雅思書信小作文范文 請求信：寫給驢友索要照片

雅思g類書信小作文話題

You recently went on a trip with a friend and you both took some photographs. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

你同一朋友一起出去玩了一趟，拍了不少照片。有些照片在朋友那里，你想要。

ask your friend to send you one of the photographs

explain why you need that particular photograph

and tell your friend what happened to your copy of it.

雅思g類書信小作文范文：

Dear Jane,

I hope you've recovered from the trip, and I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did!

I'm just writing to ask whether you could send me a copy of the photo you took of the sun setting over the mountains on the last evening. I think you took some photos of me with the sunset in the background, but there should be one that just shows the sunset.

The reason I'm after that particular photo is that I think it would look great as the screen saver on my laptop. I'm fed up with the stock image that I've got at the moment, and I was hoping to change it for something really stunning that I had taken myself.

I did take a fantastic picture of the sunset, but somehow managed to delete it on my camera. It would be great if you could email a copy to me if you have it.

Speak soon

Jim(150)

g類雅思書信小作文范文 感謝信：寫給海外朋友

雅思g類書信小作文話題

Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter：

上月，你在海外和一群朋友在一起度假。你剛剛收到了他們寄給你的假日照片。

thank them for the photos and for the holiday

explain why you didn’t write earlier

雅思g類書信小作文參考范文

Dear John and Jane,

I hope this letter finds you well. I’m just writing to thank you both for the holiday and for the photos you sent.

The photos arrived this morning in the post. They reminded me what a great time I had during my stay with you last month. You really were fantastic hosts, and I couldn’t have asked for better guides to show me around.

Sorry I didn’t write to you earlier, but I’ve been working flat out since the moment I arrived home. Do you remember I told you I had an assignment to finish? Well, the deadline was two weeks earlier than I thought it was!

Anyway, I’m back to normal now and I’ve handed in all of my assignments. In fact, now that I’m free, why don’t you both come and stay? There’s a spare room here, so you’re welcome to use it whenever you like.

Hope to see you soon,

Peter

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g類雅思書信小作文范文 道歉信：爽約朋友生日會

雅思g類書信小作文話題

One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

朋友的生日會你過錯了，并且沒有事先告知。寫信道歉并解釋。

apologise for missing the birthday celebration

explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend

and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.

雅思g類書信小作文范文

Dear Mark,

I hope you're well and that you had a fantastic time on your birthday.

I'm so sorry that I wasn't there to celebrate with you, and for not letting you know beforehand that I wouldn't be able to come. I feel terrible that I haven't found the time to contact you until now.

The truth is that I've been under a lot of stress at work recently. I was in danger of losing my job if I didn't meet a sales target, so I haven't been able to think about anything else over the last few weeks. This is why I couldn't be at your party, and why I didn't call to tell you I wouldn't be there.

I really hope you'll forgive me for being so thoughtless, and I hope you'll let me make it up to you. By way of an apology, I've bought tickets for us both to go to the football next Saturday; I hope you'll come.

Speak to you soon,

Mike(168)