英國(guó)留學(xué)雅思寫作備考攻略

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英國(guó)留學(xué)雅思寫作備考攻略

一、雅思寫作現(xiàn)狀

雅思寫作考試是嚴(yán)格按照評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的四項(xiàng)(任務(wù)完成情況、連貫與銜接、詞匯豐富程度、語(yǔ)法多樣性及準(zhǔn)確性)來(lái)給分的,因此,在備考時(shí),想要拿到高分,就必須針對(duì)每一項(xiàng)都做好充分的準(zhǔn)備。

考試流程

雅思考試寫作部分總共用時(shí)60分鐘,考生需完成2篇作文的寫作要求,Task 1一般是圖表題,文章字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于150字,建議考生用20分鐘完成,Task 2一般是議論文,題目中會(huì)給出一個(gè)看法、問(wèn)題或議題,考生需就此進(jìn)行論述。文章字?jǐn)?shù)不能少于250字,建議考生用40分鐘完成。

評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

考官按四項(xiàng)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別評(píng)等級(jí)分:Task 1: 寫作任務(wù)完成情況、連貫與銜接、詞匯豐富程度、語(yǔ)法多樣性及準(zhǔn)確性。Task 2: 寫作任務(wù)回應(yīng)情況、連貫與銜接、詞匯豐富程度、語(yǔ)法多樣性及準(zhǔn)確性。

二、備考建議

其實(shí)雅思寫作不僅考驗(yàn)?zāi)愕挠⒄Z(yǔ)寫作能力,同時(shí)也考察你的思辨能力和你對(duì)事情的基本認(rèn)知和觀點(diǎn)。這種語(yǔ)言能力之外的東西同樣表現(xiàn)在口語(yǔ)和圖表作文中??陀^的講,英文寫作是一項(xiàng)輸出任務(wù),如果沒(méi)有足夠的輸入(閱讀+背誦),想要寫出一篇高分雅思寫作,是一項(xiàng)不可能完成的任務(wù)??梢哉f(shuō),只有有了100分的高品質(zhì)輸入,才可能有10分的優(yōu)質(zhì)輸出。

大家備考時(shí)可以從以下四個(gè)階段目標(biāo)來(lái)進(jìn)行訓(xùn)練:

語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤修改,從5分到5.5分主要靠語(yǔ)法修改。 細(xì)化思維修改掉空洞的寫作內(nèi)容,避免空話,從5.5分到6分,主要靠細(xì)化思維,解決作文論述空洞問(wèn)題。用批判性思維來(lái)解決句子和句子之間沒(méi)有邏輯的問(wèn)題,從6分到6.5分主要靠批判性思維的寫作邏輯訓(xùn)練。 用一定的地道詞組搭配來(lái)去掉Chinglish,從6.5分寫作到7分主要靠的是去掉中式英語(yǔ)思維。

很多考生在面對(duì)雅思大作文時(shí),對(duì)于素材和論據(jù)的選取很是苦惱,因此往往會(huì)看一些文章或者是材料有利于積累觀點(diǎn)素材。BBC,CNN甚至是Economist這些外刊雜志當(dāng)然都是優(yōu)質(zhì)的選擇,但是在緊張的雅思備考中,大家的時(shí)間和精力有限,閱讀完這些材料后如何提煉信息,篩選信息,然后轉(zhuǎn)化為可以為雅思寫作所用的觀點(diǎn)與論據(jù)又是一項(xiàng)不小的工程。其實(shí),對(duì)于大多數(shù)寫作徘徊在5-6分考生來(lái)說(shuō),需要提高的并不是所謂的新穎豐富的論據(jù)和觀點(diǎn)(因?yàn)樵u(píng)分準(zhǔn)則中并沒(méi)有對(duì)論據(jù)和觀點(diǎn)的新穎性有任何的要求),而是如何在準(zhǔn)確審題之后把合適的論據(jù)通過(guò)為觀點(diǎn)服務(wù)、并且使英語(yǔ)為母語(yǔ)的考官能夠理解的方式恰當(dāng)?shù)谋磉_(dá)成文字。在此,非常推薦大家從考官范文中提煉觀點(diǎn)論據(jù),用作寫作語(yǔ)料積累。仔細(xì)分析考官范文,你不僅能夠?qū)W習(xí)到地道準(zhǔn)確的表達(dá)方法,還有考官的寫作思路和論點(diǎn)論據(jù)。另外,考官Simon的Ideasfor IELTS topics電子書(shū)也是非常好的語(yǔ)料素材,對(duì)寫作論點(diǎn)的思路擴(kuò)展非常有幫助。

三、提分技巧

TASK1

審題,梳理清楚圖表的要點(diǎn)信息。閱讀并理解題目:what is the topic of this chart,確認(rèn)時(shí)間標(biāo)記和計(jì)量單位:what are the units of measurement? what is the time frame of this chart, 找出主要特征:what are the main features,如果是動(dòng)態(tài)圖,主要特征一般是圍繞趨勢(shì)變化去寫(上升?下降?)。選擇重要數(shù)值:what are the significant data points。核心數(shù)值都是從以下的六類數(shù)值中挑選:起點(diǎn)值、終點(diǎn)值、最小值、最大值、交叉值,拐點(diǎn)值。

寫作結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,不管圖表信息怎么變,都可以遵循共同的寫作結(jié)構(gòu), Introduction paragraph:Introduce the graph, Body paragraphs:give the detail,圖表的主要特征,重要數(shù)值,Conclusion paragraph:give an overview。

詞匯、句型要豐富,要積累“上升、下降、平穩(wěn)、波動(dòng)”等變化趨勢(shì)表達(dá),以及“占據(jù)”等餅圖的表達(dá)詞匯,豐富詞匯資源以及增加句式表達(dá)的多樣性。另外,在地圖題寫作時(shí),一定要注意時(shí)態(tài)。如果地圖題題目當(dāng)中沒(méi)有給出明確的時(shí)間,可以默認(rèn)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)描述該位置地理變化。如果該地圖題題目當(dāng)中給出明確的時(shí)間點(diǎn)或時(shí)間段,就按照具體情況而定時(shí)態(tài)。

TASK2

用詞地道,一篇好的作文不是用高級(jí)詞匯堆砌的,地道的用詞功力才是高分寫作真正需要的。

語(yǔ)法服務(wù)邏輯,切記不要刻意地在寫作時(shí)使用一些牛頭不對(duì)馬嘴的復(fù)雜句。寫句子要從完整性和邏輯性去描述,當(dāng)你句子的邏輯和完整性出發(fā),自然而然的會(huì)運(yùn)用上各種各樣的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。

論點(diǎn)具體展開(kāi),寫作講究論證充分,有畫(huà)面感。在此非常推薦Simon老師的Ideas forIELTS Topics,平時(shí)自己看范文需要自己花大量時(shí)間去提煉觀點(diǎn),這本書(shū)中,Simon老師是根據(jù)topic將idea和相關(guān)表達(dá)直接列出,學(xué)習(xí)和整理起來(lái)更加高效。

文章思路切題、清晰,寫作邏輯主要遵循一個(gè)原則“Point-Explain-Example”簡(jiǎn)單說(shuō)來(lái)就是給出觀點(diǎn)(一句話),解釋觀點(diǎn)(一兩句話),給出一個(gè)例子。這不是死板的模式,可以根據(jù)具體情況靈活變通,關(guān)鍵在于先明晰觀點(diǎn)再加以闡述,最好加上例子加強(qiáng)論證。

注意事項(xiàng)

避免累贅, 刪去空洞的單詞和詞組 。一些空洞的單詞或詞組根本不能為句子帶來(lái)任何相關(guān)的或重要的信息,還會(huì)讓句子顯得很累贅完全可以被刪掉。有些空洞和繁瑣的表達(dá)方式可以進(jìn)行替換。例如:Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have at this point in time。 “due to the fact that”就是一個(gè)很典型的繁瑣的表達(dá)方式的例子,可以替換,簡(jiǎn)化為下面的表達(dá)方式: Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did not have the options that young people have now。

避免重復(fù),盡量避免重復(fù)使用同樣的詞匯?;蛘哂械臅r(shí)候雖然詞匯沒(méi)有重復(fù),但意思卻有重復(fù)。選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。選擇合適的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)可以使句子意思的表達(dá)更為精確和簡(jiǎn)練。雖然語(yǔ)法的多樣性也很重要,但選擇最恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)仍然是更為重要的考慮因素。 一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)和謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該能夠反映句子中的最重要的意思,避免頻繁使用“there be”結(jié)構(gòu),把從句改為短語(yǔ)或單詞,僅在需要強(qiáng)調(diào)賓語(yǔ)而不是主語(yǔ)的時(shí)候,才使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),用更為精確的一個(gè)動(dòng)詞來(lái)代替動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ),有時(shí)兩句話的信息經(jīng)過(guò)組合完全可以用一句話來(lái)簡(jiǎn)練地表達(dá)。

雅思寫作范文:經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展

雅思寫作話題:Economic progress is one way to measure a country's success. Some people believe there are other factors. What other factors should be considered? Do you think that any one of them is more important than the others?

提綱:

economy:

提高大眾生活水平

為發(fā)展社會(huì)其他方面提供支持

other factors:

教育、治安、健康、文化、環(huán)境、民主...

most important:

education

范文:

A successful country, the definition of which though does not gain a consensus, means more than just one factor. (定語(yǔ)從句,插入語(yǔ))

Economy is widely recognized as a crucial criterion to judge a nation because it is a sound economic development that determines the living standard and that provides financial resources to other domains of a society including education, scientific research and public health. In addition, there is a close association between wealth and low crime rate. (被動(dòng)句,原因狀語(yǔ)從句,強(qiáng)調(diào)句,非謂語(yǔ))

However, economic status is not the only consideration in the judgment of a nation and there are a variety of other elements to define an ideal society. A healthy natural environment would make sure that our next generation can keep living on the earth. Healthy lifestyles make healthy and happy workers who are able to make contribution to his/her community. In addition, dynamic and characteristic culture and democraticpolitics is universally desirable and is seen as a symbol of progress and civilization. (并列句,there be 句型,定語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句)

Among these factors, I believe that education is the fundamental one to judge whether a country is successful or not. The major reason is that education determines whether a country can succeed economically in a sustainable way. Without education of high quality, there would be deficient labour force of high quality to ensure a long termeconomic boom which in modern high-tech and information society requires much morewell-educated professionals with the spirit of innovation and creation than in the industrial society. Education also makes incredible contribution to other importantsectors. It helps lower the crime rate and increase public awareness to the environment, health and politics. (賓語(yǔ)從句,表語(yǔ)從句,雙重否定句,定語(yǔ)從句,比較句型)

詞匯拓展:

consensus 一致同意 n.

definition 定義 n.

criterion 評(píng)價(jià)標(biāo)準(zhǔn) n.

dynamic 有活力的 adj.

comprise 包含 v.

democratic politics 民主政治

civilization 文明 n.

deficient 缺乏的 adj.

economic boom 經(jīng)濟(jì)繁榮

sector 部門 n.

innovation 創(chuàng)新 n.

public awareness 大眾意識(shí)

ideal 理想的 adj.

雅思寫作范文:存錢防老

Some people say that it is the responsibility for the individuals to save money for their own care when they retire. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文:

No one is a sand, but together we are an island. No one is alienated from the rest of the world. Everyone is in certain relevance with other people in diverse aspects in varied scales. Thus, we can see not a single person alive to be solely living for himself—he must be simultaneously shouldering various duties for multifarious groups of people ,namely, employers ,government , who must at the same time in turn undertake the duty of caring for him as well. I am not here to deny the necessity of saving money for one's aged life , but to state the reasons why the above parties to take care of an individual.

What hits me at the first thought is that employers should have the liability to take care of their employees ,for they have sacrificed their youth and shed both tears and sweat even blood for them. If employers felt free to take the duties of their elderly employees ,then they may feel so easy and comfortable to expel any of those "used" workers randomly. No just legislation can possibly tolerate this happen. And employers should have their duty to support the aged workers for their later part of life.

Another party that should also take care of an individual is the government, as no one is without a nationality, which should as well pay tax levied/imposed on him and serve and fight for his certain motherland with all his energy and health and even life. If we saw someone that has paid so much for his government to be alienated and isolated with himself, how could we feel rejuvenated when we hand out our tax and how could we feel sturdy when we face the bayonet of the enemies? So undoubtedly governments, like employers ,should take care of its citizens as well.

As we can happily conclude, this world is not one that goes without justice and warmth between people , we give when we can and we take when we need, employers as well as governments are due to unshakable responsibilities to give their care to every individual that has paid their efforts for them, this would be the way things ought to be.

雅思寫作范文:新媒體對(duì)人們的影響是消極的

雅思寫作范文:The news media have become more influential in people's lives, some people think it's a negative development, to what extent do you agree or disagree? 新聞媒體對(duì)于人們的生活影響深刻,有人認(rèn)為這種影響是消極的,是否認(rèn)同?

【首段】背景介紹 + 立場(chǎng)說(shuō)明

Perhaps nobody can avoid being swayed by various mass media. The news media have been exerting a tremendous influence on our lives because they can not only bring about glaring changes to the lives of ordinary people,but even ruin a political leader. Some people worry that the impacts of mass media are quite negative. From my perspective, however, what the news media can benefit us is greater than what they might influence us adversely.

【二段】新聞傳媒也許可能對(duì)人們的生活造成不良影響。

The opposite stand is also understandable. It is true that some paparazzi of tabloid magazines like to publish details about those superstars’ private lives,which might bring untold agonies to heroes of the story. Likewise, for the purpose of catering to the taste of the general public, some editors of newspapers and magazines also enjoy deliberately exaggerating so as to create a sensation. Surely enough, such irresponsible reportages should be highly condemned. However, we have no reason to throw out the baby with bath water.

【三段】新聞傳媒給人們的生活帶來(lái)的利好。

On no account can we underestimate the positive influences brought about by the news media. First, the mass media can play the role of educator. As for those who lack the habit of reading news, they are rather restricted in terms of general knowledge and the experience of the world. Conversely, reading news frequently can help us have a broader view of life and thus train our dialectical mode of thinking.

【四段】 新聞傳媒給人們的生活帶來(lái)的利好。

Also, various mews media can be an indispensable source of information for the vast majority of people. To illustrate, one of the most crucial lessons of a great many entrepreneurs is to Watch CCTV news everyday to familiarize themselves with the latest governmental policies and market information. Eventually, those amusing news stories can add color to the dull routine of every day life. I myself enjoy appreciate stories concerning the common people or mediocre life so that I could greatly deepen my insight into diverse lifestyles and grow spiritually during the process of thinking.

【尾段】亮明觀點(diǎn)

In closing, my stand is that various news media have and will have irreplaceable roles to play in our daily lives, the influence, to large extent, depends on how we treat and harness them. It is rather groundless to simply say that their impacts can always be baneful.


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