托福寫作備考范文用法技巧講解
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【高分經(jīng)驗(yàn)】托福寫作備考范文用法技巧講解
托福寫作哪些范文最重要?
托福寫作范文的重要性可以按照其分?jǐn)?shù)來分辨，一般來說，范文中4分和5分的文章是最有價(jià)值的，因?yàn)槟軌蜻_(dá)到這個(gè)分?jǐn)?shù)水平的文章已經(jīng)是達(dá)到了很高水平的文章。對于這些文章大家就不能只是簡單的熟讀和背誦了，而是需要逐字逐句分析體會作者的寫作思路及修辭用法。另外小編還需要提醒大家一點(diǎn)，ETS對范文的評論也往往都是非常精彩的，一些意見看法都很有學(xué)習(xí)價(jià)值，建議大家參考，這會非常有利于理解托福寫作的考試重點(diǎn)。
大量閱讀范文形成慣性思維
俗話說讀書破萬卷下筆如有神，等我們真正寫作練習(xí)到一定的程度，那么寫作的順手也就是自然而然的事了。所以考生在閱讀范文時(shí)也需要提升量。大家可以通過大量閱讀范文來形成一些思維習(xí)慣，比如看到某個(gè)題就能想到要怎么展開，一些優(yōu)質(zhì)的句式用詞能夠信手拈來。之所以要這么做，是因?yàn)橥懈懽鞯目荚嚂r(shí)間很緊張，如果能提前養(yǎng)成一些寫作方面的思維習(xí)慣就能有效減少構(gòu)思的時(shí)間，更順利的寫出文章。
結(jié)合范文學(xué)會修改自己的文章
同一個(gè)題目，考生自己寫出的文章在質(zhì)量上大多是很難和范文媲美的。因此，考生也需要學(xué)會結(jié)合范文來修改自己的文章。特別是在同一題目自己練過一遍同時(shí)也有范文可以參考的時(shí)候，考生如果能通過對比來發(fā)現(xiàn)自身的不足并進(jìn)行修改，就等于得到了一篇吸收了范文精華的好文章。而如果大家不勤修改自己的文章，就不知道自己原來的漏洞和不足在哪，只是悶頭寫自然也難有提升。
托福寫作范文：擁有多項(xiàng)技能的人更成功
2016年托福寫作真題題目：
2016年7月3日托福獨(dú)立寫作題目：
People who develop different skills are more successful than people who develop one skill only.
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2016年7月3日托福獨(dú)立寫作范文
When it comes to the qualities of successful people, people varying in education background and experience tend to give distinctive answers. Some would argue that those who are successful should be versatile and excel in lots of skills like communication skills, leadership skills and even organizational skills while others believe that one who is exceptional in one area is more likely to be successful. I personally believe that a versatile person with various skill sets can be more successful.
Admittedly, as the saying goes Jack of all trades and master of none and there are rare cases where some people who are expert in only one field stand out. However, it is more common for versatile people with multiple skills to be successful because of the following reasons.
First off, people who are talented and versatile are more competitive and competent in their career, and they enjoy a better change to be promoted in a professional setting. Actually, a lot of positions require a combination of skill sets, such as paying attention to details, knowledge in a specific field and communication skills, etc. Indeed, more skills will give someone more chance to get promoted. For instance, if a computer programmer just knows how to write program and focuses only on the technical side of the job, chances are that he would never get promoted. On the other hand, if not only does the computer programmer have programming skills but also he is a genius people-wise, he might get a better shot to be promoted as a manager in charge of a team of computer programmers. Thus, he can enjoy more opportunities in his career.
Additionally, it is much easier for a versatile person with various skill sets to build rapport with people and make friends. It is self-evident that people with all kinds of skills will be very attractive and charismatic. A person who not only has professional knowledge in one specific field but also has people skills and leadership skills will be very popular and standing out among his or her peers. For instance, my friend Alex, a bright young professional working in the financial industrial. He was awarded the most valuable banker in his company because of his professionalism and dedication to serving the customers and clients. Not only is he successful in his professional life, but also he is an amateur violinist. Actually, he plays for a city choir to represent the community and go against other cities' choir. Such skills can be very useful when building up connections with people and thus he can expand his social network easily. Furthermore, he can use these skills to entertain his clients and customers on certain occasions and have their trust on him.
In conclusion, a versatile person with various skill sets can be more competitive and outstrip others in the workplace, eventually they enjoy better chance to be promoted. Another advantage of having multiples skills is that it can be much easier and readily for them to network and expand their social connections.
托福寫作范文：朋友間競爭對友誼產(chǎn)生影響
2016年托福寫作真題題目：
2016年7月2日托福獨(dú)立寫作真題重現(xiàn)
Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships.
點(diǎn)睛：
題目大意：朋友間的競爭會對友誼產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響。此題目較為抽象，思路比較難以確定，波波建議大家此題選擇具體情況具體分析，即認(rèn)為：競爭會對不同的友誼產(chǎn)生不同的影響。
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2016年7月2日托福獨(dú)立寫作參考范文
In the contemporary society full of pressures, rivalry has crept into nearly every area of our life, which has never failed to attract public attention. Given its ubiquitous presence, many people claim that friends will be pulled apart due to the competition. However, as far as I am concerned, the above claim has oversimplified the situation. Acctually, whether competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendship depends on what kinds of friendship they have established.
On the one hand, the competition between friends will have no negative effect on genuine friendship without any ulterior objectives. As is common sense, in the genuine friendship based on goodness, friends will always desire the good for each other. As a result, competition between them will be regarded as a good chance to achieve self-improvement and thus enhance mutual respect, which will be the foundation of forming a stronger friendship. Take my own experience as an example. Last semester, I and my best friend, Steve, competed for the presidents of the student union. In the course of engaging in the contest, both of us gave our best efforts to make well-prepared work, like writing and revising the speech draft, practicing the oral speech repeatedly and so on, which made us achieve great self-improvement. Whatever the result of the contest was, steve and I were more proud of each other for our progress, resulting in a closer relationship.
On the other hand, competitions will undoubtedly tear out the friendship based on utilities. The ground for friendship of this kind is mutual usefulness which means that once one becomes useless or even harmful to another person, the friendship will accordingly break up. As a result, the rivarly between these people will cause major rifts and thus ruin this kind of friendship. A good case in point is the workplace competition. In a company, the relationship between colleges can evolve into a kind of friendship, whose foundation is based on utilities. However, rivalries for a position or bonus are likely to result in workers resenting one another, thus destroying the friendship. The underlying reason is that competitions make them become opponents instead of friends. As a result, every employee in the contest will have win at all costs" attitude. This can result in a gap between the "haves" and "have nots" that may prove to be unhealthy in internal work relations.
In a nutshell, given the complexity the corelation between friendship and comit is an exaggerated claim that competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships. As a matter of fact, it hinges on the kinds of friendship you have whether rivarly between friends will cause it fall apart.
托福寫作范文：老年人探索冒險(xiǎn)比年輕人更好
2016年托福寫作真題題目：
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It is better for elders to take risks and explore new things than young people.
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2016年5月29日托福獨(dú)立寫作真題及參考范文(新東方 孟炎)
Conventional wisdom generally believes that it is easier for young people to be exposed to innovative ideas and new concepts so that they can catch up with the current news and most up to date information. Elders, on the other hand, are supposed to relax and enjoy their retirement to the fullest extent. However, I have a totally different perspective on this issue and tend to believe that older people need to explore new things more than young people.
Admittedly, young people are generally more healthy and energetic than the elders, hence it is more likely for them to come up with new ideas and perspectives than elders. Indeed, as we can tell that professionals in different fields like scientists, business men, lawyers tend to have be more competitive and sharp when they are at a young age, actually, research shows that the average age of billionaires is well below 40. Nonetheless, it is more important for elders to stay touch with the latest trend and continue their lifelong learning.
First and foremost, continued learning makes it possible for elders to stay in touch with the currents and build a deeper connection with younger family members. The only thing that doesn't change in today's world is change itself, new electronic gadgets, innovative treatment to cure incurable diseases, creative business ideas and approaches that are unthinkable in the past, you name it. It can be disastrous if elders stop being an active learner and retreat to the primitive mindset. For instance, young people are fond of new electronic devices like ipad, iphone and stuff, and they use these gadgets to stay in touch with their peers and families. If a grandpa has not even heard of twitter or instagram, it will be impossible for the two generations to stay connected.
Additionally, a host of research done by a world famous psychiatrist show that elders who give up learning and have no access to new ideas tend to suffer from dementia and Alzheimer. On the other hand, other search shows that elders who keep learning will stay in touch with the world and are more healthier both physically and mentally. Based on my personal experience, I find elders around who are willing to learn and embrace new things are less dependent on their families and tend to be better connected with their children and grandchildren. Plus, they are more creative and productive when they access their frontal lobe and avoid their primitive mindset. Staying active and keeping exploring new things make it possible for seniors to seek for the true meaning and value of life, which in turn will inspire and motivate younger generation to take risks and accept challenges in life.
In a nutshell, we can safely draw the conclusion that it is better for elders to take risks and explore in new endeavors than the younger generations since it helps elders reconnect with their families and makes them more independent, productive and inspirational.
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