托??谡Z模板18歲成人投出選票
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托??谡Z模板18歲成人投出選票
托福口語題目:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 18-year-old adults are not mature enough to vote.
托福口語參考范文:
In my opinion, 18-year-old people already have the ability to vote. Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions)【括號(hào)內(nèi)的也可以不說】 And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions. 補(bǔ)充例子:For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about the information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell us not to just repeat what others say but think by ourselves. So we are mature enough to vote.
托福口語參考答案:
Well, I don't think I can agree with statement because I think +people who are already 18 years old are mature enough to vote.【也可以直接說: In my opinion, 18-year-old people already have the ability to vote.】
Firstly, because I think when we are 18, we are adults, which means we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions. (At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions)【補(bǔ)充了一些細(xì)節(jié),否則,這第一個(gè)理由根本就沒有論證,丟下一句:我18,我成年了,就走了……哎~不要這么傲嬌嘛!至少稍微結(jié)合咱們的話題解釋一句嘛!】
And also I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country and they have the ability to reason and also enough knowledge about politics, which will help them to make right decisions.
補(bǔ)充例子(可以跟著Pt的答案一路說到結(jié)尾):For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about hte information related to national policies. And our politics teachers always tell me, "Please don't just repeat what others say but think by yourself, think critically." So I am pretty sure that we are mature enough to vote. (/ 語速快的同學(xué),可以挑戰(zhàn)加長版結(jié)尾So I am pretty sure that we have the capability to decide what is good for the nation and the people and thus we definitely are old enough to vote. )
這純粹為了湊時(shí)間的結(jié)尾,可以不讀了:So I think they have both the right and capability to decide what is good for the nations and what is good for the people. So that's why I think they are old enough and mature enough to vote.【很啰嗦,其實(shí)就是因?yàn)闆]有內(nèi)容了,所以用漫長的結(jié)尾來拖時(shí)間】
托??谡Z模板分析:
本文來自高分網(wǎng)友shurui,非常贊的發(fā)音!這一次之所以沒有選擇晨讀團(tuán)同學(xué)的錄音,并不是因?yàn)榇蠹业拇鸢浮緝?nèi)容】不夠好,而是因?yàn)椋捍蠹业摹景l(fā)音】錯(cuò)誤真的太多了!
shurui同學(xué)是亦鷗有名的淡定大神,不論什么內(nèi)容,她都說得從容不迫。這一題的答案雖然:很空洞,但因?yàn)榘l(fā)音非常標(biāo)準(zhǔn),整體的表達(dá)十分流利,第一遍聽依然覺得真的很棒!每一次在收聽大量晨讀團(tuán)同學(xué)的錄音時(shí),Pt都感到,有一件事不得不承認(rèn):發(fā)音好真的太重要!1)發(fā)音不標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的,根本聽不懂啊!2)發(fā)音有口音的,聽著很難受啊!3)發(fā)音特別好的,心里就覺得ta答得好啊!所以,強(qiáng)烈建議大家,正音,從今天開始!
這里就不得不再一次強(qiáng)調(diào):我們要做的是【跟讀】。除了學(xué)內(nèi)容之外,還要學(xué)答題者的發(fā)音,要去模仿,去跟著讀。請(qǐng)大家不要僅是查看推送的內(nèi)容,然后就開始自己讀了——那你的發(fā)音錯(cuò)誤永遠(yuǎn)也改不了哇!一定要點(diǎn)擊閱讀原文,收聽高分回答,并收聽Pt在晨讀團(tuán)里的語音示范,每天堅(jiān)持再堅(jiān)持,就一定能跟發(fā)音錯(cuò)誤說88!
在此,說一下本題的幾個(gè)常見錯(cuò)誤發(fā)音:
adult 這個(gè)音已經(jīng)被大家念出花兒來了,Pt聽到最奇葩的發(fā)音是:“矮倒他”……這都什么鬼???請(qǐng)注意:這個(gè)音是/??d?lt/ 或者 /?'d?lt/ (注意,a這個(gè)原因發(fā)音不同的時(shí)候,重音也不一樣哦!shuirui讀的就是/??d?lt/ )不要跟我說你的“矮倒他”是英音!英音里的a也不會(huì)發(fā)成“矮”噠!
mature 這個(gè)音,也是各種不同版本,聽得Pt都快懷疑人生了。有人讀“嗎t(yī)ure”有人讀“馬ture” 還有人連ture都不對(duì),讀成了“嗎t(yī)er”。那真是。。。誰能聽出來你在說“成熟”啊!我還以為想說master然后吞了s呢!請(qǐng)注意:這個(gè)音是/m?'t???r/ 前面不是/ma/是/m?/ 哦!
vote 請(qǐng)大家注意哦!v在發(fā)音的時(shí)候,要用上牙輕輕咬一下下唇~不要出現(xiàn)漏風(fēng)的效果!
接下來,Pt來解釋一下我的修改:
1. 【不能拿18 years old當(dāng)“18歲的人”來講】I think +people who are already 18 years old are mature enough to vot
18歲的人,正確的說法如下:
A. 18-year-old people 【作定語,通常都是這樣,加了連字符,就成了形容詞啦!比如:在校的活動(dòng) on-campus activities】
B. people who are 18 【作表語】
C. people who are 18 years old 【作表語】
2. 【18歲,我們能夠?qū)Α拔覀兊摹毙袨樨?fù)責(zé) + behavior是不可數(shù)名詞】we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions
3.【一個(gè)發(fā)音錯(cuò)誤】 I think young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country 這里的concerned,被shurui發(fā)成了concered,中間那個(gè)n被吞了!這是我們大家也經(jīng)常犯的錯(cuò)誤。建議再練習(xí)一下environment和government,也是要注意:不要吞n! (加入晨讀團(tuán),收聽Pt的語音示范~)
4. 【沒有細(xì)節(jié)】節(jié)選一下優(yōu)秀錄音下方的網(wǎng)友點(diǎn)評(píng)(是的,亦鷗的網(wǎng)友們就是這么犀利!這才能進(jìn)步呀!不痛不癢、你好我好大家好的點(diǎn)評(píng),有啥用?!)
- 我覺得你沒給出充足理由解釋 為什么mature到可以vote。其他方面都o(jì)k。
shuirui的回應(yīng):
- 首先感謝你的點(diǎn)評(píng).因?yàn)?)成年人了,可以為行為負(fù)責(zé) 2)具有獨(dú)立思考的能力 3)具有相關(guān)的知識(shí) 2+3)可以做出正確的判斷.
圍觀群眾表示:
- 語言考試不太關(guān)注內(nèi)容,能夠順下來就很不錯(cuò)了。如果內(nèi)容要改進(jìn),最好有一個(gè)具體事例。
shuirui的回應(yīng):
- 我也覺得有具體例子更好,可是想半天沒想出來呀...
在此,Pt給出回應(yīng):
1. 語言考試并不是完全不看內(nèi)容哦~ 但就像我在前面講到的:【語音確實(shí)加分!】不過,【內(nèi)容也不容忽視!】
2. 增加細(xì)節(jié)和例子并不難,Pt已經(jīng)示范啦~
A. details 是把你說的事情具體化,如: we can take responsibility for the our behaviors and actions.我們能對(duì)自己的行為負(fù)責(zé),具體化后: At the age of 18, we begin to make decisions independently, and thus our votes can represent our own opinions.我們自己獨(dú)立做決策,因此我們的選票能夠代表自己的意見。
B. exemplification 是把你說的事情搞成一個(gè)具體的事件,如: young people above 18 are very concerned about the future of the country. 年輕人關(guān)心國家的未來。具體到一個(gè)例子:For example, my friends and I are just 18 years old, and we often surf online to learn about the information related to national policies. 我和我的小伙伴,我們就成天看新聞。
托??荚嚳谡Z備考:“說不出口”怎么辦
對(duì)于很多考生來說,談到聽讀練習(xí),會(huì)讓大家聯(lián)想到了聽力備考的練習(xí)。但是,實(shí)際上,對(duì)于口語的備考來說,聽讀練習(xí)也是非常有效的。想會(huì)說,一定要聽懂。從口語本身來看,口語要發(fā)音準(zhǔn),就一定要知道怎樣正確的發(fā)音是準(zhǔn)確的,自己才能正確的發(fā)音。建議大家可以找到個(gè)獨(dú)立的環(huán)境進(jìn)行練習(xí)。如果,不愿意通過與人交流來提升自己的口語能力,那就不妨帶上個(gè)MP3邊讀邊聽、邊糾正。在練習(xí)時(shí)候,大家一般都習(xí)慣了安靜的教室或者自己的房間里。
另外,還需要提醒大家,在托福考試的過程中,周邊的環(huán)境是略帶嘈雜的。所以,在練習(xí)的時(shí)候,我們也可以找個(gè)有些的噪音的地方,讓自己的聲音大聲朗讀出來,逐步提升自己的音量,以便習(xí)慣之后的考場環(huán)境。
【模仿練習(xí)】
想要逐步讓自己的讀音逐步變得的標(biāo)準(zhǔn),模仿練習(xí)是為重要的。既然是自己對(duì)著自己那就不再有太多顧及了。模仿時(shí)要大大方方,清清楚楚,一板一眼,口型要到位。對(duì)于語音語調(diào)的模仿是一個(gè)長期的過程,所以大家千萬不能心急。同時(shí),也建議大家可以找些VOA等等素材,反復(fù)聽讀,作為一個(gè)模板的素材。
【復(fù)述練習(xí)】
在托??谡Z中,有了準(zhǔn)確的語言語調(diào),還有語速也是其中存在的一個(gè)問題。如果在對(duì)話過程中結(jié)結(jié)巴巴,不但對(duì)于然語速受到影響,同時(shí),也可能會(huì)讓后的評(píng)分打折。那么,該怎樣解決這個(gè)問題呢?建議大家可以從復(fù)述練習(xí)開始,找些身邊的材料,一篇演講稿,或者是一部電影內(nèi)容,只要是自己感興趣的內(nèi)容,都可以作為復(fù)述的內(nèi)容。語言應(yīng)盡量生動(dòng)、簡練,有明確的情節(jié),這樣可以幫助你更好地把握語言的連貫性。
托福獨(dú)立口語題的解方法
1、詳細(xì)具體(空洞的形容詞和花哨的句子結(jié)構(gòu)不能得分);
2、詞匯量和語法現(xiàn)象要多;
3、規(guī)定時(shí)間內(nèi)盡可能說快一點(diǎn),多說一點(diǎn),信息量大一點(diǎn)。
我深深知道,中國學(xué)生缺乏大量的語言環(huán)境,在僅有15至30秒的準(zhǔn)備時(shí)間內(nèi)要完美地做到以上幾點(diǎn)是基本不可能的。那么,是不是要因?yàn)橐粋€(gè)小小的口語考試就放棄我們?cè)诩又莸年柟庀律⒉降臋?quán)利呢?當(dāng)然不會(huì)!既然我們不能依賴于現(xiàn)場發(fā)揮,那么就通過平時(shí)準(zhǔn)備,來大大減低現(xiàn)場難度要求。其核心就是——轉(zhuǎn)化原則,在充分領(lǐng)會(huì)轉(zhuǎn)化原則的基礎(chǔ)上,創(chuàng)建自己的模板,以精練的短句,清楚的表達(dá)為主。
獨(dú)立口語題解
新托福口語考試六大題型中的第一種是問你一個(gè)你所熟悉的人、地方、東西或者事件,你需要在回答中加入具體的例子和細(xì)節(jié)。例如:
choose a place you like and explain why you like this place.
請(qǐng)看看袁老師是怎么回答的:
Well, the place I enjoy the most is a small town located in France. I like this small town because it has very charming ocean view. I mean the sky there is so blue and the beach is always full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, when the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.
Of course I like this small French town also because there are many great French restaurants. They offer the best seafood in the world like lobsters and tuna fishes. The most important, I have been benefited a lot from this trip to France because I made friends with some gorgeous French girls. One of them even gave me a little watch as a souvenir of our friendship.
看出奧妙來了嗎?
1、這個(gè)回答里用的全部是口語化的短句子;
2、按照正常的語速念完正好是45秒;
3、出現(xiàn)了多處非常具體的細(xì)節(jié)描寫(得分點(diǎn))。
4、有景色描寫(beach)、有人物(French girls)、有事件(make friends),有具體事物(a watch)。
為何如此設(shè)計(jì),等一下就會(huì)講到。 然后讓我們換一個(gè)題目再看看,還是用這些內(nèi)容怎么進(jìn)行回答:
題目:Choose a restaurant you like and explain why you like this restaurant
參考答案:Well, the restaurant I enjoy the most is a French restaurant located on a beautiful beach. I like this small restaurant because it has very charming ocean view. I mean the sky there is so blue and the beach is always full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.
Of course I like this small French restaurant also because it offers the best seafood in the world like lobsters and tuna fishes. The most important, I made friends with some gorgeous French girls in that restaurant. One of them even gave me a little watch as a souvenir of our friendship.
在新托福口語考試中,本題型能夠涉及到的范圍包括事件、人物、具體事物和地方?,F(xiàn)在你是不是開始有些明白為什么袁老師的口語模板要包括人、地、事、物?然后我們?cè)賮碜鲆恍╇y度稍大的擴(kuò)展訓(xùn)練,看看轉(zhuǎn)化原則是怎么能夠幫助我們以不變應(yīng)萬變。
Choose an important event/ a favorite activity and give reasons explaining why this event is important/ why this activity is your favorite. 從抽象的事物轉(zhuǎn)化成具體的景色描寫
Well, one very important event in my life/my favorite activity is a little trip to France. I like this trip so much because we visited a small French town. The town has very charming ocean view. I mean the sky there is so blue and the beach is always full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, when the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.
Of course I like this little trip to France also because there are many great French restaurants. They offer the best seafood in the world like lobsters and tuna fishes. The most important, I have been benefited a lot from this trip to France because I made friends with some gorgeous French girls. One of them even gave me a little watch as a souvenir of our friendship.
注意一定要有兩到三句轉(zhuǎn)化句,也叫點(diǎn)題句,即在文中標(biāo)注出的句子。
擴(kuò)展訓(xùn)練:
1. Describe one object that is of special value to you and explain why it is of special value to you. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
2. Choose a teacher you like and explain why you like him or her. Include specific details in your statement.
3. Everyone has a goal to fulfill. What’s your goal and explain why you want to fulfill this goal. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
(在看下面的參考答案之前,請(qǐng)自己先用轉(zhuǎn)化原則處理一下上面的題目。這幾個(gè)題目是袁老師精心收集的仿真題,仿真度可以達(dá)到90%以上,同學(xué)們要好好利用)
參考答案:
1. Well, the object of special value to me is a little watch. 點(diǎn)題,復(fù)述原題 the watch was designed for women and one of my French girlfriends gave it to me as a souvenir of our friendship. This little watch is of very special meaning to me because it always reminds me of those days I spent in a beautiful French town located by the beach. My watch is deep blue, as blue as the charming ocean view on the beach. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, when the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.
The most important, I made friends with some gorgeous French girls. One of them gave me this little watch as a gift. I cherish the watch just as much as we cherish our friendship.
2.Well, the teacher I admire so much is a gorgeous French lady. She was from a beautiful French small town located by the beach. She has very charming deep blue eyes, as blue as the ocean view on the beach. I admire her so much because she is not only a teacher to me but also a very good friend. Last summer, she invited me to travel to her hometown. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, when the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.
Also, she brought me to some restaurants offering the best seafood such as lobsters and tuna fishes. Finally, she gave me a little watch as the souvenir of our friendship.
3. Ever since I was a kid, I had a dream to travel to France. My parents told me that there is a little French town located by the beach. It has very charming ocean view. They told me the sky there is so blue and the beach is always full of sunshine. You know how romantic it can ever be, just relax yourself on the beach, when the sun is setting down, when the ocean breeze is blowing and the seabirds are singing.
Of course I want to travel to this small French town also because there are many great French restaurants. They offer the best seafood in the world like lobsters and tuna fishes. The most important, there is a good chance to make friends with some gorgeous French girls.
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