托福寫作高分經(jīng)驗如何從量變到質(zhì)變
大家都知道托福寫作難度不小，想要拿到高分并不容易，今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈懽鞲叻纸?jīng)驗如何從量變到質(zhì)變,希望能夠幫助到大家，一起來學(xué)習(xí)吧。
托福寫作高分經(jīng)驗如何從量變到質(zhì)變
一.量變，打好基礎(chǔ)
1.語法
建立一個語言正誤判斷系統(tǒng)，有了這個系統(tǒng)的支持，就能夠知道自己是否出錯，以后就可以進行自我檢查與提升了。
建立英語構(gòu)句系統(tǒng)，這點對于寫作尤為重要，常犯語法錯誤的學(xué)生有個最大的特點就是寫文章完全是憑感覺，而感覺往往是最不靠譜的。建立構(gòu)句系統(tǒng)之后，才算基本建立了語法框架，寫作中能夠依照語法結(jié)構(gòu)進行輸出，而不是以單詞為單位進行。
2.詞匯積累
如果能夠堅持大量背誦托福寫作相關(guān)詞匯和表達當(dāng)然是好的，然而并不是每個人都有毅力在需要完成常規(guī)詞匯積累的前提下，額外再去進行寫作詞匯的記憶(拼寫+釋義+詞性)，這個時候我建議大家在“翻譯”的過程中做好查漏補缺，即幫助自己“堵漏”，那些經(jīng)過思考仍然想不出的表達印象會比較深刻，效率也高一些;至于翻譯的材料難度要根據(jù)具體能力確定，過難或者過易的材料都是不合適的。
二.質(zhì)變，寫作要有技巧
首先，是結(jié)構(gòu)，怎么樣讓結(jié)構(gòu)清晰?不是只有first，second這么土的詞的。又不是寫法律，如果不是黔驢技窮，盡量換點詞。比如說in the first place啊，at the very beginning，again，also。。。。好多好多我就不說這種常識了。當(dāng)然了，如果你確實是一下子想不起來(雖然有這種情況的備案，我還是這是unjustified的，你有一個晚上準(zhǔn)備，這幾個詞應(yīng)該是提前準(zhǔn)備好的，隨便用的)，怎么辦呢。如果你說了firstly，不一定要說secondly，就算你連secondly這個詞也不知道怎么寫，那千萬別用thirdly，換個詞嘛。furthermore，what's more，in addion....寫文章我覺得最忌諱的是人家能預(yù)測到你的下一個詞，這樣人家就不想看了。當(dāng)然回到托福這個問題上而言，結(jié)構(gòu)一定要清楚!非常強調(diào)這一點。三戰(zhàn)的時候我就是結(jié)構(gòu)有點混亂了才24的。
但是結(jié)構(gòu)也不是一層不變的，就只有首先然后再然后么?我覺得這個最好是放在小結(jié)構(gòu)里面。一般文章我建議大家有兩個框架，第一個是大框架，表明辯證關(guān)系，第二個是supporting框架，表明遞進關(guān)系。我就不信這樣你都沒得寫了。是怕你寫不完的。。。
其次，就是句型。這個我前面說過了，沒事隨便看看。嗯~背幾句。當(dāng)然我建議大家是找一篇句型特多，結(jié)構(gòu)清楚的文章來背。這樣，你就啥都有了~Jtrchina和我會說他背了7000字的口語和作文材料。反正我是膜拜的，我不用心，也不敢和他比。他的暴力法也挺有用?？创蠹疫m合什么方法吧。
最后是例子，有人說例子沒有怎么辦，沒有什么怎么辦的。挖掘你自己啊，用本山的小品說，就是往祖墳上刨。多數(shù)事情我們都有經(jīng)歷，往自己身上扯的好處是，1.木有考證，沒有對錯，名人就不同了，有對錯之分。。。2.最熟悉，不會有不會寫的詞。你說你自己就是I吧，說issac Newton要多少字，打錯了還有negative impression。當(dāng)然了，有同學(xué)記憶力好，多寫點也沒關(guān)系。我寫的時候是到處扯的。普遍聯(lián)系的觀點，這次作文我還說道北朝鮮的獨裁制度啥的，這種東西新聞里面天天有，平常多看cnn，里面觀點很火辣。你就有素材了。但是這是錦上添花，最基本的還是刨你自己，你爸媽，你七大姑八大姨。
不過supporting ideas可不需要段段都有for example的例子，你想想，那得多俗啊。我特別忌諱用for example，然后后一面一堆。不知道大家有沒有經(jīng)驗，一般我們reading的時候看到這個詞匯，是不是就不看了?看個主體，看個大概。你用這個詞不是警示人家不要看么?我會說一堆推理，然后悄悄的灌輸思想。等我說完，再來一句，this is how it works~他才發(fā)現(xiàn)他已經(jīng)看完了，后悔也來不及了。
說到這里，結(jié)構(gòu)，句式，和內(nèi)容都有了。好像作文是差不多了，但是不是的，還有綜合作文。我一直以為綜合作文可以一樣對待，結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)不是的。根據(jù)我對og滿分范文的研究(就一篇，大家研究吧，就一篇多了也么有)，以上技巧+模板不能完全適用于綜合作文。綜合作文是你在轉(zhuǎn)述，獨立作文是自述。
但是轉(zhuǎn)述也不是說沒有自己觀點的。你要證明給別人看，你用了腦子的，沒有當(dāng)復(fù)讀機，所以我不建議大家重復(fù)原文的話，反而要總結(jié)成概括性的句子，放在每一段。當(dāng)然模板也是很需要的，這個自己做吧~網(wǎng)上也有，但是我還是建議自己做。模板作用就是加快速度。模板的內(nèi)容就是一個label和對比的作用。哪些是作者說的，哪些是professor說的，然后對比，比如while，however，on the contrary的樣子。
但是人家沒說的話你要不要說?很多人問這個問題，當(dāng)然要說了。要不怎么證明你用了腦子，但是你不能說自己的觀點。全文不能出現(xiàn)I believe這種話。關(guān)鍵是總結(jié)出作者的邏輯關(guān)系。實話告訴各位，哪怕沒聽全都不要怕，我這次就沒聽全，我聽力的時候突然周圍開始狂口語。我比他們進去得早，突然一下子吵不習(xí)慣。還好是到了尾聲了。作者說全的話也不一定要全寫出來。用自己的語言概括邏輯關(guān)系。我舉個例子吧，eg.文章說A是錯誤的，但是作者refute了3個原因。其中一個原因是，雖然會出現(xiàn)這樣的現(xiàn)象，但是有可能是被其它的原因干擾，比如云云，和A無關(guān)。這句話的核心就是與A無關(guān)?？梢园堰@句話提出來。然后可以加上一些你自己認(rèn)為的合理的分析。但是是從speech maker的角度去想的分析，他可以沒說，你要把他沒說的說了~而且還不能I think，因為是由ta說的推出的。你分析好了再對比一次。"
托?？荚囎魑莫毩懽鞣段模弘娪氨入娨暩薪逃饬x
Do you agree or disagree: The movies are worth watching only if they can teach something in real life.
寫作范文參考:
No matter who you are, you are definitely in a dire need for excitement and thrill. Then, a controversy might appear among the public whether citizens should only watch those movies that can teach something in real life. Some of you may only watch those movies that can help to expand one’s knowledge and reveal the life stories, however, I strongly disagree with the statement and I think there will be a variety of reasons to watch movies.
Initially, entertainment is the principle reason for the entire world watching movies. Be it comedy, science-fiction, drama or action, movies are a medium of leisure and recreation for every single individual ranging from those on streets to the high and mighty residents in penthouses. Put it in another words, the greatest of all benefits of watching a movie is that it entertains you and calms your tumultuous heart down. Take me as an example. I feel very tired after the full devotion to my career in a week and there is no time for the gym and outdoor activities just because of the busy work schedules. Then, I will choose to lie on my couch and watch movies of many kinds with a bowl of munchies like popcorns and sodas during the weekends. By being engrossed in a comedy show that can evoke hearty laughs, I will encounter situations with a positive frame of mind. Besides, when watching the horror movies, I will feel excited, scared, and emotional during those two and a half hours, leading me to be transferred to a world far away from the reality. Obviously, no matter what kind of movies they are, they will be worth watching if they can entertain you.
Another general concern about movies is that they can help fasten the bonds between families. More often than not, what audiences are more focused on, during the process of watching movies, is the time they spend with their families rather than the well-orchestrated plots or the life lessons they might disclose. Current citizens can afford to spend too much time having fun like traveling around the city or having a party because most of them are under huge pressure from the society and most of their time has to be occupied by a variety of professional tasks. However, watching movies won’t consume too much time, serving as a stress buster and lubricant to strengthen relationship with families. Almost at every weekend, I will hang out with my girlfriend to watch movies whatever the genre is and staying with each other at that moment can help shorten our mental distance and we can just hold hands of each other and feel so close between us. Accordingly, my personal experience can help explain how we spend with our families or lovers like watching movies matters more than what we can learn from the movies.
In a word, I don’t think only those movies that tell us important life stories are worth watching. What I truly believe is those movies that can entertain audiences and provide viewers with a chance to stay with each other are more welcomed.
托?？荚囎魑莫毩懽鞣段模喝绾翁嵘鐓^(qū)環(huán)境
What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?
1. Plant trees and create parks
2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers
3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads
寫作范文參考:
With the sense of community becoming much stronger, how to protect the environment of local communities has never failed to attract the attention of the general public. Therefore, when it comes to which is the most feasible measure to help environment, among planting trees and building parks, encouraging local shops to stop using plastic bags, and improving public transportation, people's notions may vary from one to another. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the first option is the best.
Firstly, growing trees and constructing parks can definitely help to ameliorate the environment. For one thing, more trees will contribute to the improvement of the air quality of the whole neighborhood. As is common sense, the prosperous industrial development has produced large amounts of waste gas, with the result that the haze and smoggy weather shroud quite frequently the major cities in our country. The current air condition necessitates the planting of trees, which can purify the contaminated air to a large extent. In other words, trees, the lung of the earth, play a vital role in absorbing some harmful gas and producing more fresh air through photosynthesis. For another, the public parks can be helpful to increase the biodiversity of the local community. Accompanying the rapid urbanization, an increasing number of natural lands have been utilized for constructing factories, shopping mall and skyscrapers, which greatly diminishes the natural habitats of animals, such as birds and squirrels. In this case, parks become the only place which can serve as habitats for those animals. Accordingly, the species of animals living here can become more diverse.
In addition, there are certain limitations for the other two options. Admittedly, reducing the use of plastic bags and making public transportation more accessible may also be conducive to the environmental protection in some degrees. To illustrate, if the plastic bags are prohibited, the so-called white pollution will be relieved. Also, easier access to public transportation means less use of private cars, which leads to the reduction of car exhaust. However, in comparison to planting trees and building parks, the above two measures enjoy less popularity among the residents of the community and thus are unlikely to be implemented. The underlying reason is that growing trees and constructing parks can create a more comfortable living environment while the other two choices can bring about more inconvenience. To be more specific, if shops stop the use of plastic shopping bags, the customers have to take a cloth bag while shopping. Also, taking public transportation will take longer time than driving the private cars, which means that commuters have to get up much earlier than before. It is self-evident that whether a policy can be carried out directly determines its effect, which is especially true of the above situation.
Taking what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the most effective way of protecting environment in local communities is to plant trees and create parks.
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