雅思寫作高分技巧
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雅思寫作高分技巧 提分不再難
很多基礎(chǔ)差的學(xué)生在雅思的學(xué)習(xí)中都有這樣的感覺，其他的幾個(gè)方面都在短期的培訓(xùn)中有所提高，唯獨(dú)寫作很難有個(gè)很高的提高，尤其是基礎(chǔ)差的考生，達(dá)到了五分之后，很難再提高到六分或者更高了，一直在五分左右徘徊。所以新東方網(wǎng)為大家整理了以下一些雅思寫作高分技巧。
要知道雅思寫作考試中最主要考察大家的是什么，肯定很多同學(xué)會(huì)說是語(yǔ)法，詞匯或英語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用能力等，不可否認(rèn)，這些知識(shí)對(duì)雅思寫作非常的關(guān)鍵，但通過我這么多年的雅思寫作的教學(xué)經(jīng)驗(yàn)來說，我認(rèn)為最重要的是要寫出真正的英語(yǔ)，也就是說盡量少出現(xiàn)中式英語(yǔ)的東西，也就是我們常說的“Chinglish”。那如何能在短時(shí)間內(nèi)避免出現(xiàn)中式英語(yǔ)的錯(cuò)誤呢，最好的方法就是多收集這方面的材料，不要犯類似的錯(cuò)誤。下面是一些同學(xué)在寫作中經(jīng)常犯的一些錯(cuò)誤，還有我的分析，希望對(duì)大家能有所幫助。
1. 概念的錯(cuò)誤
在寫作中，有類詞語(yǔ)表面上看似乎是對(duì)的,但實(shí)際上卻沒有表達(dá)出你想要表達(dá)的意思,有時(shí)恰恰適得其反。用這類詞語(yǔ)寫成的英語(yǔ)句子常常引起誤解。
① (誤)When we go into society after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
(正)When we start to work after graduation, we will encounter many difficulties.
“go into society”沒有漢語(yǔ)“進(jìn)入社會(huì)”的含義。在西方,它是指一個(gè)人到一定的年齡可以開始社會(huì)交往,如結(jié)交異性朋友,進(jìn)入某些社交或公共場(chǎng)所等。而漢語(yǔ)“進(jìn)入社會(huì)”一般指學(xué)生中學(xué)或大學(xué)畢業(yè)后參加工作。
② (誤)Left alone in the jungle at night ,she felt very dangerous.
(正)Left alone in the jungle at night, she felt t hat she was in great danger.
“dangerous”與作者要表達(dá)的意思完全相反。說某人dangerous,實(shí)際上是說他在某一方面對(duì)某人構(gòu)成危脅,而不是處于危險(xiǎn)的境地。這個(gè)詞用錯(cuò),意思就完全變了。原意是“她”感到處于危險(xiǎn)中。
2、搭配不當(dāng)
用詞搭配是我國(guó)學(xué)生學(xué)英語(yǔ)最感棘手的地方,在雅思寫作中，這種錯(cuò)誤也是經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)的，所以希望大家引起重視，因?yàn)橹形睦锏哪承┰~語(yǔ)在不同的語(yǔ)境里,英語(yǔ)有不同的說法,而這些說法是約定俗成的,完全是習(xí)慣用法所致,我們稍有不慎,便會(huì)犯錯(cuò)。現(xiàn)舉一些考生在考試中常犯的錯(cuò)誤:
① (誤)At college, we should learn as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
(正)At college, we should acquire as much knowledge as possible so t hat we can be well prepared for our future career.
“學(xué)習(xí)知識(shí)”是學(xué)生寫作時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的詞組,但不少學(xué)生都寫成learn knowledge,實(shí)際上knowledge是不能與learn搭配的,只能與acquire,obtain,absorb,accumulate ,develop,advance,gain,broaden ,enlarge,impart,derive ，deepen, brush up, digest 等詞搭配使用。
② (誤)In July, they will take part in the final term examinations.
(正)In July, they will take t he final term examinations.
“examination”或“test”不能與“take part in”搭配使用,但可以和attend, have, sit for
,conduct, enter for, get through, pass, fail等詞語(yǔ)用在一起。
3、用詞累贅
由于對(duì)某些詞和詞組的意思缺乏真正的理解或把要表達(dá)的意思先用中文想好,然后逐字翻譯成英語(yǔ),造成累贅。例如:
① (誤)In my opinion, I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be
banned.
(正)I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be banned.
in my opinion與I think意思完全相同,可以刪去其中的一個(gè)。
② (誤)Scientists are trying to find a solution to solve t he problem of energy shortage .
(正)Scientist s are trying to find a solution to t he problem of energy shortage.
一個(gè)詞與它的派生詞一起出現(xiàn),造成意思重復(fù),給人以累贅的感覺,改正后的句子變得簡(jiǎn)潔多了。
③ (誤)Waste gas is t he main cause which leads to air pollution .
(正)Waste gas is t he main cause of air pollution.
cause和lead to都表原因,同時(shí)使用造成意思重復(fù)。
4、逗號(hào)連接錯(cuò)誤
中國(guó)學(xué)生在英語(yǔ)寫作中常常單獨(dú)使用逗號(hào)而不用句號(hào)、分號(hào)、冒號(hào)或連結(jié)詞來連接兩個(gè)或幾個(gè)獨(dú)立的分句。例如:
① (誤)The weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.
(正)As the weather was fine, we decided to climb t he mountain.
② (誤)The [wv]prospects[/vw] are bright, the road has twists and turns.
(正)While t he prospects are bright, the road has twists and turns.
上面兩個(gè)標(biāo)有誤的句子在語(yǔ)法上沒有錯(cuò)誤,它錯(cuò)就錯(cuò)在逗號(hào)的使用不當(dāng)。錯(cuò)誤的根源是學(xué)生受漢語(yǔ)寫作習(xí)慣的影響,把漢語(yǔ)逗號(hào)的作用等同于英語(yǔ)逗號(hào)的作用。在漢語(yǔ)中,逗號(hào)可以單獨(dú)使用在并列分句之間。
(1)變成兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句:
The wind was blow ing very hard. They couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(2)變成并列句,用逗號(hào)加并列連接:
The wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(3)變成并列句,用分號(hào)連接:
The wind was blowing very hard; couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(4)變成并列句,用分號(hào)加連接性副連接:
The wind was blowing very hard ,therefore, they couldn’t go boating on lake.
(5)變成并列句,有時(shí)也可以用冒接,這時(shí)第二個(gè)分句解釋說明第一個(gè)分句
They couldn’t go boating on the lake; the wind was blowing very hard.
(6)變成復(fù)合句:
As the wind was blowing very hard they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
(7)用獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)改寫句子:
The wind blowing very hard, they couldn’t go boating on t he lake.
看了以上幾點(diǎn)雅思寫作高分技巧，如果大家在詞匯和語(yǔ)法有一定累積的基礎(chǔ)上，再避免出現(xiàn)中式英語(yǔ)的東西，加上觀點(diǎn)的正確性，我想那些基礎(chǔ)差的考生想拿到雅思寫作六分，應(yīng)該可以如愿以償?shù)?。最后祝愿大家在新的一年里，能夠順利通過雅思考試，拿到心中的分?jǐn)?shù)。
雅思考試寫作范文：年輕人可以當(dāng)領(lǐng)導(dǎo)
Task：The leaders or directors of organizations are often older people. But some people say that young people can also be a leader,to what extent do you think?
Sample answer：
It is true that many leaders and senior executives in global companies are elderly people. However, I would argue that those superb young people are also eligible to take important positions in today’s world.
On the one hand, compared to the young generation,elderly people possess more edges.First and foremost, they have better cognitive skills, such as big-picture thinking and long-term vision. This is because years of work experience and failures teach them to take every aspect into consideration before making important decisions. By contrast, due to alack of social experience, young leaders seem to make shortsighted decisions sometimes. Moreover, since the old have already overcome countless difficulties and challenges prior, they can quickly adjust their mood in turmoil and lift the morale of the whole organisation.
On the other hand, there are two reasons why younger directors are also competent to be leaders in important positions. In the first place, with well-educated backgrounds, young leaders are more likely to have a deep understanding of cultural difference, and they can empathize with other employees and clients much better. Today, empathy plays a key role in retention of talents. For example, it is easy to misunderstand others in a cross-cultural dialogue. When good employees resign,they might take the company’s knowledge with them, which is a brain drain for the company. Secondly, compared with the senior leaders, young directors can apply the latest technology and theory into practice, and this can counteract negative stereotype of management and greatly improve the productivity.
In conclusion, in my opinion, age should not be the criterion when selecting the leader of a company. Anyone who has the leadership can play his or her role in the organization. (280 words)
雅思寫作范文：職業(yè)運(yùn)動(dòng)員是榜樣嗎
Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don’t.
Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion.
Model Answer:
People everywhere like watching sports. Many top athletes are admired throughout their countries, and some even have fans all around the world. Young people especially, view many athletes as role models and want to emulate the way these stars dress, act and live their lives. While some athletes aren't deserving of their "role model" status, others act like role models and responsible community citizens.
Top athletes get the attention of young people. Most children and teenagers like to follow professional sports. For many of them, star athletes represent heroes, and children want to be like their heroes. This means they will want to play sports, which is good for their health. Playing sports also teaches valuable life lessons such as teamwork, discipline, goal setting, and the realities of dealing with success and failure. Professional athletes demonstrate the importance of working hard to achieve a goal, or practicing regularly to become good at something. This is a good example for children to follow.
However, professional athletes are not always good role models. For one thing, when young athletes reach a level of fame, it comes with media attention, large financial benefits and social attention. This can lead children to believe that money and fame are an important part of sports. Children might focus more on these aspects than on the fun of the game or on the challenge of learning how to play well. Then there are those athletes who behave badly. For example, some cheat to win their games or take drugs to improve their performance. This kind of behaviour sends the wrong message to children.
Athletes are people who are held at a lofty place in the society owing to their popularity and wealth. These attributes are what makes people want to look up to them and model various facets of their lives along those of the athletes. We can thus be led to conclude that professional athletes can be very good role models for children, as long as they focus on the positive aspects of playing sports.
雅思考試寫作范文：手機(jī)反社會(huì)?
Task：The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking. do you think mobile should be banned like smoking?
Sample answer：
Since the first mobile phone was invented, this technology has already changed our lives. However, while it gains its popularity, a lot of criticism also follow. Personally, I believe that it should not be banned.
We cannot avoid the fact that the mobile phone brings much convenience to our lives. In the old times, if we want to contact with a friend in a distant place, we may write a letter, which will take more than half a month before he gets the letter. But with the help of the mobile phone, we can get the connection with our friends in less than 10 seconds. In addition, the mobile phone is able to achieve many features, such as shopping online, GPS, buying tickets and so on, which not only saves our time and spending, but also brings much more entertainment.
At the same time, mobile phone industry creates great quantity of business opportunities. In the past one decade, mobile phones are sold by hundreds, bu thousand, by million and provides unaccountable jobs in the modern world as well. For example, according to a survey, Samsung has made great contribution to Korean’s GDP. However, the mobile phone also has an effect on our physical and mental health. As we all know, if we insist to play digital games on our phones, we may suffer some eye diseases unless we realise its harmfulness. To make thins worse, nowadays many people would prefer to spend their time with some virtual friends rather than keep their families accompanied in reality.
In conclusion, I consider it has more benefits than drawbacks. If the mobile phone is used at a right place and right time, it still can be put into excellent usefulness.(287 words)
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