托福口語(yǔ)高分學(xué)霸答題思路實(shí)例對(duì)比講解
很多同學(xué)對(duì)于能在托福口語(yǔ)中拿到高分的學(xué)霸都很佩服，有時(shí)候可能也會(huì)覺(jué)得納悶，為什么同樣的一道題，人家就能說(shuō)得比我更好想得比我更全面深刻呢?今天小編給大家?guī)?lái)了托福口語(yǔ)高分學(xué)霸答題思路實(shí)例對(duì)比講解,希望能夠幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來(lái)欣賞一下吧。
托?？谡Z(yǔ)高分學(xué)霸答題思路實(shí)例對(duì)比講解
托福口語(yǔ)高分學(xué)霸答題思路對(duì)比分析
例題：
If a foreign friend of yours is visiting your city. Which part of town would you recommend him or her to see? And why?
普通考生答案：
If a foreign friend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden because of the following reasons. First, there are many charming buildings. Some of them were even designed and built like a 100 years ago. Second, there are many local restaurants around and my friend can taste different kinds of delicious food. Last but not least, the place in the center of my town and the transportation to get there is very convenient. To sum up, If a foreign friend is visiting my city, I would recommend him or her to visit the YU Garden.
為什么這個(gè)答案得不了高分?
1. 開(kāi)頭重復(fù)原題的句子是一個(gè)安全但是比較被動(dòng)的做法。學(xué)霸的答案是要體現(xiàn)出主動(dòng)而自然的表達(dá);
2. 中間的三個(gè)理由貌似比較充分但實(shí)際上每個(gè)理由都存在擴(kuò)展不充分的問(wèn)題，結(jié)果變成了理由的羅列。學(xué)霸的答案重點(diǎn)不是在理由的數(shù)量(很多題目在15秒職能想到一個(gè)理由)，而是在理由的細(xì)節(jié)擴(kuò)展上;
3. 結(jié)尾的總結(jié)貌似讓整個(gè)答案更加完整，但實(shí)際上只是對(duì)主題句的完全重復(fù)，沒(méi)有任何意義上的功能。學(xué)霸的答案一般會(huì)把寶貴的時(shí)間花在陳述真正有意義的內(nèi)容上，即使是總結(jié)也需要用更多樣化的語(yǔ)言;
4. First/second/lastnot not least/to sum up這些過(guò)渡語(yǔ)表面上讓整個(gè)答案有邏輯，實(shí)際上會(huì)讓評(píng)分者認(rèn)為答題者在使用準(zhǔn)備好的答題模板，導(dǎo)致被壓分。學(xué)霸的答案是采用更佳自然的過(guò)渡。
所以，學(xué)霸的答案應(yīng)該是這樣的：
I’ll be happy to show my foreign friend the YU Garden which is a beautiful old community loaded with local culture.
For one, the architecture there is amazing. I mean some of the buildings were designed and constructed like more than 100 years ago and those can give you a really good sense of history and ancient local culture, the gigantic stone gate decorated with nice-looking patterns,the delicate wooden roof painted with colorful pictures. You name it .
Also,tons of local restaurants brings another reason to be there. You can find almost all kinds of local snacks which can never be found anywhere else.
Isn't that the perfect place for a foreign friend?
托?？谡Z(yǔ)中的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤如何避免
我們一起來(lái)看下面的例子：
My teacher gave interesting assignments andmotivating the students.
很顯然，這屬于混用語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)的一個(gè)典型錯(cuò)誤。這會(huì)使句子產(chǎn)生歧義：難道是說(shuō)My teacher gave interesting andmotivating assignments to the students? 因?yàn)楸揪渲衖nteresting和motivating 是平行結(jié)構(gòu). 或者是My teachergave interesting assignments and motivated thestudents? 因?yàn)橐嗫梢岳斫獬蒰ave和 motivated是平行結(jié)構(gòu).所以錯(cuò)誤使用語(yǔ)法會(huì)帶來(lái)許多意想不到的麻煩。
當(dāng)我們重復(fù)使用一個(gè)短語(yǔ)或單詞的時(shí)候，不僅會(huì)給人以詞匯量過(guò)小的感覺(jué)，有時(shí)甚至也會(huì)造成誤解。我們來(lái)看一個(gè)例子：
My teacher wrote the assignment on the chalkboard. The assignment was on thechalkboard until the teacher erased the assignment after we had all done the assignment.事實(shí)上這句話(huà)的觀點(diǎn)會(huì)更加清晰，如果我們將重復(fù)的詞替換為其他表達(dá)的話(huà)。我們?cè)賮?lái)看看改進(jìn)后的表達(dá)：
My teacher wrote the assignment on the chalkboard. She erased the board after we had allcompleted the task.
其中 assignment 被替換為 task; teacher 變?yōu)榱藄he; chalkboard 被改為了board. 不但句子顯得更加生動(dòng)活潑不刻板，信息量也比原來(lái)要多了。
避免托?？谡Z(yǔ)語(yǔ)法的典型錯(cuò)誤，能夠做到舉一反三，靈活應(yīng)用，相信托?？谡Z(yǔ)考試中的其他問(wèn)題就能迎刃而解了。
好習(xí)慣注定托?？谡Z(yǔ)高分
1. 每天堅(jiān)持練習(xí)口語(yǔ)一兩個(gè)小時(shí)，鍛煉你說(shuō)英文的肌肉習(xí)慣
2. 養(yǎng)成大聲讀英文的習(xí)慣，再?lài)L試著用腹式一口氣練習(xí)，這樣使你說(shuō)出的英文更有底氣，更流暢。
3.每天早晨起床后，張大嘴，啊五分鐘，這樣有利于練好你的腹式一口氣。
4. 養(yǎng)成每天去運(yùn)用的習(xí)慣，學(xué)過(guò)了很多東西，要經(jīng)常拿出來(lái)曬太陽(yáng)，要學(xué)會(huì)賣(mài)弄英文，你可以找Partner ,也可以對(duì)著天空，大樹(shù)，小鳥(niǎo)對(duì)話(huà)，只要把這些語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用自如了，變成你自己的了，什么都好!
5. 學(xué)會(huì)正確使用復(fù)讀機(jī)，先精聽(tīng)，然后去讀，去聽(tīng)自己的發(fā)音，找出與磁帶錄音的不同，直到自己的發(fā)音與磁帶的發(fā)音一樣了，再接著聽(tīng)下一個(gè)。
6. 要有專(zhuān)一的精神，不要兩天學(xué)美式的，兩天學(xué)英式的，我們說(shuō)這兩種發(fā)音都挺好的，所以，你喜歡哪種就模仿哪種，而且要保證你所模仿的材料從始到終幾乎是那一種發(fā)音。
7. 要敢說(shuō)英文，不要怕犯錯(cuò)。記?。涸谀阌谜_的方法練習(xí)之后，你犯的錯(cuò)越多，憑著語(yǔ)感糾正的錯(cuò)誤也越多，進(jìn)步也就越大!學(xué)習(xí)外語(yǔ)的好習(xí)慣。
8. 老師，我每天都模仿了一個(gè)小時(shí)，可以已經(jīng)十天了，還是讀不好。
做得很好，習(xí)慣是養(yǎng)成的，只要你用正確的方法去模仿，每天堅(jiān)持去模仿就是一種好習(xí)慣，當(dāng)然，并不是說(shuō)我模仿一個(gè)小時(shí)，發(fā)音就能跟磁帶一模一樣，而是每模仿一次就會(huì)進(jìn)步一點(diǎn)點(diǎn)，這只是時(shí)間的問(wèn)題，也許第十一天，第十二天，就讀好了呢?最重要的是你堅(jiān)持每天去模仿，養(yǎng)成一天不模仿就渾身難受的好習(xí)慣!
9. 每天找人去運(yùn)用，學(xué)一句用一句的好習(xí)慣，語(yǔ)言的學(xué)習(xí)是邊模仿邊練習(xí)，邊運(yùn)用。不能說(shuō)等我學(xué)好了會(huì)說(shuō)了才去說(shuō)，而是能說(shuō)幾句就說(shuō)幾句，幾天說(shuō)一句比十年說(shuō)不出幾句要強(qiáng)得多 。
10. 每天堅(jiān)持復(fù)習(xí)的好習(xí)慣，學(xué)過(guò)的東西不能丟了，要每天都復(fù)習(xí)，把練習(xí)過(guò)的句子拿出來(lái)做口譯。
同學(xué)們除了堅(jiān)持執(zhí)行好以上10大習(xí)慣，還應(yīng)該時(shí)刻關(guān)注自己的學(xué)習(xí)進(jìn)度，充分了解自己的英語(yǔ)口語(yǔ)水平，在一段時(shí)間的學(xué)習(xí)后給自己做測(cè)試，如果有所進(jìn)步就該保持現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)方式，反之就應(yīng)該檢討一下自己還有哪些不足之處，考慮是否應(yīng)該改變學(xué)習(xí)方式。
托?？谡Z(yǔ)之“生病”的表達(dá)方式
(1)一般病情：
He feels headache, nausea and vomiting. (他覺(jué)得頭痛、惡心和想吐。)
He is under the weather. (他不舒服，生病了。)
He began to feel unusually tired. (他感到反常的疲倦。)
He feels light-headed. (他覺(jué)得頭暈。)
She has been shut-in for a few days. (她生病在家?guī)滋炝恕?
Her head is pounding. (她頭痛。)
His symptoms include loss of appetite, weight loss, excessive fatigue, fever and chills. (他的癥狀包括沒(méi)有食欲、體重減輕、非常疲倦、發(fā)燒和發(fā)冷。)
He feels exhausted or fatigued most of the time. (他大部份時(shí)間都覺(jué)得非常疲倦。)
He has been lacking in energy for some time. (他感到虛弱有段時(shí)間了。)
He feels drowsy, dizzy and nauseated. (他覺(jué)得昏昏欲睡，頭暈?zāi)垦：拖胪隆?
He feels as though everything around him is spinning. (他感到周?chē)臇|西都在打轉(zhuǎn)。)
He has noticed some loss of hearing. (他發(fā)覺(jué)聽(tīng)力差些。)
She has some pains and itching around her eyes. (她眼睛四周又痛又癢。)
(2) 傷風(fēng)感冒：
He has been coughing up rusty or greenish-yellow phlegm. (他咳嗽帶有綠黃色的痰。)
His eyes feel itchy and he has been sneezing. (他眼睛發(fā)癢，而且一直在打噴嚏。)
He has a fever, aching muscles and hacking cough. (他有發(fā)燒，筋骨酸痛和常常咳嗽。) (hacking = constant)
He coughed with sputum and feeling of malaise. (他咳嗽有濃痰，而且覺(jué)得很虛弱。) (malaise = debility)
He gets a cold with a deep hacking cough. (他傷風(fēng)咳嗽。)
He has a headache, aching bones and joints. (他頭痛，骨頭、關(guān)節(jié)也痛。)
He has a persistent cough. (他不停地在咳。) 或
He has bouts of uncontrollable coughing. (他一陣陣的咳嗽，難以控制。)
He has hoarse and has lost his voice sometimes. (他聲音嘶啞，有時(shí)失聲。)
He has a sore throat and a stuffy nose. (他嗓子疼痛而且鼻子不通。)
His breathing is harsh and wheezy. (他呼吸時(shí)，有氣喘似的呼哧呼哧作響。)
He has a stabbing pain that comes on suddenly in one or both temples. (有時(shí)突然間太陽(yáng)穴刺痛。)
He has a runny nose, sneezing or a scratchy throat. (他流鼻水，打噴嚏和喉嚨沙啞。)
(3) 手腳毛病：
His both hands and feet ache all over. (他兩手兩腳都很酸痛。)
He has pain on the sole of his feet. (他腳底很痛。)
There is a wart-like lump on the sole of right foot. (我右腳底有個(gè)像肉疣般的硬塊。)
His ankles look puffy and they pit when he presses them with his finger. (他的足踝好像腫了，用手按，就有小坑痕。) (pit = small dent form)(句里的 they 和 them 都是指 ankles)
The pain in his left foot is accompanied by redness and swelling. (左腳酸痛，并有紅腫。)
The joints near his fingernails and knuckles look swollen. (指頭和指節(jié)旁邊的關(guān)節(jié)，似乎有腫大。)
He has numbness and tingling in his hands and fingers. (他的手和指頭感到麻木和刺痛。)
His legs become painful following strenuous exercise. (激烈運(yùn)動(dòng)后，他的腿就痛。)
His knee is misshapen or unable to move. (他的膝蓋有點(diǎn)畸形，也不能動(dòng)。)
There are some swellings in his armpit. (他的腋窩腫大。)
He is troubled with painful muscles and joints. (他的筋骨和關(guān)節(jié)都痛。)
She is troubled by the pains in the back and shoulders. (她的后背和肩膀都痛。)
His knee has been bothering him for some time. (他的膝蓋不舒服，已有一段時(shí)間了。)
(4) 睡眠不好：
He is sleeping poorly.(他睡不好)
He has difficulty in sleeping, inability to concentrate.(他不易入睡，也難集中精神。)
It is usually hard for her to fall asleep when she goes to bed at night.(她晚上就寢，很難入睡。)
He wakes during the night or early morning and finds it difficult to fall asleep again.(他晚間或清早醒來(lái)后，再也不能入睡。)
He has nightmares occasionally.(他有時(shí)做噩夢(mèng)。)
5) 呼吸方面：
His breathing has become increasingly difficult.(他呼吸越來(lái)越困難。)
He has to breathe through his mouth.(他要用口呼吸。)
He is short of breath, even when he has not been exercising, he is breathless.(他喘氣;即使不運(yùn)動(dòng)，他也是上氣不接下氣。)
His cough is more like wheezing.(他的咳嗽有呼哧呼哧的響聲。)
His cough is dry, producing no phlegm.(他是干咳，沒(méi)有痰。)
He has coughed up blood.(他咳嗽有血。)
His nose stuffed up when he had a cold.(他感冒時(shí)鼻子就不通。)
He coughs up a lot of phlegm (thick spit) on most days.(他多半時(shí)間咳出濃濃的痰。)
He has a feeling of tightness in the chest or a feeling that he is suffocating.(他胸部覺(jué)得悶悶的，好像透不過(guò)氣來(lái)。)
(6)口腔毛病：
He has pain in his teeth or jaw. (他的牙齒和下巴疼痛。)
He has some problems with his teeth. (他牙齒有問(wèn)題。)
The tooth hurts only when he bites down on it. (他咬東西時(shí)，牙齒就痛。)
His gums are red and swollen. (他的牙床紅腫。)
His tongue is red and sore all over. (他的舌頭到處紅和痛。)
His breath smells bad and he has a foul taste in his mouth. (他口里有怪味。)
His gums do bleed. (他牙床有出血。)
He has some sore swellings on his gum or jaw. (他的牙床和下巴腫痛。)
He has sore places on or around the lip. (他的嘴唇和周?chē)己芡础?
There are cracks at the corners of his mouth. (他的嘴巴角落破了。)
There are some discolored areas inside on his tongue. (他舌頭里邊有些地方顏色怪怪的。)
(7) 腸胃毛?。?/p>
He has a bloated, uncomfortable feeling after meal. (他飯后肚子覺(jué)得脹脹的，很不舒服。) 或
He feels bloated after eating.
He has bouts of abdominal pain. (他有一陣陣的肚痛。)
He feels bloated in his abdominal area. (他感到肚子脹脹的。)
The pain is mainly in the lower (upper) right part of the abdomen. (痛是在肚子下半部。)
He has nausea and vomiting. (他有惡心和嘔吐。)
It is difficult or painful for him to swallow. (他吞下食物時(shí)會(huì)痛。)
He has passed more gas than usual. (他放…比平常多。)
He has been constipated for a few days. (他便秘了好幾天。)
He suffers pains when he moves his bowels. (他大便時(shí)很痛。)
He has some bleeding from his rectum. (他的肛門(mén)出血。)
He has noticed some blood in his bowel movements. (他發(fā)覺(jué)大便時(shí)有些血。)
His bowel movements are pale, greasy and foul smelling.
or
His bowel movements are grey (or black) in color. (他的大便呈灰白色。)
He has trouble with diarrhea. (他拉肚子。)
(8) 血壓等等：
His blood pressure is really up. (他的血壓很高。)
High blood pressure is creeping up on him.
He has noticed frequent urination, increased thirst and unexpected tireness. (他發(fā)覺(jué)常常小便，非?？诳屎透悠＞?。)
It is a chest pain that gets worse when he bends over or lies down. (他彎腰或躺下時(shí)，胸部更痛。)
He has noticed excessive sweating and unexplained tireness. (他體會(huì)到過(guò)度的出汗和難以解釋的疲倦。)
He has a sharp pain in one area of his spine. (他的脊椎某部位刺痛。)
He has pain in other joints including hip, knee and ankle. (其它關(guān)節(jié)疼痛包括臀部、膝蓋和腳踝。)
His eyes seem to be bulging. (他的眼睛覺(jué)得有點(diǎn)腫脹。)
He has double vision. (他的視線(xiàn)有雙重影子。)
He feels there is a film over his eyes. (他覺(jué)得眼里有種薄膜似的東西，擋住視線(xiàn)。)
His vision in the right eye blurred. (他右眼視線(xiàn)模糊不清。)
He has had some earaches lately. (他近來(lái)耳朵有點(diǎn)痛。)
He has a repeated buzzing or other noises in his ears. (他耳朵常有嗡嗡的聲音)
