2020BEC商務(wù)英語中級寫作指導(dǎo)

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BEC商務(wù)英語寫作指導(dǎo)

教材不斷更新，教法不斷改革，中國的英語學(xué)習(xí)者從最初的資源匱乏，一書難求到今天的信息爆炸，卻好書難求?？陀^的學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境似乎在飛速往前發(fā)展，但學(xué)習(xí)者在學(xué)習(xí)的過程中碰到的問題和困惑卻像是拔不掉的蛀牙，還是那么疼，還是那幾顆。

英語學(xué)習(xí)從過程上來講大致也就是：輸入、輸出這兩個過程。若按正常的邏輯，輸入的信息經(jīng)過理解、整理、分類、排列組合所產(chǎn)生的輸出量實際上應(yīng)該是大于輸入量的(當(dāng)然不可忽視的是我們現(xiàn)在談到的是外語這種特殊的輸入源，因此還不得不考慮文化差異所導(dǎo)致的思維方式上的差異給輸出造成的巨大困難)。而現(xiàn)實的則是大多數(shù)我所接觸過的英語學(xué)習(xí)者都有一個相同的問題，那就是輸入的能力(閱讀能力)遠遠高于輸出的能力(寫作能力)。

造成這個結(jié)果的因素頗多：有些朋友大量閱讀，卻沒有積累;有些朋友有所積累，卻不加思考;而這個結(jié)果的表現(xiàn)形式也各式各樣：文章內(nèi)容貧乏、連貫性差、語言干癟、中式英語表達。本文僅僅就一個方面的因素和一種形式的結(jié)果展開討論，并給出一種建設(shè)性的解決方案，廣大學(xué)習(xí)者參考。

有學(xué)生經(jīng)常感嘆寫作時文思枯竭，就算是生擠出來聊聊數(shù)語也是句式單一，而且總是以簡單句為主。無奈之中難掩對于寫作長句的渴望。其實我經(jīng)常跟學(xué)生講，抱怨、嗟嘆都不解決問題，好的素材其實就在手邊，關(guān)鍵是看你能不能真正做到“如切如磋，如琢如磨”。比如新概念英語第三冊全冊六十篇文章，文章內(nèi)容涉及廣泛，句式豐富多變，各種長句形式層出不窮。仔細研習(xí)新概念英語三冊實在是解決這一問題的一個不錯的方法。

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比方說寫人的時候，我們常常為了立體全面的介紹一個人而大費周章連續(xù)使用兩個，三個甚至是四個句子來介紹。這樣一來不僅筆墨費盡，而且還往往吃力不討好。試比較一下兩組不同的寫法：

1. William Shakespeare is British. He was considered to be one of the greatest writers in England. He was famous for his plays.

2. William Shakespeare, a British, who was considered to be one of the greatest writers in England, was famous for his plays.

通過對比大家會發(fā)現(xiàn)兩點：

一、第二種寫法的質(zhì)量明顯更高，它滿足了我們在寫作中對長句的需求。

二、這兩組句子在內(nèi)容上沒有任何區(qū)別，區(qū)別的僅僅是形式。

但是同時大家也會思考：這只是一個例子，是否具有普遍性或者普遍意義?答案是肯定的。首先，這個句子的普遍性在于這個句子的本身的作用。它本身的形式可以放在任何一篇寫人記事的文章開頭，也可以放在任何一篇議論文中引入例子的時候用于介紹例子當(dāng)中的主要人物的背景。在新概念英語三冊中就可以找到不少的這樣的句子的范本，比如：

【Lesson17, NCEIII】Verrazano, an Italian about whom little is known, sailed into New York Harbor in 1524 and named it Angouleme.

【Lesson24, NCEIII】… the heroine, a dear old lady, who had always been so kind to everybody, had, in her youth, poisoned every one of her five husbands.

試比較：

1.Verrazano was an Italian. Little is known about him. He sailed into New York Harbor in 1524 and named it Angouleme.

2.The heroine was a dear old lady. She had always been so kind to everybody. She had, in her youth, poisoned every one of her five husbands.

經(jīng)過以上的分析之后，相信剩下的問題就只剩下一個：面對這樣的句子我們應(yīng)該如何去操作呢?操作的部分分兩步：長句都是由短句合并而來，所以我們首先需要對簡單的短句進行分析，然后再選擇合適的語法手段將之合并。通過分析不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，這三個短句所討論的都是同一主體。這時候就可以使用各種可以做后置修飾或補充說明的語法手段將三個短句有機的結(jié)合起來。這些語法手段中包括了：分詞作后置定語，不定式做后置定語，同位語等等。所以根據(jù)以上例句進行簡單總結(jié)，并將之抽象化，我們得出一種介紹人物時可以使用的一種不錯的長句句型模板：

主語 + 【同位語 + 定語從句】 + 謂語 + (其他：賓語/表語/狀語等)

① ② ③ ④

其中：

① 主語：人物名字

② 同位語：名詞或名詞性的短語，表示人物的國籍、性別、職業(yè)、特長等信息

③ 定語從句：詳細闡述一個人每一方面的特征

④ 剩余主句部分：該人物跟本文主題最相關(guān)的一個特征。

該用法最終甚至還可以從介紹人物這樣一個范圍推廣到介紹任何一個具體的事物，比如09年6月份的大學(xué)英語四級考試題目：該考題要求考生討論的是大學(xué)校園的recreational activities (課外活動)，必須包含以下內(nèi)容：

1、多種多樣

2、有益 也可能有危害性

3、作為大學(xué)生的看法

不管具體內(nèi)容如何最開始我們都需要介紹主題：recreational activities，這時也可以使用和介紹人物同樣的模板：

1.Recreational activities are things that we do to occupy our spare time. Recreational activities include various different forms. Recreational activities are considered to be both beneficial and vain.

2.Recreational activities, things that we do to occupy our spare time, which include various different forms, are considered to be both beneficial and vain.

跟之前幾組例子一樣，短句的堆砌顯得冗長，而運用了模板以后的例句會更加的緊湊，豐滿，句子內(nèi)部成分長短結(jié)合，錯落有致。

以上所舉的例子僅僅是長句寫作的一個非常細節(jié)的方面。希望廣大的學(xué)習(xí)者也可以動起手來，我們從簡單的句子開始著手，給我們的文章里加上一個漂亮長句，讓我們的寫作變得有“特長”。

BEC商務(wù)英語中級寫作常用句型

第一部分、BEC作文段首句常用句型

一、對立觀點命題形式的首句

1. Many people do not doubt that A is superior to B , while others think quite differently on the issue of _____. Personally, I stand on the side of A .

2. Some people say A , other people argue B . In a word , _____. But I cannot agree this point of view for many reasons.

3. There are different views concerning this topic . Some people like to CHOOSE A , some prefer to CHOOSE B . Personally , I prefer B . I think B has more advantages.

4. From my point of view , it is more advisable to CHOOSE A than to CHOOSE B .

5. Despite the fact that most people prefer A , I would like to choose B because the following reasons .

6. In general , I prefer to _____ .

7. As far as I am concerned , I would like to prefer _____ .

8. When it comes to _____ , most people tend to believe A . But others consider B as _____ .

9. When asked about _____ , the vast majority of people would support that A . But others regard B as _____ .

10. At the risk of address the issue too direct , I prefer A because I think that _____ .

11. When asked about _____ , many people give their opinions that _____ , but other people may see _____ differently .

12. When faced with _____ , quite a few would claim that _____ , but others , in contrast , deem _____ as _____ .

13. When inquired about _____ , the vast majority of people would like to _____ , but other people , who hold an opposite view , consider _____ as _____ .

14. When _____ is mentioned _____ , most people believe that _____ , but other people would rather think _____ as _____ .

15. While many people may stick to me idea that _____ , I would like to prefer _____.

二、單一觀點式

A . Agree

1. One of the greatest writers once said that _____ . Now , it still has its significant realistic value .

2. I would follow the reasoning that _____ .

3. Many people advocate that _____ . They claim that _____ . My opinion is the same as theirs in the following reasons .

4. I totally agree with the statement that _____ . The reasons are presented below .

5. After pondering this question on many occasions , I finally reached the conclusion that _____ is something worthy to do and I cannot skip it .

6. my arguments for point are listed as follows.

7. I agree with the above statement because _____ .

8. Nowhere in the world has the issue of _____ been so much debated like in our society.

9. I agree with the statement that _____ without reservation because _____ .

10. Thinking logically , I can only say that the title statement is valid because _____ .

11. I fully support the statement above because I am very sure that _____ .

12. Some may hold the opinion that AAA . But others have a negative attitude . As far as I am concerned , I agree that _____ .

13. Many one have the idea that AAA . However , many others disagree with this argument . But both side of the problem whether _____ are supported by good reasons.

14. Recently , it has been much debated over the problem of AAA . Those who object to AAA announce that _____ . But those who favor AAA utter a sonorous voice that _____.

15. Recently , there is vehement discussion on the issue of _____ . Those who criticize _____ argue that _____ . They claim that _____ . But people who firmly advocate _____ , on the other hand , argue that _____ .

16. There is a much-debated problem today about _____ . Those who object to _____ argue that _____ . They are very sure about _____ . But people who prefer _____ , on the other hand , claim that _____ .

B . Disagree

1. Until recently , _____ was viewed as _____ . But people are taking a fresh look at it

2. Recently , we often hear about _____ . But is it ?

3. These days , it is often heard about _____ . But is this really the truth ?

4. I feel such an attitude is negative , and that it can bring _____.

5. Some people argue as if it is a general truth that _____ . But to be frank , I cannot agree with them for the flowing reasons .

6. Despite the fact that many people believe that _____ , I doubt whether the argument can bear much analysis .

7. Although some people hold the opinion that _____ , I wonder whether the argument could bear close examination .

8. In the nationwide , discussion , many people argue that _____ . But I can say nothing but _____ .

9. Advocates of AAA proclaim that _____ , but I _____ .

10. Until recently , _____ was regarded as _____ . But _____ .

11. Some people think that _____ , but I disagree with this opinion for numerous reasons , as presented below .

12. Now , it is increasingly mentioned that _____ . Such people think _____ . But I can only cast doubt on whether _____ .

13. Now , it is widely believed that _____ . These people think _____ . But I wonder if _____ .

14. I cannot totally the idea that _____ . Because , in my point of view , I believe _____ .

15. As a matter of fact , I support that _____ , but I cannot agree with the title statement .

16. Nowadays , it is widely held that _____ . People of this kind think _____ .But I doubt whether _____ .

第二部分、BEC作文常用結(jié)尾句

1. Taking into account of all these factors , we may reach the conclusion that_____ .

2. All reliable evidences point to one saying , that is _____ .

3. For the reasons presented above , I strongly commit to the notion that _____ .

4. While it is true that _____ , I think that _____ .

5. Given the factors I have just outlined , I can only say that _____ .

6. This is not to say that _____ . But in terms of _____ , it is _____ .

7. Therefore , it is easy to draw the conclusion that _____ .

8. Recognizing the fact that _____ should drive us to conclude that _____ .

9. To put all into a nutshell , I _____ .

10. In a word , I support the statement that it is better to _____ because Good stuff! Wonder why there are so few hits.

BEC商務(wù)英語中級寫作：抱怨和索賠信函匯總

Complaints & Claims 抱怨和索賠信函

抱怨、索賠信函的目的是為了獲取更好的服務(wù)，對已出現(xiàn)的問題求得盡快的、妥善的解決。它通常是買方由于對收到的貨物不滿而書寫，如：貨物未按時到達;貨物雖抵達，但與訂單所載不同;貨物有損毀現(xiàn)象;貨物數(shù)量短缺或多余;貨物質(zhì)量與樣品不符;服務(wù)不合理以及收費過高等，這些均是抱怨、索賠的正當(dāng)理由。

書寫抱怨、索賠信函時，不妨開門見山出原先雙方同意的條件，然后列舉事實以表示有何不滿，以及為什么不滿，最后提出解決的方法。內(nèi)容應(yīng)明確、清楚、有理，語氣要簡潔、堅決。避免使用憤怒和使對方過于難堪的措辭(除非你所抱怨的問題反復(fù)發(fā)生，且多次投訴而毫無結(jié)果)。

For Delay in Shipment (由于發(fā)貨延遲而抱怨)

Dear Sirs ,

The furniture we ordered from you should have reached us a week ago .Needless to say , the delay in delivery has put us to great inconvenience .It is therefore imperative that you dispatch them immediately .Otherwise we shall be obliged to cancel the order and obtain the goods elsewhere.

Please look into the matter as one of urgency and let us have your reply as early as possible .

For Poor-Packing (由于包裝不妥提出索賠)

Dear Sirs ,

We are writing to inform you that the toys covered by our order No.519arrived in such an unsatisfactory condition that we have to lodge a claim against you .It was found upon examination that 10% of them are broken and some are badly scratched , obviously due to the improper packing . Therefore, we cannot offer it for sale at the normal price and suggest that you make us an allowance of 20% on the invoiced cost .This is the amount by which we propose to reduce our selling price .If you cannot accept , Im afraid we shall have to return them for replacement .

Sincerely yours , X.XX

For Damage of Goods (由于貨物損壞而抱怨)

Dear Sirs,

Our order No.JT-8 The glassware you supplied to our order of 3rd July was delivered by the shipping company this morning .The 160 cartons containing the goods appeared to be in perfect condition .But when I unpacked them with great care , I regret to report that 10 cartons of glassware badly cracked .

We trust you can understand that we expect the compensation for our dam aged goods.

For Incomformity(由于貨物不符而抱怨)

Dear Sirs ,

On March 12, we ordered 1,200 shirts size 42. But unfortunately ,we received completely different articles-children clothes today .We can only presume that a mistake was made and the children clothes were for another order.

As I have several customers waiting , please arrange for the replacements at once.