2020GRE寫作如何正確表達(dá)論述觀點(diǎn)

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GRE寫作如何正確表達(dá)論述觀點(diǎn)

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧1

counterproductive adj.產(chǎn)生相反效果(結(jié)果)的

e.g. It is counterproductive to be too tough: it just makes the staff resentful.

e.g. Although the speaker overlooks certain circumstances in which undueskepticism might be counterproductive, and even harmful, on balance I agree thatwe should not passively accept whatever is passed off as fact; otherwise, human knowledge would never advance.

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧2

seminal adj.萌芽的，潛在的;開創(chuàng)性的;有重大影響的

e.g. in the seminal state (在萌芽狀態(tài)) seminal thoughts / seminal principle(基本原則)

e.g. a seminal book/poet / This experiment was to have a seminal influence on his own political development.

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧3

forgo v.放棄 (The choice to forgo his security is always available, although it might carry unpleasant consequence)

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧4

intuition n.直覺 (I will trust my strong intuition that free will is an essential part of our being as humans.)

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧5

satisfy v.證明是正當(dāng)?shù)?，公證的;為…尋找正當(dāng)理由

e.g. Such action can be justified on the grounds of greater efficiency.

e.g. In the final analysis, government cannot philosophically justify assisting large cities for the purpose of either promoting or preserving the nation's cultural traditions; nor is government assistance necessary toward these ends.

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧6

resort to … 訴諸…

e.g. no necessity to resort to violent actions such as demonstration, riot or rebel.

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧7

hinge on … 以…為轉(zhuǎn)移，靠…轉(zhuǎn)動(dòng)

e.g. The claim that society’s destiny hinges on how children are socialized, while appealing in some respects, is an over-statement at best.

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧8

at best 最多，充其量;以最樂觀的觀點(diǎn)來看

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧9

collaborate to …

e.g. For example, scientists, researchers, and even computer programmers must collaborate to establish common goals, coordinate efforts, and meet time lines.

新GRE寫作表達(dá)技巧10

lend some credence to … 提供支持

e.g. While our everyday experience might lend credence to this assertion.

e.g. Recent advances in molecular biology and genetics lend some credence to this position, by suggesting that these determining physical forces include our own inpidual genetic makeup.

GRE滿分作文重點(diǎn)解析：Critical Thinking

Too much time, money, and energy are spent developing new and more elaborate technology. Society should instead focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of its citizens.

I must say that I reject this statement. While it is true that we need to support society as much as possible with current technology, that does not in any way mean that we should stop progressing simply because our current technology cannot handle all the problems we have brought to it. Does that mean that we should simply accept the status quo and make do? No, I don’t think so. To do so would be tantamount to adopting a fatalistic approach; I think most people would reject that.

Technology has helped, and it has hurt. Without it, we would never have our standard of living, nor quality of nutrition, expectation of a long and productive life span, and the unshakable belief that our lives can be made even better. But it has also brought us universal pollution, weapons so powerful as to be capable of rendering us extinct, and the consequent fear for our survival as species and as a planet. Technology is indeed a double-edged sword. And yet, I still have to argue in its favor, because without it, we have no hope.

Some might argue that we would be better off without technology. They might say that a return to a less technologically driven approach to life would have the benefits of reducing stress and allowing us to live simpler, happier lives, like those of our forebears. Such an idea is seductive, so much so that much of art and all of nostalgia are devoted to it. But upon closer inspection, one realizes that such a move would only return us to a life of different kinds of stress, one of false simplicity, one fraught with danger. It would be a life

without antibiotics where a minor cut could prove deadly. It would be a life where childbirth is the main killer of women, and where an emergency is dealt with in terms of hours and days instead of minutes and hours; a life where there are no phones or cars or planes or central heating, no proven drug therapies to treat mental illness, no computers. Would this world really make people happy?

What we already have, we have. And since the only way to move is forward, instead of allowing ourselves to be paralyzed by fear and worry, we need to learn how to clean up the pollution we have caused, and how to deal with a world that feeds on weapons and mass destruction. Doing these things means having to move away from technology into a more difficult realm, that of diplomacy and compromise: to move from the bully stance of “I am bigger and better and I have more toys and so I win” to a place where everyone wins.

Technology is the thing that will allow people to do that. But, advanced as it is, it is still in its infancy. We have to allow it to grow up and mature in order to reap the real rewards that it can bring. And there are even greater rewards ahead of us than what the world has already experienced. When technology is pushed to the outer edge, that is where serendipitous discoveries can occur. This has been seen throughout technological advancement, but the easiest example is probably the space program which made us think, really hard, about how to do things in a different environment. It gave us telecommunications, new fabrics and international cooperation. Paramedical devices, so that people can be treated even as they are being transported to the hosptal, are a direct development of that technology. None of this would have happened in the time frame that it did if we had not pushed for technological advancement. If we had decided to

“focus on maximizing the use of existing technology” instead of foolishly reaching for the stars, we would not have made those discoveries which now are the bedrock of the 21st century.

分析：

字?jǐn)?shù)：651

語言：平實(shí)的語句完全沒有網(wǎng)絡(luò)流行模板的痕跡，也是許多過了6級(jí)的考生通過練習(xí)可以達(dá)到的水平。

I must say that I reject this statement.

Does that mean that we should simply accept the status quo and make do? No, I don’t think so.

Technology has helped, and it has hurt.

Technology is indeed a double-edged sword. And yet, I still have to argue in its favor, because without it, we have no hope.

……

當(dāng)然，這并不意味，在GRE作文考試中，平實(shí)的語言比潤(rùn)色后的語言有更多的優(yōu)勢(shì)。從這篇作文中，我們可以得到以下兩條重要信息：

1、 通過記憶大量模板使語言“全副武裝”、“氣勢(shì)洶洶”并非高分作文的必要條件，這種方式的弊端在課堂上我們已闡述過。

2、 在陳述idea的過程中，體現(xiàn)出critical thinking才是成功的關(guān)鍵。我們?cè)谡n堂上對(duì)critical thinking這一概念做過多次詳細(xì)的解釋，現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)大家一起來體會(huì)這一概念在文中的運(yùn)用。

第一段：

(表明立場(chǎng))I must say that I reject this statement. (讓步)While it is true that we need to support society as much as possible with current technology, (折回自己立場(chǎng))that does not in any way mean that we should stop progressing simply because our current technology cannot handle all the problems we have brought to it.

第二段：

(概述科技的兩面性)Technology has helped, and it has hurt. (具體討論科技的貢獻(xiàn))Without it, we would never have our standard of living, nor quality of nutrition, expectation of a long and productive life span, and the unshakable belief that our lives can be made even better. (具體討論科技的危害)But it has also brought us universal pollution, weapons so powerful as to be capable of rendering us extinct, and the consequent fear for our survival as species and as a planet. Technology is indeed a double-edged sword. (表明已考慮到科技的危害，但是依然堅(jiān)持自己立場(chǎng))And yet, I still have to argue in its favor, because without it, we have no hope.

第三段：

(提出反方的立場(chǎng))Some might argue that we would be better off without technology. They might say that a return to a less technologically driven approach to life would have the benefits of reducing stress and allowing us to live simpler, happier lives, like those of our forebears. Such an idea is seductive, so much so that much of art and all of nostalgia are devoted to it. (通過具體論據(jù)反駁反方的觀點(diǎn))But upon closer inspection, one realizes that such a move would only return us to a life of different kinds of stress, one of false simplicity, one fraught with danger. It would be a life without antibiotics where a minor cut could prove deadly. It would be a life where childbirth is the main killer of women, and where an emergency is dealt with in terms of hours and days instead of minutes and hours; a life where there are no phones or cars or planes or central heating, no proven drug therapies to treat mental illness, no computers. Would this world really make people happy?

第四段：

(在第三段駁論的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)一步立論)What we already have, we have. And since the only way to move is forward, instead of allowing ourselves to be paralyzed by fear and worry, we need to learn how to clean up the pollution we have caused, and how to deal with a world that feeds on weapons and mass destruction. Doing these things means having to move away from technology into a more difficult realm, that of diplomacy and compromise: to move from the bully stance of “I am bigger and better and I have more toys and so I win” to a place where everyone wins.

第五段：

Technology is the thing that will allow people to do that. (指出支持觀點(diǎn)存在的一點(diǎn)不足)But, advanced as it is, it is still in its infancy. (解決方案)We have to allow it to grow up and mature in order to reap the real rewards that it can bring. And there are even greater rewards ahead of us than what the world has already experienced. When technology is pushed to the outer edge, that is where serendipitous discoveries can occur. This has been seen throughout technological advancement, but the easiest example is probably the space program which made us think, really hard, about how to do things in a different environment. It gave us telecommunications, new fabrics and international cooperation. Paramedical devices, so that people can be treated even as they are being transported to the hospital, are a direct development of that technology. None of this would have happened in the time frame that it did if we had not pushed for technological advancement. If we had decided to “focus on maximizing the use of existing technology” instead of foolishly reaching for the stars, we would not have made those discoveries which now are the bedrock of the 21st century.

gre滿分作文重點(diǎn)：Critical Thinking.當(dāng)然，提高critical thinking能力的同時(shí)，也很有必要包裝語言。