托福寫作29分4大類實用功能性句式匯總
大家都知道作文一科無論中文還是英文,想要拿到滿分難度是非常高的,今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈懽?9分高手經(jīng)驗分享,希望能夠幫助到大家,一起來學習吧。
托福寫作29分高手經(jīng)驗分享 4大類實用功能性句式匯總
托福寫作29分高手作文句式分享
1. 強調重要性的句式
(1) The importance of ... can never be overestimated.
注釋:這個句子可在全文的任何地方出現(xiàn),可以用于表達觀點:As far as I'm concerned, the importance of learning English can never be overestimated.也可以用于總結:Thus, the importance of cultivating a sense of independence can never be overestimated.
(2) ... has been playing an increasingly important role in ...
注釋:這個句子可用于開頭:Today, Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our society。也可以在段落首用于表達觀點,不過我個人通常用于表達觀點,因為開頭我有固定模板。
(3) ... is a strong determinant of ...
注釋:這個句子類似(1)句,也是可以在任何地方出現(xiàn),比如whether a student has developed some skills is a strong determinant of whether he can get a good job.
2. 權衡對比表達觀點的句式
(1) when ..., we need to give full consideration to ...
注釋:這句話很顯然是用于表達觀點的,我一般在第一段的最后一句使用:when deciding on building a chemical plant, the government should give full consideration to the advantages and disadvantages it will bring to the community.
(2) ... is valued more than ...
注釋:這句也是用來表達觀點的,我一般用在第一段:developing economy is valued more than protecting environment by some people。
(3) favor ... as opposed to ...
注釋:相比之下更喜歡,也是用于表達觀點:Many people favor protecting the environment as opposed to developing the economy alone.
3. 舉例常用句式表達
有三種常用表達:
A perfect example can be found in ...
... serves as a perfect example
... has well illustrated this
例如:A perfect example can be found in Microsoft which insists on clean technology.
Microsoft, which insists on clean technology, serves as a perfect example.
Microsoft, which insists on clean technology, has well illustrated this.
舉完例子覺得不夠,就再加一個:
... is not alone in ...
比如:Microsoft is not alone in holding the idea。
然后就開始舉另一個例子吧。
4. 描述結果的句式
(1) the attempt by ... to ... has been a tremendous success.
注釋:這個句子也可以用于舉例也可以用于總結:The attempt by the government to help gaint panda has been a tremendous success.
(2) a better understanding of ... will enable ...
注釋:這個句子超有用,可以用于表達觀點,可以用于總結,可以用于引出例子:A better underdtanding of ourselves will enable us to live better lives.
(3) an examination of ... will confirm such a fact that ...
注釋:這個也超有用,我主要用來引出例證和表達觀點: An examination of those students with excellent academic performance will confirm such a fact that diligence and efficient methods contribute a lot to their success.
(4) ... have generally come to recognize the wisdom of ...
注釋:這個句子可放在開頭:Most people now have generally come to recognize the wisdom of being able to speak English.
托福寫作注意這些容易犯的錯誤
1、用詞不當
學生們在托福寫作中或多或少都會有一些用詞不當?shù)膯栴},但是要注意的是一些最最基本的錯誤是不能犯的。
In the show,if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly,they will get five hundreds thousand U。S。 dollars as a prize。
problems應改為questions
2、拼寫錯誤
還請備戰(zhàn)托??荚嚨耐瑢W們注意,這里的拼寫錯誤不是指在考試時候的誤打,而是本身對詞匯拼寫記憶的錯誤。
In conclusion,issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one,requiring subjective judgement,consequently,there are no easy or certain answers。
judgement應改為judgment
3、亂用大詞
First of all,children can earn money from their jobs,although there isn’t too much,but they will keep their salary gingerliness。
這里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。該句子還有以下問題:
1)該作文題目是講學生是否應該做兼職,因此children的出現(xiàn)就顯得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能連用的;
3)指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的什么;
4.表達中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
5.表意重復
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
前面已經(jīng)提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同義詞,所以這里這么寫就讓人不明白。
6.固定用法錯誤
To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
——To some extends應改為To some extent
7.例證夸張
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
雖然善意的謊言是必要的,但是其功效顯然沒有這么大。
8.成分多余
According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
該句中的shows that是多余的成分。
9.詞性混亂
However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly應該改成private和embarrassing。
10.文體不正式
All of the players gonna to tell the truth in attempt to win $500,000.
——gonna過于口語化。
In addition, I think people shoudn’t always tell the truth to others.
——在托福作文中盡量不要用縮寫,這里應該寫should not。
11.兩個獨立句子間無連詞
Another point is that young people are more aggressive and energetic, and it’s suitable for them to choose such jobs, which will provide them with rich experience that is essential for their future success.
這個錯誤犯的頻率相當高,一定要注意。
12.時態(tài)錯誤
托福大作文一般使用現(xiàn)在時態(tài),除了拿過去事件作為例子用過去時態(tài)。
Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
—— claimed應該改為claim
13.不知所云
They also mention that in modern society there are too much entertainment bothering them as the huge gap lying between them and the success.
托福寫作部分出題規(guī)律總結
1.獨立寫作最常見話題類型仍為教育話題:幾乎每年托福獨立寫作考題中三成以上的題目都跟教育相關,同時在政府和成功話題中也會涉及到教育。不用多說,教育話題真的是官方最愛。
2. 每年都會有一定比例的新題:從近幾年考試新題情況來看(15年出現(xiàn)7道新題、16年12道、17年3道,而18年已出10道),平均每年會有近兩成的新題出現(xiàn),所以總的來說還是以出舊題為主,尤其是16年題目。以下兩道題,Tracy老師課上必講呢。
3. 綜合寫作常考學科仍為考古和生物。
先來看看今年綜合寫作涉及到的學科主題:Brendan the navigator是否去過美洲、歐洲人到?jīng)]到過澳洲、歐洲人到達北美大陸比我們所知的更早、Etruscan 人到底是不是從土耳其到意大利的、一種恐龍脖子是直立的還是水平的、兩只白海豚是否同一只、控制the spread of weevils、植物晚上合其葉的原因、海龜保護措施的建議、owl parrots數(shù)量減少的原因、whales 的 beaching 假說,以及控制flatworn在歐洲的擴張。當然還有很多,不再一一列舉,官方真的是太愛關于“誰去過哪兒”和各種動植物相關內容。因此,備考過程中相關學科詞匯的學習尤為重要。