托福寫作如何以高分為目標(biāo)做準(zhǔn)備
托福寫作如何以高分為目標(biāo)做準(zhǔn)備?抓住文章結(jié)構(gòu)和主題句都很重要。今天小編給大家?guī)砹送懈懽魅绾我愿叻譃槟繕?biāo)做準(zhǔn)備，希望可以幫助到大家，下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。
托福寫作如何以高分為目標(biāo)做準(zhǔn)備?抓住文章結(jié)構(gòu)和主題句都很重要
托福獨(dú)立寫作推薦采用五段三點(diǎn)式文章結(jié)構(gòu)
即Introduction一段，Body三段，和Conclusion一段。一般第一段會用2-4句話陳述自己的觀點(diǎn)，大約60字左右。第二到四段從三個方面論述自己的觀點(diǎn)，每段約100字。結(jié)尾段用1-3句話總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)，大約40個字。那么如何具體規(guī)劃每一個段落呢?
開頭段主要用以下幾種方法來組織，即背景法 (Background)，爭議法(Controversy)，提問法(Question)，故事法(Story)和引言法(Quotation)。以背景法為例，背景法一般會提出一種普遍的或值得關(guān)注的現(xiàn)象作為背景，或者是由遠(yuǎn)到近、由大到小地談?wù)摼o扣論題的社會觀點(diǎn)作為背景。
背景法開頭段的結(jié)構(gòu)通常是：背景(1-3句)+論題+反方觀點(diǎn)+(反方理由)+過度+(正方觀點(diǎn))+作者的觀點(diǎn)+作者的理由。
以此題為例：Technology makes people's lives more complicated. 題目涉及到了現(xiàn)今社會比較熱門的話題——科技。這樣，我們就可以以這種社會比較關(guān)注的現(xiàn)象作為我們作文的開頭背景。因此這個題目的首段就可以這樣開始：Technology has had tremendous impacts on every aspect of modern life. However, people are having conflicting opinions about whether it has made people's lives more complicated or not. I believe technology has by and large made our lives more convenient。第一句話就緊貼社會的背景，這樣寫不但很容易打開考生自己的思路，抓住作文的焦點(diǎn)，還能引起考官的共鳴。
托福獨(dú)立寫作主題句如何寫好?
主題句，顧名思義，向考官展示的是考生作文的主要意旨所以它在中間段落中的作用是至關(guān)重要的。通常主題句應(yīng)該注意以下幾點(diǎn)：
1.主題句必須是陳述句
有的考生想在寫作中創(chuàng)新，于是采用反問句或者其他看似多樣化的句型，然而這種多樣性帶來的后果是給考官觀點(diǎn)不明確的印象，很自然地會影響到分?jǐn)?shù)。
2.必須標(biāo)明觀點(diǎn)
如果考生把一句無關(guān)痛癢的話放在主題句的位置上，很顯然無法表明自身觀點(diǎn)。比如像“今天是晴天”這樣的話沒有表明觀點(diǎn);然而“今天是個好天氣”就包含一種感情色彩在里面，給人一種立場明確的感覺?？忌鷳?yīng)該切記：沒有反駁余地的就不可以作為主題句。
3.主題句態(tài)度須堅決
但是不能極端。
4.每段必須有主題句
理論上講沒有主題句是可以的，但是考場上不可以，沒有主題就會浪費(fèi)考官的時間去幫你總結(jié)主題，然而繁忙的考官是不會那么善良地去分析你的題目來抓取你的觀點(diǎn)的。
托福寫作模板：改變家鄉(xiāng)的環(huán)境
If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
托福寫作模板范文參考：
If I could change one important thing about my hometown, it would be air pollution problem, and I will give the following reasons to explain why I want to solve the problem.
The first and most important reason is that I hope that my hometown can become a beautiful city. As an old industrial city, my hometown has made a great deal of contribution or the country’s economic development. At a result，the natural environment of the city has been badly damaged. The forest has disappeared; the mountains have become bald, and the most awful thing is that the air quality becomes more and more worsen. People seldom see the blue sky during most time of year.
Another reason why I want to change my hometown's air pollution situation is that the city's development needs clean and tidy environment to attract investors. nowadays people have come to know that the city's environment, which is so called “software facility of the city”，plays an important role in the city's future. For example, due to the fact that the environment of the city is very poor, many local students who pursue their study out of the city would rather find the job in other cities than coming back to their hometown after they graduated. In addition, nowadays people have paid more and more attention to their health. If the air pollution problem cannot be solved as quickly as possible, people's requirement for a healthy body will never be realized.
In my mind, changing air pollution will apparently be my first choice if I can change one important thing about my hometown. Fortunately people in my hometown are gradually aware of the serious problem and start doing something about it.
托福寫作語料庫積累：廣告是人們不健康飲食的根源嗎
Do you agree or disagree: the advertising is the main cause of unhealthy eating habits? 廣告是人們不健康飲食的根源?
托福寫作相關(guān)提問：
Do you agree or disagree? Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past. 是否同意，現(xiàn)在比過去更加容易保持健康?
注意審題：不健康飲食不等于不健康
托福寫作思路：讓步反駁寫法：(三分讓步，七分反駁)
托福寫作立場：廣告是人們不健康飲食的根源之一，但是，不是唯一的主要的原因：
托福寫作思路拓展：
讓步段：廣告為何是人們不健康飲食的根源：
1. 快餐食品廣告會導(dǎo)致人們的不健康飲食。具體而言，現(xiàn)代人，生活節(jié)奏快，競爭激勵，忙于事業(yè)，因此，為節(jié)省時間，很多人依賴快餐，但是，過度的糖分，脂肪，熱量的攝入必然是有害健康。 因此，快餐廣告是人們不健康飲食的根源之一。
反駁段：除了廣告，不健康飲食的更加重要的原因有哪些：
1. 不健康的飲食習(xí)慣， 例如過度節(jié)食，很多年輕女孩喜歡追求苗條身體，很多人認(rèn)為節(jié)食是最好的方法，但是，美麗的代價就是營養(yǎng)不良。
2. 不健康的飲食習(xí)慣， 例如暴飲暴食，很多人為了滿足食欲，飲食無度， 過度營養(yǎng)物的攝入(例如海鮮類食品)必然是有害健康。
托福寫作語料庫：
1. Alarmingly, many modern people, especially youngsters, have been suffering from unwholesome eating habits.
令人擔(dān)憂的是，很多現(xiàn)代人，尤其是年輕人，一直受到不健康飲食的困擾。
2. Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not the advertisement is the root cause of people’s unhealthy dietary habits.
關(guān)于廣告是不是人們不健康飲食的根源，人們的觀點(diǎn)是矛盾的。
點(diǎn)評：unhealthy dietary habit = unwholesome eating habit n不健康的飲食習(xí)慣;
3. In addition to the subtle influence of ads， there are still many other reasons that contribute to people’s undesirable eating habits.
除了廣告的微妙影響，還有很多的原因?qū)е铝巳藗兊牟涣硷嬍沉?xí)慣。
點(diǎn)評：contribute to = give rise to = lead to v 導(dǎo)致……
4. So fierce is the competition and so fast is the tempo of modern life that the vast majority of people nearly have no time available to do the home meal.
現(xiàn)代社會，競爭激勵，生活節(jié)奏快，現(xiàn)代人幾乎沒有時間回家做飯。
點(diǎn)評：fierce competition n 激勵的競爭
5. Eating too much fast food is health-threatening, for fast food contains too much fat, sugar and calorie.
吃了太多的快餐有害健康，因為不少的快餐含有太多的脂肪，糖分和熱量。
點(diǎn)評：too much intake of fast food = eat too much fast food v 吃太多的快餐食品
6. To be more precise = more precisely adv具體來講
7. a rich variety of = various kinds of = manifold adj各種各樣的
8. carbonated beverage = carbonated drinks n 碳酸飲料
點(diǎn)評：carbon n碳;beverage n飲料
9. …… is physically detrimental = is health-threatening = undermine one’s health v 有害身體健康(經(jīng)典三劍客)
10. obesity or over-nutrition n肥胖或者營養(yǎng)過剩
點(diǎn)評：
obese adj肥胖的
over-nutritious adj營養(yǎng)過剩的
nutrient n營養(yǎng)品
11. exert a subtle influence on 對于……有微妙的影響(推薦背誦;廣告必用)
12. …… is inevitably health- threatening …… 是不可避免地威脅健康
13. food preference or engorgement are still contributing factors of people’s sub-health.
偏食和暴飲暴食同樣是人們亞健康的原因
詞匯：engorge vt. 狼吞虎咽
14. fail to maintain well-balanced diet v不能保持均衡的飲食
15. A great many young ladies are pursing slender figure nowadays, many of them tend to believe that cutting food intake is the best method. Unfortunately, the cost of beautiful look is the mal-nutrition.
很多年輕女孩喜歡追求苗條身材，很多人認(rèn)為節(jié)食是最后的方法，但是，美麗的代價就是營養(yǎng)不良。
托福寫作語料庫積累：關(guān)于成功因素
托福寫作語料庫
關(guān)于激勵Motivation
詞組：light up, push oneself, be destructive to s/th, tap the potential, miss out;
沒有自我激勵的人生就像一個只死魚一樣，那種人生不值得活;人應(yīng)該不停的點(diǎn)燃內(nèi)心的火苗把自己推向成功。沒有自我激勵的話，就是郁郁寡歡、無所事事;更糟糕的是沒有辦法開發(fā)自己的潛力，并措施成功的機(jī)會。
Without motivation we're like a dead fish in the water, that kind of life is not worth living. we should constantly light up our internal fire and push ourselves harder to achieve our goals. While the lack of motivation is destructive to oneself, and one will feel depressed, and have a pretty low esteem. To make matter worse, one is not be able to tap the full potential within oneself, thus he or she would miss out the chance to be successful.
關(guān)于珍惜“今天”
你不能改變過去,但你可以改變未來。我們應(yīng)該明白,事情不總是他們期望的方式。當(dāng)他們犯錯誤時,他們關(guān)注的解決方案,而不是遺憾。俗話說,昨天是歷史,明天是神秘的,但是今天是一個禮物,這就是為什么我們稱之為禮物。
You can't change the past but you can change the future. We should understand that things don t always work out the way we expect. When we make mistakes, we ought to focus on solutions, not on regrets. As the saying goes, yesterday is history, tomorrow is mystery, but today is a gift, that's why we call it present.
關(guān)于藝術(shù)家的“成功”
并不是天分造就偉大的藝術(shù)家,是努力,堅持,毅力,決心和毅力。并不是每一個偉大的藝術(shù)家可以在五歲的時候能做出很好的畫作。
It isn't talent that makes great artists, it's hard work, persistence, will power, determination, and fortitude. Not every great artist can draw nice pictures by the age of five.
成功的藝術(shù)家不是以天分支撐的,那只是不付出努力的借口。還有其他更重要的因素如能否夠?qū)ふ疑鐣P(guān)系;與同行和導(dǎo)師而不是天賦更重要。
Successful artists aren't underpinned by talent, it is an excuse not to put in the effort that is needed to be a successful artist. There are other more important factors like, to be able to seek out social connections, and build on them. Connecting with peers and mentors is more important than being talented.
必須上大學(xué)才能成功嗎
Advanced education provides you with the tools you need to be successful in your future career. Not only can you acquire specific knowledge in a particular filed, like economics, physics, and biology, and stuff, you can also get practical experience in relevant areas, like psychological counseling, physical therapy, and even nursing.
高等教育為您提你未來職業(yè)生涯成功需要的工具。不僅可以獲得特定的知識在一個特定的領(lǐng)域,如經(jīng)濟(jì)學(xué)、物理學(xué)、生物學(xué)等等,你也可以在相關(guān)領(lǐng)域獲得實際經(jīng)驗,如心理咨詢,物理治療,甚至護(hù)理。
生意人要不要隨和?
能夠建立社會和職業(yè)關(guān)系網(wǎng),并擴(kuò)大他們的能力是企業(yè)家成功的關(guān)鍵因素,為了實現(xiàn)這個目標(biāo),我們需要隨和,這樣使破冰更容易。
The ability to build up social and professional connections and expand them is the key factor to be a successful business person, and in order to achieve that, one needs to be easygoing, cuz that makes ice breaking much more easier.
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