托福獨立寫作高分思路分享
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托福獨立寫作高分思路分享 讓步式寫法要這么用
托福獨立寫作思路分析
在寫一邊倒的文章的時候，多數(shù)考生喜歡采用經(jīng)典的五段式寫法，即開頭段、結(jié)尾段、中間三段三個分論點論證。這樣的寫法當(dāng)然無可厚非，然而多數(shù)學(xué)生會碰到兩個問題，一是我只能想到兩個理由，第三個理由寫不出來怎么辦?二是我三個理由都寫完了，但是字?jǐn)?shù)不夠300字怎么辦?這樣的情況，就需要我們的救命稻草"讓步段"出場了。
什么是讓步段寫法?
讓步段，顧名思義，就是退了一步的段落。例如，F(xiàn)or further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 選擇了同意的立場，寫完了三個同意的理由之后，可以再寫一點讓步段論述一下反方的觀點，即在學(xué)校學(xué)習(xí)好也很重要。寫讓步段的好處有很多，一是上文提及的最實際的用途---湊字?jǐn)?shù)，二是從行文邏輯看，寫一段讓步段也可以展現(xiàn)考生思維的嚴(yán)密性。只要時間允許，此種一舉多得的做法為何不嘗試呢?
托福獨立寫作讓步段寫法講解
但是，讓步段寫作也需要遵循一定的原則?？忌趯懽鲿r，應(yīng)當(dāng)按照三部曲進(jìn)行：1)寫出一個反方觀點 2)進(jìn)行一定程度的削弱 3)重申自己的觀點。
1. 寫出反方觀點
這一步大多數(shù)同學(xué)都做得不錯，但是在提出反方觀點之前，可再加上一些連接詞，例如admittedly, nevertheless等等。還拿之前拿到題目做例子，F(xiàn)or further career success, is relate well to other people more important than studying hard at school? 總觀點是同意，讓步段寫學(xué)習(xí)好也挺重要的。第一步引出反方觀點時，應(yīng)寫：Admittedly, acquiring an excellent GPA is one significant proof of your ability, for "study" is one of the major tasks that students are supposed to fulfill in school.
2. 進(jìn)行一定程度的削弱
這是大多數(shù)同學(xué)會忽略的一步。很多同學(xué)在寫讓步段的時候，喜歡跳過第二步，直接重申自己的觀點，然而這樣的寫法會顯得邏輯上牽強，行文也顯得生硬。因此，在提出反方觀點時要進(jìn)行一定的削弱。例如在寫完上文那句話之后，應(yīng)加上：However, the outstanding scores only prove the intelligence of the student, while the EQ, largely reflected by how well you relate with others, plays an utmost significant role in the future career success.
3. 重申自己的觀點
這一步非常重要，因為讓步段的提出僅僅是小插曲，重要的還是自己的觀點。切不可寫了讓步段，就忘了自己的立場，那樣就是得不償失了。因此，在寫完上面兩句話之后，需要再加上一句，therefore, I still hold the opinion that relate well with others is more important than acquiring high scores in school.
在讓步段的寫作當(dāng)中，尤其需要注意兩點：1是第二步的削弱過程，這樣可使文章看起來不那么唐突，更為流暢。2是另外還需注意字?jǐn)?shù)的控制，讓步段切不可寫得超過之前的論述段的長度，否則就有觀點不明確的嫌疑了。
托福寫作語料庫積累：關(guān)于學(xué)校
托福寫作語料庫
學(xué)校的硬件設(shè)施 ：
gym :
活動類型：
啞鈴do some dumbbell, 室內(nèi)跑道 run on the indoor track, 在場地上打球 play some sport on the court, 水上運動do some aquatic activities, 郵箱運動如瑜伽、游泳、在跑步機上跑步aerobics like yoga, swimming, running on a treadmill
體育館是個休閑娛樂的地方，是打發(fā)時間的首選;在這里可以做各種各樣的運動(舉以上的例子)。
A gym is the place where students can have fun and relax themselves, for many students it can be the first choices when it comes to how to spend their spare time. There are lots of fun activities you can do in the gym like, play some sports on the court, do some aerobics like yoga, swimming, and running on a treadmill，and stuff like that.
作用：保持體型Keep fit, 有趣 have fun,放松 relax，引導(dǎo)學(xué)生健康、活躍的生活方式 lead a healthy and active lifestyle
總之，很有必要建設(shè)一個體育館。
In a nutshell, it is really important for a university to own a nice recreation center(gym 的同義詞)，for it helps to promote a healthy, active lifestyle.
實驗室laboratory ：
做實驗conduct research, 把理論應(yīng)用于實際apply theory in practice, 直觀的理解概念understand concepts intuitively(直觀的)，培養(yǎng)學(xué)生的創(chuàng)造力 develop students' creativity;
實驗室是好學(xué)校的重要組成部分， 然后展開實驗室的作用(即以上內(nèi)容)。
Great labs are a big part of a good university, students can use the lab to apply theory into practice and conduct researches in their fields, moreover, by doing experiments students can understand the concepts better and develop their creativity.
一個學(xué)校的軟實力 ：
名聲reputation ：
學(xué)校的名聲跟學(xué)生沒有直接關(guān)系，我覺得沒啥意義。
Reputation of a university has no direct impact on its students, and it is kind of meaningless.
教員faculty ：
跟audit class聯(lián)系在一起;
聽課是最好的了解一個學(xué)校的方式，因為教授的知識、教書技巧和方式代表著學(xué)校，而且上課中傳遞的價值觀在很大程度上也是學(xué)校的價值觀。
Auditing class is the best to know the university better, since faculty members are an indispensable part of the university. Their knowledge，teaching skills and even the way they teach the class represent the university. The values they uphold in the class are the ones that are cherished by the university.
地點location ：
就學(xué)校的地點可以參看之前的地點語料庫：
比如大都市metropolis, 多文化的multicultural, 方便的convenient, 公共交通 public transportation, 商店shops, 酒吧和餐館 bars and restaurant,充滿活力 full of dynamics; 當(dāng)然也可以跟social里面的broaden your horizon and enrich your experience結(jié)合在一起。
大學(xué)的大小size ：
“大”的好處 ：
多元化diverse student body, 俱樂部和社團(tuán)lots of clubs and societies, 完備的設(shè)施well established facilities, 著名的教授lots of famous professors, 活動很多various activities;
個人而言, 我喜歡較大的大學(xué)，學(xué)生團(tuán)體會比較多元, 國際學(xué)生很多，他們組織好多社會活動。
Personally, I would say I like to attend a big university. A big university tends to have a diverse student body, there might be lots of international students like me, and they organize all kinds of social activities.
還有較大的大學(xué)會有一流的設(shè)備如圖書館、體育館和實驗設(shè)施。
Also, a big university is likely to have very well established facilities like multi-functional libraries, recreation centers and research facilities. These are big parts of a colorful university life.
托福寫作語料庫積累：關(guān)于地點
托福寫作語料庫
世界著名海灘城市World famous coastal cities:
泰國皮皮島：Phi Phi Island, Thailand
巴西里約熱內(nèi)盧：Rio de Janiero, Brazil
美國夏威夷、邁阿密：Hawaii, Miami USA
南非開普敦：Cape Town, South Africa
中國三亞：Sayan, China
海灘風(fēng)景的詞：
banana trees, palm trees(棕櫚樹), blossom(盛開的花), breeze, paradise(天堂)tropical, laid-back, sunshine, coconut,
必背句子：
里約熱內(nèi)盧是個好地方：
Rio de Janiero is definitely the city that I want to visit, and it's like a treasure. It is a laid-back coastal city with lots of palm trees, banana trees along the beach. I can enjoy the breeze and drinking the coconut with a straw and lying on the beach to appreciate the beauty of mother nature.
酒吧里面的雞尾酒Exotic cocktails offer in local bar:
margarita(瑪格麗塔), mojito(莫吉托), long island tea(長島冰茶)
必背句子：
在海灘的酒吧喝起來：
One can never be disappointed with the exotic drinks offered in these fancy bars, like margarita, mojito, and even long island tea, which is my favorite.
飯店里的菜品nice food/ culinary delight offered in the restaurants:
海鮮seafood: salmon (三文魚), tuna(金槍魚), scallop(扇貝), clam(蛤);
意大利面類：spaghetti, pasta, lasagna,
當(dāng)然還有：
taco, hamburger with bacon, beef patties, tomatoes, lettuce and cheese in it, ribs, steak, Chicago style pizza, cheese steaks, Buffalo chicken wings, Macaroni & cheese 等等
必背句子(串起來以上的食物造句)：
民以食為天：
Also, I can enjoy the culinary delight in these western style restaurants like salmon, American style hamburgers, spaghetti and stuff like that.
精品店的紀(jì)念品souvenir offered in the boutique:
jewelry, bracelet, necklace
海灘、海上活動activities：
surfing, scuba diving, snorkeling, tubing, wakeboarding, boating, jet skiing,
必背句子(穿起來以上的水上運動造句)：
不挑戰(zhàn)一下水上運動不是好漢子：
The last thing you should miss out when visiting this nice and beautiful city is sea and water activities like snorkeling, wakeboarding and even jet skiing, which is the most exciting activity. You might get a little sun burnt but still worth it.
描述海灘必殺句子：
去熱帶城市度假：
I am a wimp(膽小鬼，用法很生動) and hate the cold，I would say I'd like to take my bathing suits and go to a warm place, a coast city like Sanya in the very south of China.
波瀾壯闊的大海讓我流連忘返：
The beach is breathtaking! There are fantastic views and the atmosphere is absolutely gorgeous! The coast is marvelous. The Sea is clear and picturesque.
食物和美景讓我欲罷不能：
It has a grip on(控制) my sense of fun, adventure, love of food, and it is amazingly beautiful, and the people are awesome.
個性化描述一個地方非常安全：
It is also a very safe place. There are not many places in this world where a women can walk the streets alone in the middle of the night without fear.
描述一個國外小鎮(zhèn)的特色：
The culture, language, food and people could be enormously fun and you can find many western style bars, restaurants and coffee shops virtually everywhere.
描述北京有人情味：
Beijing has a unique local culture and the people down there have a real appreciation for the things that make life worth living. People there are super nice, for example, they are very keen to help visitors out when they got lost somewhere.
中國歷史文化遺跡：
北京：
Tiananmen Square, Forbidden City, Temple of Heaven, Summer Palace, the Great Wall, Lama Temple,
十三朝古都西安因兵馬俑出名：
It had served as the nation's capital for 13 dynasties such as Western Zhou, Qin, Western Han and Tang for more than 1000 years. It is famous for its historical importance, and the city is best known for the terra cotta warriors.
形容大城市的詞：
metropolitan, modern，international, multicultural, exciting, thrilling, fascinating, spectacular, dynamic=full of dynamics, energetic, diversified, charming, hustle-bustle, hurly – burly, eventful, overcrowded
例句：
喜歡大城市的喧囂：
I would like to study in a metropolitan city like Beijing or New York, cuz a city like is very thrilling and multi-cultural, and it's great fun to live in. You can explore its hustle bustle by going to shopping malls, restaurants, bars and even museums.
托福寫作語料庫積累：關(guān)于書籍電影音樂
托福寫作語料庫
關(guān)于music的類型Type/genre： rock & roll, R&B, reggae, country, Jazz, electronic, folklore(民謠), classical music;
偉大音樂家的名字Great Musicians：Beethoven, Bach, Mozart
流行音樂人Pop singers: Eminem, Beyonce, Jay Z. Taylor Swift, Bruno Mars, Rihana.
電影的類型Types of movies：thriller(驚悚片), suspense(懸疑片), comedy, action, documentary, science fiction, romance(愛情片), Animation(動畫片), horror (恐怖片)
有名的電影導(dǎo)演Director(后面附有該導(dǎo)演的著名電影名字):
Peter Jackson: Return of the King
Steven Speilberg: Jurassic Park (侏羅紀(jì)公園)
James Cameron: Avatar(阿凡達(dá)), Titanic
Christopher Nolan: the Batman, the Dark Night;
著名演員Actors and actresses: Jackie Chen, Bruce Lee, Brad Pitt, Angelina Julie, Leonardo DiCaprio
就電影、音樂和書籍的作用和效果而言，小編總結(jié)了一下幾個共同特點;所以當(dāng)考生看到任何跟電影、音樂和書籍有關(guān)的題目時都可以巧妙的應(yīng)用以下理由。
緩解壓力: ease/release + my pressure/stress/tension/depression from both my life and study;
讓生活和學(xué)習(xí)變得更有效率、充實：improve /enhance/ increase + learning/study efficiency/productivity of the day;
精神煥發(fā)：refresh myself, revitalize/revive my mood;
激起情感和想象力：bring about different kinds of emotions; stir/stimulate my imagination; (注解：聽音樂、看懸疑電影的時候)
句子：
小說、電影的線索很迷人：
The storyline/plot is very attractive/engaging/intriguing;
看電影、讀小說的時候身臨其境忘乎所以：
When I read this masterpiece/watch this movie, I find time irrelevant and I totally forget about the time. I tune everything out around me and am so attracted in the storyline and I feel tied up to the character in the novel/movie.
沒有什么可以阻止我看完這部小說或電影：
I feel like the characters in the novel/movie connect to me so much that nothing could hold me back from reading/watching it until I finish the novel/movie.
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