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托福獨立寫作細節(jié)須知

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托福獨立寫作細節(jié)須知

托福獨立寫作細節(jié)須知,我們一起來看看吧,下面小編就和大家分享,來欣賞一下吧。

托福獨立寫作細節(jié)須知

細節(jié)一:開頭段交代清楚就行,不要一味求長

還記得學英語的時候,老師講過的英語中有一種很奇葩的用法,就是形式主語(話說好多孩子都在糾結形式主語和強調句怎么區(qū)分)。為什么有形式主語呢?很簡單,因為真正的主語太長了,容易對我們的理解造成影響,而且主語太長不美觀,因此出現(xiàn)了形式主語it。既然語法中都有這樣的一個用法,那么我們寫作中又為何不遵循這個要求呢?開頭段寫得太長,占用時間不說,有時候開頭段話都說盡了,會嚴重影響主體段的展開。因此,獨立寫作的開頭段不要寫太長,一般50-80個單詞是極好的。

細節(jié)二:每段寫完記得空一行

為什么呢?好看唄!試想一下,如果你的作文各段都連在一起的,你自己看起來舒服嗎?更別說挑剔的考官來看了!你的作文如果不能從內容上征服考官,至少要在篇章結構上給人一種舒適的感覺!所以,每段寫作記得空一行,你寫著舒服,考官看著也舒服。

細節(jié)三:正式文體若能堅持不隨意縮寫,那將是極好的

縮寫好嗎?不好!因為首先不縮寫的話可能是兩個單詞,縮寫完單詞數(shù)就少了!不過,這個點其實并不是最關鍵的,重點在于托福寫作是應試作文,應該保持正式文體的寫作風格!縮寫會給人一種非正式的趕腳!所以,能夠不縮寫的盡量不要縮寫。比如can’t,最好在托福寫作中寫成cannot,而can not則是英式英語的寫法,記住了!

細節(jié)四:不要一寫作文就把你“七大姑八大姨”搬出來

托福寫作,太多這些個人的例子會給人一種非常personal的感覺!本身寫作是在發(fā)表你自己的觀點。雖然說托福的寫作題可支持亦可反駁,但是關鍵點還在于你的論述能否讓人覺得有一絲絲的可信度!舉個例子,難道你姨喜歡吃的水果,大家都喜歡嗎?所以,寫作的例子若能避開太多個人例子,那又是極好的!或者如果你很強,可以考慮以客觀的方式來寫個人的例子!

怎么調整托福考試心態(tài)

托??荚囋趺凑{整心態(tài)

在這樣的心態(tài)下,也許你會發(fā)揮的更好哦。你應該在前一天有足夠的睡眠,并確保你的衣服和所有必要的身份證明文件已經放好了,考試當天可以直接拿到考場。

具體小建議如下:

吃一頓適度量的飯,記是說不要吃太多,也不要吃太少,整個托??荚嚨臅r長在四個多小時,所以要預計好食物的量。不要過度地吃糖果,咖啡或抽太多的香煙,否則在考試過程中,你可能會想要更多,但是考場是不會讓你吃這些的喝足夠的水,但不要太多,因為上衛(wèi)生會很麻煩。不要喝軟飲料,飲料會讓你更快地感到口渴。在考試之前做一些放松的事情,自己要了解下自己的習慣,什么能讓自己放松下來。不要和那些傾向于不安或激動的朋友待在一起,因為負能量可能會相互傳染。使用一些放松的方法,如冥想。努力集中精神。早點抵達考試中心,要有足夠的時間來完成一些例行事務。任何時候開始感到緊張時,請進行一些深呼吸練習,它會重新讓你集中精神。不要恐懼這種焦慮,這是正常現(xiàn)象。保持冷靜,不要驚慌,即使有些東西看起來很困難。只關注自己的考試,不要考慮其他學生在做什么。

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51 Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Parents or other adult relatives should makeimportant decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenaged children. Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your opinion.

No one knows me as well as my parents. No one wants the bestfor me like my parents. It is natural that I should allow myparents to make important decisions for me. I think all older teenagers (15 to 18 year-olds) shouldtake their parents advice on decisions that concern their education, their social life, and their futurecareers.

My parents have always chosen the best schools for me to attend. They have encouraged me toattend special prep classes to make sure that I was well prepared for the exams. They have givenme tutors to make sure that I understood my subjects well. When it comes to choosing a college, I will trust my parents to make that decision. They know what they can afford and what will giveme a good education.

When I was young, my parents would invite children over to play with me. Over the years, I havebecome very close to these children. They are like my family. We celebrate holidays and birthdaystogether. We even go to the mountains together in the summer. My parents do not want me tofall into the wrong crowd. They do not want me to meet and fall in love with someone they do notknow. I understand that and I want to make them happy.

My father runs a very successful business and my mother is a well-known politician. They are verywell connected and they have many friends who would like me to work for them when I finishschool. This is a very good arrangement for me.

If all children follow their parents’ wishes, they would probably be happier. Parents only want thebest for their children.

52 Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Traveling alone is the only way to travel. If you take someone with you, you take your home withyou. When you travel alone, you meet new people, have new experiences, and learn more aboutyourself.

When I traveled with my friend, I spend all my time with that friend. We eat together and sightseetogether. When I travel alone, I spend my time looking for new friends. It is easy to fine otherpeople, either other tourists or locals, to eat with or have a coffee with. When you share meals withstrangers, they become friends.

When I travel with a friend, my routine is predictable. We maintain the same schedule that we doat home. When I travel alone, I adopt the rhythm of the place I visit. I might take a nap in theafternoon and eat dinner at 11 pm. I might go to a disco and dance all night.

When I travel with a friend, we know how we will react to things. When I travel alone, each newexperience requires a new reaction. If I don’t try new things, I won’t be able to decide if I likesomething or not. Shall I ride an ostrich or eat one?

I think it is always important to do things on your own. You can fine new friends, collect newmemories, and adopt different ways of doing things. Isn’t that the point of travel?

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27 AD It has recently been announced that a newmovies theater may be built in your neighborhood. Doyou support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specificreasons and details to support your answer.

Some people will say that a new movie theater in ourneighborhood would be a bad thing. However, I fully supportthe plan to build one. I feel that a movie theater would bringmore opportunities for recreation, reduce teenage delinquency, and lead to several improvementsin the town.

As it stands, there is little to do in my town. There are no parks here, and there is certainly nonightlife. Additionally, the nearest movies theater is more than thirty minutes away. That isinconvenient for everyone here. Many movies end late at night. Who want to a long drive home at 11:30 p.m. or midnight?

Building a new movie theater here will reduce juvenile delinquency, Like everyone else, teens hereare bored. They need activities to keep them busy and out of trouble. The jobs that the theatrewill provide will help teens, too. We need more businesses that are willing and eager to employyoung people.

Overall, the new theater will bring many improvements to the town, For example, it will help otherbusinesses. That is because the movie theater will attract customers from neighboring towns. Those neighbors do not have a reason to come to this town now. However, if they are cominghere for a movies, they will be more likely to stay here to shop. If we get more visitors, we’ll needbetter roads. While this may be costly, it will also make travel easier for people living here. We willbe able to get around faster, Safety will be improved with the new roads, because they will be inbetter condition than many that we have now.

I believe that our town needs a new movie theater. Again, I support it fully, I hope that others inour community will join me to convince residents and local government.

28 AD Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ?People shouldsometimes do things that they do not enjoying doing. Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.

I agree that people should sometimes do things that they don't enjoy doing. This is a basic part ofbeing an adult. Plus, some things that aren't "fun" are still good for us in the long run.

Take personal tasks. Who enjoys going to the dentist? Very few people enjoy having their annualcheck-up with the doctor. Not a lot of people enjoy changing the oil in their car or moving theirlawns. These are all things we do because we have to, not because we want to .We realize thattaking care of our physical health is the sensible thing to do .We know that if we don't change theoil in our cars, our cars won't run. We understand that grass grows and if we don't mow it, ourlawns will look like tropical forests.

Professional tasked are another part of the same equation. No one likes to be stuck with a boringassignment or to be told we have to work with someone no one else gets along with. Sometimeswe have to put up with unfair criticism from a supervisor or resentment from those we supervise. Ifwe're in management., we may have had the unpleasant task of having to fire someone. None ofthese are fun things, Unfortunately, they’re all part of earning a living, something the majority ofadults have to do.

On the other hand, sometimes doing some thing we don't enjoy doing can lead to enjoyment. Simply by trying it again, we may decide we like doing it .for instance, we may have convincesourselves we hate to dance. We agree to go to a club only to please someone else. Yet, for somereason, this time we enjoying dancing. We’ve been cheating ourselves of enjoyment without evenknowing it. The same can be true of trying new foods or a new type of museum.

Doing what we don't enjoy doesn’t always have to be a bother, does it? It’s just part of life.

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68 Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

When we see photographs of starving children, it’s hard to say that we should spend billions of dollars on space exploration. But that’s just what we should do. Children don’t need to be starving, but we do need to explore space. Right now, we have enough money to feed every person on Earth. Children are starving because of mismanagement of resources and simple human greed. Those are problems we can solve right here on earth. That shouldn’t stop our need to find out what’s beyond our own solar system.

We may never make contact with whatever other species there may be out there in space. Even so, there are still two very practical and positive consequences of space exploration. One is a certainty and the other is a possibility. The certainty is medical research. Yes, we can conduct research here on earth. But much of the research done in space, for example, on the effects of gravity on bone marrow, is making a difference in medicine here on Earth. When we do research in space, we also learn more about space exploration. Also, many of the inventions that were developed for space travel have been adapted to good use on Earth.

The possible consequence of space exploration is finding another planet human beings can colonize. Overpopulation is a huge problem on our planet. People are living longer, more healthful lives, and that’s a good thing. But it means there are fewer people dying and more people being born. Eventually we’ll have less space, fewer resources, and major distribution problems. If we can find another planet to live on, we can relieve the problems of overpopulation on our planet.

It’s a tragedy that there are human beings suffering on Earth. However, if we wait until everyone has a perfect life, we will never explore space—and that , too, would be a kind of tragedy.

69 People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples to support your answer.

Stress is one of our biggest enemies. It affects our health, our personality, and our relationships with others. In order to get rid of stress. I first have to identify the cause. I have different antidotes to stress depending on the cause. The most common types of stress I face are with work, with friends, and with myself.

Work-related stress is the easiest to combat. I simply stop working for a while. If I find myself picking up the same piece of paper four times a day and never doing anything with it, I blame stress. The best thing to do is to do something else. Sometimes, I get up from my desk and go down the hall to talk to my colleagues, but I don’t talk about work related subjects. Other times, I will take a short walk around the block and get some fresh air. Work-related stress can be cured by getting away from the work.

Stress caused by friends is more difficult to cure. Often the cause is more complicated. My friends could have a personal problem that causes them and me both anxiety. Or my friends could be angry at me or vice versa. Here, the cure for stress is talking about the problem and being with my friends. Unlike work, you can’t walk away from your friends.

Stress I cause myself is also not so easy to get rid of. If I feel bothered by an exam or anxious about the future, there is very little for me to do. I just have to tell myself that I can only do my best and leave the rest up to fate.

It is important to try to lead a stress-free life. If you can avoid stress by walking away form it (like at work), talking through it (like with your friends) or facing it head on (like with yourself), your health, personality and relationships will benefit.

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