關(guān)于托福寫作常見的病句整理
關(guān)于托福寫作常見的病句整理
在寫托福作文中，同學(xué)們會(huì)出現(xiàn)一些病句導(dǎo)致作文分?jǐn)?shù)拉低，那該如何改進(jìn)呢，小編整理了一些方法，下面小編就和大家分享，來欣賞一下吧。
關(guān)于托福寫作常見的病句整理
1. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。
改進(jìn)：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。
2.We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。
改進(jìn)： We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。
3. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。
改進(jìn)：Artists' work upgrades our civilization。
4. For example， you work in a big factory。
改進(jìn)： Suppose you work in a big factory。
5.He will get a higher salary to improve his living level。
改進(jìn)： He will get a higher salary，thus improving his life。
6. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。
改進(jìn)： Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。
7. Their brain is still very young。
改進(jìn)： They are still immature。
8. Though it is not the best job，it afford to his life。
改進(jìn)： Though it is not the best job，a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。
9. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong。
改進(jìn)： They cannot tell right from wrong。
10. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。
改進(jìn)： It will help children learn to make good use of time。?
11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation，they want further development。
改進(jìn)： Since people are never satisfied with their status，they want further development。
12. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。
改進(jìn)： They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。
13. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money。
改進(jìn)： The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。
定語名詞的復(fù)數(shù)解析
名詞作定語一般用單數(shù)，但也有以下例外。
1) 用復(fù)數(shù)作定語。
如：sports meeting 運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)
students reading-room 學(xué)生閱覽室
talks table 談判桌
the foreign languages department 外語系
2) man， woman， gentleman等作定語時(shí)，其單復(fù)數(shù)以所修飾的名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)而定。
如：men workers women teachers
gentlemen officials
3) 有些原有s結(jié)尾的名詞，作定語時(shí)，s保留。
如：goods train (貨車)
arms produce 武器生產(chǎn)
customs papers 海關(guān)文件
clothes brush衣刷
4) 數(shù)詞+名詞作定語時(shí)，這個(gè)名詞一般保留單數(shù)形式。
如：two-dozen eggs 兩打/(二十四個(gè)雞蛋)
a ten-mile walk 十里路
two-hundred trees 兩百棵樹
a five-year plan. 一個(gè)五年計(jì)劃
個(gè)別的有用復(fù)數(shù)作定語的，如： a seven-years child
不可數(shù)名詞量的表示
1)物質(zhì)名詞
a. 當(dāng)物質(zhì)名詞轉(zhuǎn)化為個(gè)體名詞時(shí)。
比較：
Cake is a kind of food. 蛋糕是一種食物。 (不可數(shù))
These cakes are sweet. 這些蛋糕很好吃。 (可數(shù))
b. 當(dāng)物質(zhì)名詞表示該物質(zhì)的種類時(shí)，名詞可數(shù)。
This factory produces steel. (不可數(shù))
We need various steels. (可數(shù))
c. 當(dāng)物質(zhì)名詞表示份數(shù)時(shí)，可數(shù)。
Our country is famous for tea.
我國因茶葉而聞名。
Two teas， please.
請(qǐng)來兩杯茶。
2) 抽象名詞有時(shí)也可數(shù)
four freedoms 四大自由
the four modernizations四個(gè)現(xiàn)代化
物質(zhì)名詞和抽象名詞可以借助單位詞表一定的數(shù)量。
如：
a glass of water 一杯水
a piece of advice 一條建議
情態(tài)動(dòng)詞的語法特征
1) 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞不能表示正在發(fā)生或已經(jīng)發(fā)生的事情，只表示期待或估計(jì)某事的發(fā)生。
2) 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞除ought 和have 外，后面只能接不帶to 的不定式。
3) 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞沒有人稱，數(shù)的變化，即情態(tài)動(dòng)詞第三人稱單數(shù)不加-s.
4) 情態(tài)動(dòng)詞沒有非謂語形式，即沒有不定式，分詞，等形式。
比較may和might
1) 表示允許或請(qǐng)求;表示沒有把握的推測(cè);may 放在句首，表示祝愿。例如：
May God bless you! 愿上帝保佑你!
He might be at home. 他可能在家。
注意：might 表示推測(cè)時(shí)，不表示時(shí)態(tài)，只是可能性比may 小。
2) 成語：may/might as well，后面接不帶to 的不定式，意為"不妨".例如：
If that is the case， we may as well try.如果情況確實(shí)如此，我們不妨試一試。
典型例題
Peter ___come with us tonight， but he isn't very sure yet.
A. must B. may C. can D. will
答案B. 表可能性只能用may.此句意可從后半句推出。