GRE寫作如何通過(guò)模仿范文來(lái)訓(xùn)練

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GRE寫作如何通過(guò)模仿范文來(lái)訓(xùn)練?具體方法心得講解

GRE作文模仿準(zhǔn)備工作介紹

1.要有可以模仿的文章(最好是帶有說(shuō)理性的文章)。

2.你要理解這個(gè)文章，理解它的用詞、句子結(jié)構(gòu)、段落結(jié)構(gòu)。

3.這些文章都有正確的中文翻譯。同時(shí)，文章的長(zhǎng)度不能超過(guò)500字。

怎么模仿?舉個(gè)例子：首先要分析文章，分析每一句和上一句是什么關(guān)系。美國(guó)人寫作文的一個(gè)特點(diǎn)是，通常每段的第一句都包含了整段文字的內(nèi)容，也就是我們常說(shuō)的topicsentence。另一個(gè)特點(diǎn)是當(dāng)你寫完一個(gè)句子后，你要問(wèn)WHY。你提出一個(gè)問(wèn)題，然后給出一個(gè)圓滿的回答，這就是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。

GRE寫作模仿訓(xùn)練要做到這兩點(diǎn)

1.抽象的能力(abstract);

2.具體的能力(details/examples)。

具體化并不代表要寫一個(gè)完整的故事。但是任何一篇文章都要給人一個(gè)具體的意向。通過(guò)具體的東西來(lái)描述才能給人塌實(shí)的感覺(jué)。具體化只要舉出幾個(gè)地方、幾個(gè)名字、幾件小事就可以了。

為什么好多同學(xué)作文中分?jǐn)?shù)很低呢，就是因?yàn)?，他提出了?wèn)題卻沒(méi)有回答。

通過(guò)不斷的模仿寫作，就可以不斷的糾正語(yǔ)法和詞組錯(cuò)誤。如何把抽象和具體結(jié)合起來(lái)是一個(gè)重點(diǎn)，如何在一個(gè)段落中只表達(dá)一個(gè)思想，這是另一個(gè)重點(diǎn)。美國(guó)人的判分特點(diǎn)是，如果你在一段中表達(dá)了一個(gè)以上的思想，那你的分?jǐn)?shù)就不會(huì)高了。

分析完一篇文章后，怎么模仿著寫呢?就是看著中文的翻譯，把上面的英文一字不落的寫下來(lái)，當(dāng)你實(shí)在想不起來(lái)的時(shí)候，再看原文。等到寫完之后，和原文對(duì)照一下，看看是誰(shuí)寫的漂亮。我剛剛開始模仿寫作的時(shí)候，發(fā)現(xiàn)，模仿了幾天后，寫作水平的確提高了。因?yàn)楦鶕?jù)記憶學(xué)原則，這個(gè)單詞你背過(guò)、讀過(guò)，它都不能寫在你的文章中間。如果一個(gè)單詞可以經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)在你的腦子和文章中間，那這只證明了一件事，就是你寫過(guò)這個(gè)字。但是你自己寫作你不可能用到這個(gè)字，那就只有一個(gè)可能，就是你在模仿文章時(shí)寫過(guò)這個(gè)字。如果一個(gè)結(jié)構(gòu)別人寫不出來(lái)，你能寫出來(lái)，那你的分?jǐn)?shù)就會(huì)高。

GRE寫作模仿訓(xùn)練有哪些好處?

1.你的語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤會(huì)越來(lái)越少;

2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)能力越來(lái)越強(qiáng);

3.用詞能力大大增加。

通過(guò)這樣的模仿，漸漸的你會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)，模板在不知不覺(jué)中變成了你自己的，寫作能力也就大大提高了。

新GRE寫作：達(dá)到目標(biāo)的手段

題目：

If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.

只要值得，不擇手段達(dá)到目的是合理的。

范文：

The speaker claim that if a goal if worthwhile, then any means taken to achieve this goal is justifiable. Although the assertion makes sense when we consider the underlying of this implication is that whatever the conditions, the natures of the endings deserve our effort wholehearted. But if we examine the broad meaning that this claim carries, we find this threshold statement suffer deficiencies from many aspects of consideration.

First let define the worthiness of a goal. How worthwhile and valuable a goal is lies not only in the subjective meditation and evaluation of an individual, we must consider the interactive influence exerted by this goal on others. For example, a country may consider the goal of achieving economic success and well being of its citizens to be worthwhile, but if we know they exploit cheap labor forces in third-world country, utilize scarce natural resources that being exported from poor countries, or dump low-cost goods in these countries, our morals reveal us the dark side of the goal and make it less worthwhile than it seems to be to its home people. On a personal level, a person's food might be the others' poison, so did the goal. Consider the ambition of

Napoleon, his ambitious goal is to conquer the whole European Continent, which considered by himself and many of his follows to be the most glorious plan they have ever made. But by resorting to wars, killings, and blood shedding, their sweet dream turn out to be the nightmare of people habituating in this continent. In a word, since no goal is set from a pure disinterested, impartial perspective, it is necessary to bear the interwoven relationship in mind before targeting at a certain goal. Even if a goal is worthwhile agreed by majority of people, we should consider cost-and-benefit side of things in an effort to obtaining an nonbiased, all-around point of view. Most people today agree that the exploration of outer space is a worthy goal considering the valuable research materials we would get from for our physics and medial experiment and weather forecast. What is more, due to the limit longevity of earth and the ever increasing of populations, we see high calls to find another habitat for our future generations. Even if all the advantages and benefits involved justify the worthiness of this goal, not all means taken would be considered as sensible and judicial. Since most pressing social problem such as AIDS prevention, poverty, environmental problems still in need of immediate attention and observation, we need to allocate most of our resources to tackle these problems. As a result, even if one way of achieving the breakthrough in out space exploration would be to devote all research staff and available resource to this project, we have to struggle a balance between the worthiness of a goal and the proper way to obtain this goal.

The above statement is welcomed and readily embraced by the new trend of practicality since in a society where personal achievement is highly valued, we look more to ending than means. That is to say, people tend to neglect and forgive their own wrongdoings or others' wrongdoings in a sense that their goals are goodwill–intending and worthwhile. For one thing, for a personal, a society, or even a nation, even they consider things from a totally isolated or functional perspective, no matter how great achievement they obtain, they are selfish losers with nothing to be accomplished from the physiological point of view. In the second place, we observe too many cases where good intention result in total chaos derive not from the dirty tricks they construe but out of the improper means they take. Since the founding of

People's Republic of China, under the leadership of Chairman Mao, China has undergone a reform in the area of economy, which is to implement planned economy. Mao's intention is good, and his goal is to realize communalisms in this new country to short its economic gap with the western country in the shortest as possible. But without considering the properness of this means from the economic and social point of view, he threw china into years of economic regression and stillness. Ideas went contrary to our wills and intentions occasionally and thus make the consideration and full analyzes of the means to obtaining goals even pressing.

To sum up, I am against the speaker's assertion since he neglects one important aspect of how to evaluate goals. To devote to a worth goal is justifiable and the effort instilled in this process deserve our accolade since it is always this power that push the society forward. But by neglecting the means of how to obtain these goals, we put ourselves in an embarrassing place of functionalists and opportunists. As a result, it is highly resulted to look from different perspectives to figure our where the true value of a goal lies and how to achieve it.

新GRE寫作：冒險(xiǎn)與計(jì)劃

題目：

Success in any realm of life comes more often from taking chances or risks than from careful and cautious planning.

在生活的所有領(lǐng)域中，成功往往更多的來(lái)自于把握機(jī)會(huì)或者冒險(xiǎn)而不是通過(guò)仔細(xì)謹(jǐn)慎的計(jì)劃。

范文：

The speaker asserts people are more likely to attain success when taking chances or risks than planning carefully and cautiously. However, after comparing the characteristics of careful planning and taking chances, I strongly hold that they are of the same importance in the pursuit of success.

In competitive sports, while making appropriate training plans and effective competition strategies constitute necessary conditions of winning the matches, taking risks is almost inevitable when athletes or their coaches confront a sudden matter that might influence the course of a match and that has not been taken into consideration beforehand. In modern competitive sports, it is widely acknowledged that scientific and effective training contributes to athletes’ better performance during matches. Good competition strategies, on the other hand, resulting in the better allocation of physical force, better use of skills or the higher rate in scoring, also play a vital role.

However, when the star players of a soccer team or a basketball team are off the game or fail to implement their chief coach's strategic intention, leaving the whole team in adverseness, the coach faces the choice whether to substitute he/she or not. No doubt substituting a star player with a bench player means taking risk because the bench player may not perform as good as the star player and may make matters worse. If this happens, the substitution will incur discontentment of the players and critique from the team's fans, media and the boss. The capability of the coach may then be suspected and he/she may even be fired. Nevertheless, if the coach dares not to take the risk to substitute a poorly performed star player, his/her team will probably lose the game. Taking chances and risks is reasonable when one is dealing with something that has not been taken into consideration previously. So, in competitive sports, planning and risking are both necessary.

In academic fields, careful and cautious planning is required for large projects and application disciplines while revolutionary scientific breakthroughs are almost impossible without taking chances or risks. Before starting the research project on human genome, scientists had already made plans on the content and method of the research. They did not have to take any chances or risks because all they should do have already been carefully planned. There were no technical obstacles that had not been solved. Therefore, they just followed the plan step by step and accomplished the project in the end. As for significant scientific breakthroughs, they are the important discoveries and theories that disaccord, at least to some extent, with established principles or our intuitions, such as the Theory of Relativity and quantum mechanics. One has no choice but to take chances because established theories may not be applicable on the boundary of what is known and what is unknown. Only after being examined through experiments, practices and observations, can they be confirmed or belied. In a word, planning and taking chances or risks are different means for different levels of academic researches.

In the business world, cautious planning contributes to the long-term development of a company and at the same time, risking is imperative for a company to survive, develop and thrive in the highly competitive society. Planning carefully on inquiring market, training stuff and manufacturing products ensure a company's long-term development by keeping its profit increasing or at least not declining. On the other hand, taking risks, such as incorporating with another company, involving in the market fields that have already been occupied by other enterprises or involving in the market fields that are not considered so profitable, is also necessary because these may save the company from the adversity or help to set foot in new businesses. Clearly,in the business field, planning and risking complement each other.

To conclude, success in any realm of life comes equally from taking chances or risks and from careful and cautious planning. In most cases, they complement each other and pave the way towards success.

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