雅思小作文里的大智慧之活用簡單詞拿高分

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其實(shí)人們對于“妖怪”形象的認(rèn)識與我們對于“雅思圖表小作文”的正確認(rèn)識有著異曲同工之處。下面小編就和大家分享雅思小作文里的大智慧,來欣賞一下吧。

雅思小作文里的大智慧:活用簡單詞拿高分

詞;那么對于詞匯的要求是不是降低了?答案當(dāng)時是“No”.而是我們的詞匯需要“靈性”了。

我們一起來看看評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中9分檔對于詞匯的要求——use a wide range of vocabulary with very natural and sophisticated control of lexical features; rare minor errors occur only as “slips”. “natural and sophisticated control of lexical resources of lexical features”即“自然使用并且掌握詞匯特征”,詞匯的高分不是來源于“又難又專的高大上”而是 “妖怪一般的靈性”。這也就是為什么有的時候你的全文用了7,8種變化多端的“占據(jù)”相關(guān)表達(dá)、或者用了更多的“上升、下降”但是分?jǐn)?shù)卻不見本質(zhì)性改變的根本原因。下面讓我們通過劍橋雅思7 Test4的一篇考官范文來發(fā)現(xiàn)其中的奧秘吧。

The charts compare the sources of electricity in Australia and France in the years 1980 and 2000. Between these years electricity production almost doubled, rising from 100 units to 170 in Australia, and from 90 to 180 units in France.

妖怪1:double,triple這一類型的詞匯體現(xiàn)出了更為形象的數(shù)值本身的變化,比單純的“上升、下降更為準(zhǔn)確”,同時又比“上升,下降+數(shù)值”更加簡潔。準(zhǔn)確而且簡潔的表達(dá)完全可以稱的上是 “natural and sophisticated control of lexical resources of lexical features”的境界

In 1980 Australia used coal as the main electricity source (50 units) and the remainder was produced from natural gas, hydro power (each producing 20 units) and oil (which produced only 10 units). By 2000, coal had become the fuel for more than 75% of electricity produced and only hydro continued to be another significant source supplying approximately 20%.

妖怪2: produce, supply這些簡單的動詞是與“能量”對應(yīng)數(shù)值最恰當(dāng)?shù)拇钆浞绞?,并不是我們?jīng)常記憶的那些“占據(jù)”,因此小作文中我們將常會遇到考察的描述對象可能是“能量”或者“食品的銷量”,與這些最合適的搭配應(yīng)該是這些“靈氣滿滿”的動詞 produce,supply或者是 buy,sell,consume

In contrast, France used coal as a source for only 25 units of electricity in 1980, which was matched by natural gas. The remaining 40 units were produced largely from oil and nuclear power, with hydro contributing only 5 units. But by 2000 nuclear power, which was not used at all Australia, had developed into the main source, producing almost 75% of electricity, at 126 units, while coal and oil together produced only 50 units. Other sources were no longer significant.

妖怪3:A be matched by B 即A=B

妖怪4: contribute=produce

妖怪5:develop ,某一個描述對象所對應(yīng)的數(shù)值變得更主導(dǎo)了,我們可以用develop 寫出這里所呈現(xiàn)的正向發(fā)展

Overall, it is clear that by 2000 these two countries relied on different principal fuel sources: Australia relied on coal and France on nuclear power.

妖怪6:rely on,depend on 表達(dá)的是“使用量大”的終極總結(jié)。

這些詞匯其實(shí)大家在接觸,account for,constitute,之前早已掌握,只是還沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)他們在小作文中的天然用途吧,從今天起,這些詞匯也出現(xiàn)在你的文章中把,讓考官驚嘆一下,原來我們的文章中也會出現(xiàn)這些靈動的詞匯小妖怪!

雅思寫作常用詞匯總:交通類

交通類

1.automobile industry 汽車工業(yè)

2.boost the economic development 促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展

3.levy the tax 征稅

4.modernization 現(xiàn)代化

5.be viewed as … 被視為是…

6.be concerned about … 對…擔(dān)憂/關(guān)注…

7.pollution-free fuel 無污染燃料

8.luxury 奢侈品

9.chronic lead poisoning 慢性鉛中毒

10.fill… with … 使…充斥著

11.popularization of cars 汽車普及

12.lay more emphasis on… 把重心放在…

13.observe traffic regulations 遵守交通規(guī)則

14.break traffic regulations 違反交通規(guī)則

15.get struck in traffic 遇上堵車

16.rush hour 上下班高峰時間

17.ease the traffic pressure 緩解交通壓力

18.pedestrian 行人

19.pavement 人行道

20.zebra crossing 斑馬線

21.overspeed 超速行駛

22.bottleneck 交通堵塞地區(qū)

23.settle down effective laws 制定出積極有效的法律

24.impose restrictions on … 對…實(shí)施限制

25.short-sighted 目光短淺的

26.non-renewable resources 不可再生資源

27.carbon dioxide 二氧化碳

28.a pillar industry 支柱產(chǎn)業(yè)

29.make full use of … 充分利用

30.road networks 公路網(wǎng)

31.speed limits 限速

32.enhance the quality of life 提高生活質(zhì)量

33.pay a heavy price 付出慘痛的代價

34.promote the development of relative industries 促進(jìn)相關(guān)產(chǎn)業(yè)發(fā)展

35.traffic engineering 交通運(yùn)輸工程

36.the number of car ownership 汽車擁有量

37.call for … 需要…

38.overcrowded 過度擁擠的

39.violator 違規(guī)者

40.headache 令人頭痛的事

41.traffic accidents 交通事故

42.head-way 進(jìn)展

43.conflict with … 與…相沖突

44.major cause 主要原因

45.be replaced by … 被…所取代

46.provide convenience for … 為…提供便利

47.curb… 限制…

48.dilemma 進(jìn)退兩難

49.encourage somebody to do something鼓勵某人去做某事

50.energy-saving 節(jié)能的




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